Garionkane - Profile

I wish after over 100 page reads I could get into this story, but I just couldn't. The main MC is a idiot, whiny baby, complains about everything, and than when everything works out for him, just ignores all the whiny he did. Sorry, but if you really like whiny selfcentered character and screw anyone over, make one bad choice after another and just ignores the bad choice, than this story is for you.

The story is interesting, but the writing is disjointed. I can't figure out the character to be honest - but the biggest problem is that the chapters starting at 72 start repeating from earlier chapters.

The premise is interesting both the execution is awful. slow updates and the story seems to drag. the writer needs to spend more time understanding that folks don't want just one chapter a week.