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Seshata: This is most wonderful and amazing review I have ever read, and I am in tears that it’s about my own novel. Thank you so much! I am so grateful my words seem to be doing exactly what I intended! I legit started this bc I wanted to see a System that does exactly what you say: Support. Mostly, though, I’m so glad the emotional resonance is coming through. I work in schools, and I know the complexities of **** lives and trauma, and I wanted to write a story that authentically showed this...but with a touch of magic and the feeling that it can eventually get better.
I’m shocked that you aren’t a writer yourself! You have an amazing way with words. If you ever publish something, please let me know!
And again, thank you!Extra Time: Rise of a Champion
Zravodka: Thanks for the chapter coach... love zeke developmentThe Hitting Zone · C552
FictionOnlyReader: Link for the videos on Reverse Layup and Floater:
Make sure to like this comment so that it stays on the top.Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket · C24
Tiger_Eyes: You’re more than welcome and deserving of the review. This story is great and I will give Aiden undying love a support!
Doth mine eyes deceive me or is there some attraction with these boys?Extra Time: Rise of a Champion · C9
Charles2k: Just want to let you know that your novel as up my standards for not only the sports genre but novels in general your quality is 🔥🔥🔥🔥
As always Thank you for the chapter ☺The Hitting Zone · C546
Trailblazer4433: I think Kyle is realizing he's not good enough to go pro. It's why he dated Marie, why he broke up with her and pushed for the camps. He's desparate to prove that he's good enough, but consumed by the realization that maybe nothing will help him overcome that gap.The Hitting Zone · C546
Balfear: Nobody commented that Zeke staying 4years in college would allow Noah and Jake to play with him again ?The Hitting Zone · C546
Anachan: Although this book is still in its infancy stages (only 8 chapters so far) its so absolutely fabulous that I had to give a review. I usually don’t like system novels because I get the feel that the protagonist relies on it too much, losing their individuality and being just another overpowered host to the system, however this systems novel does exactly what systems are supposed to do: support! The system does not feel forced and it’s entire purpose is to bring out the potencial of the host, not turn him into something new. In other words, it provides the host with a good environment and resources for him to develop himself into a better version of himself, something that was unviable because of his toxic family but something that he always strove for and had the chance to become, the best soccer player in the world.
What makes this novel a real gem, however, is not the system, but the emotional connotation it has. It’s a blend of pure and untamed sadness with bright hope, determination and just the right amount of normalcy. And it’s not forced at all!!! (This is a big compliment because I can make an enormous list of novels which’s introductions I just skipped through because the sad background was way too forced, like an observer throwing out information of someone’s pitiful situation while just writing lots of words of self pity to try (keyword ‘try’)to put some feeling to the whole forced narration... ignore my rant) Anyway, the important thing is that feelings are not shown through descriptions, but through actions. Readers can understand and sympathize with the way the MC feels and thinks (even when we cannot relate, and I would hope no one could relate with MCs situation, but unfortunately the world isn’t all sunshine and rainbows). The individuality MC is present in all situations, and it can be observed by the simplest things, such as when he describes his school colleagues, they are not ‘tall and blue eyed’ ,they are ‘midfielders, forwards, defenders’. It’s descriptions such as these together with thoughts and actions clearly based on his life experiences and interests that turns the protagonist into more than just a character, he is a person, he’s Aidan.
The side characters are also nothing to scoff at, they are not physical appearance and clothes, they have their own personality and individuality. They go about life in their own way and the interactions they make between themselves and the MC are not absurd, they are normal, part of their daily lives. And I don’t say this as a way to imply the author fills the story with fillers (he does not!!), but as a compliment because it’s in daily interactions that our personality shows the most and the author uses this not only as a way to build character development but also as an important part of the story. All has a motive, conversations and thoughts are never useless additions, and it’s clear. The same way, the world development and character background is not built as an info dump, it’s seamlessly integrated with the flow of the story and only when you analyze it will you notice that you already know things you didn’t before, things that maybe weren’t even said, but were clearly understood.
I can only say that no matter who you are, if you stumbled upon this gem, it’s your obligation to give it a chance.Extra Time: Rise of a Champion
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Tiger_Eyes: This author has done it again!
I'm an avid fan of their other works, but this story in particular has a grip that won't let go.
From the first sentence, you know you're in for a journey through the darkest and yet, most hopeful sides of humanity; masterfully lacing witty one-liners with devastatingly terrible descriptions.
Author provides a new, fresh outlook on the reincarnation trope and an incredible grasp of sports knowledge, that will keep even non-sports folk enthralled with the story.
The characters feel real, the ******* is nail-bitingly wicked and you'll find yourself invested with the main character's struggle from the very start.
Well done and goooooaaaaaaaaaaal~Extra Time: Rise of a Champion
dust_sans: How the Fuck did you get top comment dude stop liking your own comments I saw them alot and it's annoying now so stop being a SHIT STAIN on this app like I know you got a opinion but stop saying your going to drop this when you keep coming here so how about you stop being a little annoying ASS-HOLE and STOP SPAMMING this novel
sorry for my language but you will probably continue this anyway It's was not very ICE to SEA you sorry if you are SALTY now just wanted TWO say that thank you for readingThe Pride of the Uzumaki Clan [Long Chapters] · C22
Sky_Sorvereing: I am the exp of my sword.
webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood.
