Aaron313

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why take away bells op development skill? there's no need to deliberately nerf him just to make the mc look better,hah Chinese mc syndrome

ch 91 [91] Aspiring Wholeheartedly!

Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?

Anime & Comics · XElenea

Aaron313

1mth

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good job following through to the end

ch 781 Chapter 781 – Epilogue

Aaron313

2mth

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just have him kill high level demons and angels and absorb their soul to get stronger

ch 42 Chapter 41

Aaron313

2mth

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so you can literally make a barrier that passively filter out all things the user deems harmful to the body including light and sound and even nuclear fallout when he was 10 years old ,but gets taken down by a gas which is much easier to get rid of by comparaison? also if the entire base is filled with the stuff why are none of the subordinate ninjas affected? if you wanted him to get captured for being too arrogant do it against someone who would actually pose a challenge(l would ve accepted this better from darkside at least could've said it was some different dimension poison or something even though vector control can literally stop dark matter from a different dimension but still...) but anyway I guess this is your way of introducing tension and him gaining the black wings even though it was super forced? also don't say the underlyings have an antidote or are immune cause if that's the case tom should be been knocked out immediately after entering the base, contrary to What you are trying to portray vector control doesn't improve the base condition of the human body that is to say without it tom and accelerator himself are just normal human beings so either the barrier was up and filtered the poison completely or it didn't at all ie mc should have been feeling its effect as soon as it was spread.

ch 201 CHAPTER 198

Aaron313

2mth

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filling in word count huh

"Guess, I'll take the potato chip and EAT IT! " He chuckled as he mimicked the legendary scene and started munching on them- yeah, all that while Yoo Jin was running for her life...

Aaron313

2mth

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no that's just you

He was really happy with this gift, every person at some point in their life, wanted to wear an Iron Man suit and fly.

Aaron313

3mth

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horus hmmm lvl monster deck is fresh

ch 39 Where Have I Been? (AUTHOR)

Aaron313

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screwing over even more people

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One Piece: My wife is Nico Robin[Dropped]

Anime & Comics · WeedSmokah

Aaron313

4mth

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I Imagine you can grab her with haki with haki to

"I do what I want, that's how!" Alex answered, though he was really using Spirit magic to touch her, and to make her feel pleasure despite not having a physical body at the moment.

Aaron313

4mth

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thanks for the update

ch 266 CHAPTER 261(Gold Chain Gang Raid Pt II)

Aaron313

4mth

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Don't do it. its's been confirmed she is jailbait

Though he couldn't recall the details, Alex did know she had a relationship with Bartholomew Kuma, and the upper ranks of the Marines were interested in her for some reason.

Aaron313

6mth

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not really, even if you did tell it's not like they can do anything about it ur just trying to make look more cool by faking mysteriousness

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Aaron313

7mth

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there are demonic swords as well, as a devil why does he think he can mesh well with holy weapons?

Still, if possible, he wanted to learn more about the holy swords and how to make them.

Aaron313

7mth

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Ah hem at the very least she scales around high tier ultimate class and low tier maoh class

While she didn't want to admit it, she knew she didn't have a chance to defeat him.

Aaron313

8mth

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nah last few chapters been pretty exciting,but you know you gotta end this with all the anticipation building up, right? Across heaven and earth only he is honored one

ch 30 Mission VIII; Battle continues

Reborn as Gojo Satoru in Chainsaw Man

Anime & Comics · David_555

"Nice try but no." Faluel shook her head. "The Fringe is rich in world energy which makes it the perfect place to learn how to tap into the Hands' full potential. If things go south, between me and Solus it would take a natural disaster to stop our escape."

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Fantasy · Legion20

Aaron313

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that's cool it's your fic, I'll just leave you a quote that you may or may not listen to "when everyone is super,no one is

"Yep, I make this into Pseudo Divine Manifestation bloodline ability. This means anyone who will have my blood will have a way to manifest something similar to what I can do now at an extremely small age AND cultivation." He explained with a proud tone. He just brought over Stands/Martial Spirits into Primal Chaos!

ATG Redux: 'Average' Young Master

Book&Literature · Dragon15681

Aaron313

8mth

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she ain't that hot

Morok handed the violet robe to her.

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Aaron313

8mth

Replied to Dragon15681

literally hundreds you didn't read very far into the original did you?

"Yep, I make this into Pseudo Divine Manifestation bloodline ability. This means anyone who will have my blood will have a way to manifest something similar to what I can do now at an extremely small age AND cultivation." He explained with a proud tone. He just brought over Stands/Martial Spirits into Primal Chaos!

ATG Redux: 'Average' Young Master

Book&Literature · Dragon15681

Aaron313

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literally hundreds you didn't read very far into the original did you

"Yep, I make this into Pseudo Divine Manifestation bloodline ability. This means anyone who will have my blood will have a way to manifest something similar to what I can do now at an extremely small age AND cultivation." He explained with a proud tone. He just brought over Stands/Martial Spirits into Primal Chaos!

ATG Redux: 'Average' Young Master

Book&Literature · Dragon15681

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