I have created over a thousand useless review.
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have withstood pain to create many reviews.
Yet, those hands will never hold anything.
So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!The High Human
Seshata: Unfortunately, I based her off an actual CPS worker I knew at a school where I taught. I think she may have once been good at her job, but it’s like, she did it too long and stopped seeing kids as individuals. She was just doing the job out of habit, and never seemed to care. It was awful. Grr.Extra Time: Rise of a Champion · C6
LenaX: again with a chapter that mixes cool/happy soccer with epic sadness. this novel's gonna be an emotional roller coaster, i can tellExtra Time: Rise of a Champion · C6
JamesAnthony1999: This is a story I HAD to review. It was like part of me (a very big part) decided it was happening and when the lazy me started considering just putting it off until I eventually forgetting to write one (happens a lot) the first part pulled a figurative gun out and held the lazy part of my at figurative gunpoint to actually write a proper review.
So let me first mention how I binge read this novel hard. I literally put all other novels on hold for 2 days and even had to force myself just go get my daily free SS from webnovel check in etc.
The author does an amazing job describing scenes and stories. This honestly felt like I was drawn into on of my favourite tv shows or anime with how I just imagined everything in my head more than I felt I was actually reading, everything flows so well together it's as smooth as a dream would be.
The storyline is so well thought out, the world building is thorough but not too much and the author doesn't dump info on you, it's like every couple chapters there's a line or a few where it feels like setting the scene for just that part of the story but each time it's like a puzzle piece building up the world gradually until you suddenly realise how much worldbuilding has been going on without you thinking about it. It sounds like there's a lot of world guiding going on but actually there's not much. Enough to tell you what you need and want to know, nothing more or less. Exactly what you need without giving you too much to think about or not enough to understand the world.
Character development is so incredibly realistic and full of just pure raw emotions and some illogical moments that just make sense when thinking from the heart while others fit perfectly when thinking logically. The author just knows exactly how to mix the two perfectly and blend them together. At time focusing on one, then the other and sometimes switching between them quickly in relatable and amazingly way where it just flows and fits and makes so much sense for it to do so while drawing you into the story and the feelings and perspectives of the characters.
I have almost 0 issues with the writing quality. I think maybe a rare mistake here or there but I was too drawn into the story and focused my mind just corrected anything wrong subconsciously so I could keep reading without pause just to keep enjoying the amazing read that this novel provides.
When it comes so some worries some people (probably heterosexual guys like me) about possible male on male action then I can say as long as you aren't homophobic then you have nothing to worry about. It's not off putting in the least and worse case the author puts ample warning that allows you to skip anything you might be sensitive on.
A couple things to say to the author! Firstly the parts of some "Creators thoughts" at the end of a few chapters where you apologised for possible filler. I CAN'T SEE ANY FILLER! To me a filler is anything that does not progress the story and just increases word count. This novel however is done so beautifully where everything has a purpose. Either giving information or an opinion/perspective a character that heels progress the plot or explains emotions and why characters act the way they do, it's done perfectly and to even consider these chapters being given that label of "Filler" is not giving the novel (and especially the author) nearly enough credit.
Something an author once told me when I asked for writing tips was to reduce wasted words. If it doesn't need to be there and doesn't progress the story then delete it. I have yet to find a single wasted word in this novel and I doubt I ever will see a wasted word from this author as long as they continue to have the same passion for writing as they have now.
Lastly I would like to say that this has got be one of my favourite novels yet and I cant wait for more chapters. Even if you aren't sure I ask you just sit down and read this novel for an hour. You won't regret it.New Life : A Second Chance
PsyberRose: Oh mah gosh, Troops! So mean. 🤣🤣 Poor twins.New Life : A Second Chance · C830
krAdchii: Okay, let's wait how this goes ✨ excited 😆New Life : A Second Chance · C830
Invisiblevoice: I know! Yet nobody else knows except his people. I feel like i'm watching a spy movie.The Muggleborn Conspiracy · C64
Jaren376: Because everyone would realize that Ye Feng and Black Flame are one and the same. If they had the exact same skills even an idiot would realise, which would destroy the image that Zero Wing has two Void Realm experts, thus becoming less of a threat in others eyes. So no, he didn't become an idiot, he is being smart, after all if he shows power equal to Black Flame's even with less skills, he'll appear even more dangerous in the eyes of the other apex experts.Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C793
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Lord_Allheavens: realmente gostei, a melhor fan fic que eu encontrei nesse site ultimamente, algumas nao ficam boas porque so pensa em harem, eles nao tentam desenvolver muito a historiaFire Emblem: The Lion's Blade
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Jmwells2003: Here’s the thing, I’ve pointed out several times that Alex’s memories have been constantly fading. Had he made it to 15 years old they would have been gone completely. If you remember 15 is the age he died.
And Alex has a choice to make, he could lose his memories of his family, or he could sacrifice what little remained from his previous life. He chose this life.Rebirth in a Magical World · C69
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020_FM: I really like the concept that you made up for memory charms and occlumency.Rebirth in a Magical World · C66
Wonderkind: It's normal, unless you are like us, who read light novels everydayTechnomancer: Genesis · C3
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