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BlueScorpion: Thanks for the chapter, I like the new version.
Waiting next chapIllimitable Fantasy Works · C17
NP_3228: Liking the way its heading. Keep up the good work.Illimitable Fantasy Works · C17
Illimitable Fantasy Works · C17
Our Bonds (A Kantai Collection Fanfic) · C52
BlueScorpion: Thanks for the chapter, I like the change you make in this part of the story, now instead of the mc being the strongest he is just one of the many participants in the game.
Just one question, isn't the game just to unbalanced to actualy put claire in the same dungeon as the new participant?
Pandora take people in the same dungeon World based on the place they are? I think in last chapter you wrote that every participant in the área received the notice of the dungeon so I asume that if this is the method that Pandora uses to put people together then guilds will try to be as far as posible of participants of a higher range than them.
Also as it is your story you could even make an even more interesting war creating another group of masters.
Think it would be more interesting if it was a 3 or even 4 way war.Illimitable Fantasy Works · C16
Fellas: Yes. She's indeed to OP. There will be limitations placed on higher-ranking Participants however...Illimitable Fantasy Works · C16
Fellas: Hm, i guess she just entered because she's nearby. Previously, i made it so that mc will be the sole player to let me ignore other Participants... while it's indeed true that mc will meet other Participants at later date.
However, i change it in this version. I am gonna add other Participants in every world he enters. Although there will be limitations for higher-ranked ones... or it will only be bullyingIllimitable Fantasy Works · C16
MJAgo: Now i just have 2 wishes;
1- he go back to his wives before his children get born.
2- and since he is immortal and will live for eternity so he doesn't need a son to succeed him so i wish all his children be girl so he can live in his castle like a heaven filled with beautiful women hohohoho...The Wish of the Dragon · C95
NP_3228: don't you think its a bit much to throw Clair into the dungeon with rafi? According to dungeon count, rafi is still a beginner compared to her. The other participants can be excused as they are typical cannon fodder but there should be some limit on matching between participants to be a fair system. At least there should be handicaps given to weaker players. Like in terror infinity, only after the guide chooses a leader do they start doing team battle worlds. Throwing bronze players into a map with platinums is asking for a GM complantsIllimitable Fantasy Works · C16
Illimitable Fantasy Works · C16
NulZilch: Imo it's a good decision. I complained about the ridiculous level of OPness and stuff he was getting just on the 15th chapter.
We all want a cool and OP mc, but too much of it makes the story stupid. My suggestion is please give him few(or just 1 or 2) powers but make him use them. A kryptonian physique was enough for him in the OP world as far as physical strength was concerned.
Also please try to tone down the xianxia description of MC. In the last one you spent many chapters about how he learned peak of this and that, how his body was peak of this and that with no wasted movements, and how he had a halo where everyone just stop and looks at him. You even wrote about how he was a pure soul and therefore his judgment couldn't be affected by negative emotions yet the moment a woman said be respectful he lost his cool and started spouting cringy chinese MC lines.
My 2 cents.Fiction Worlds Journey · C1
Dimensional Paradise · C98
Fellas: Thanks for your input. It's much appreciated 😀Illimitable Fantasy Works · C15
Illimitable Fantasy Works · C15
Hokonoso: Why did I feel the author's pain when Rafi talked about gacha hell. Also why did it make me cry?Illimitable Fantasy Works · C0
BlueScorpion: I like the story, just found it today but I would really recomend only using one piece powers and not other anime systems.
Aside from that I really like that the mc wants his crew member to be strong as I hate the novels where the side caracteres are there only for the mc to look more strong as any other person is just trash compared with him.
And try to balance the power scale as many novels die early because the mc just did nothing and he already has the power to destroy the World.
Just try to make it right so the novel can continue for a long time.
Aside from that, remmember that not all the strong people in one piece are there because of devil fruits, make some crew member weapon masters or Martial artist.
And the last thing I want to say is make carrot part of the harem. Non-humans are the best.
Good luck waiting for next chspterOne Piece: Harem King · C22
One Piece: Harem King · C22
Hamada: Mc should put some plans foe konan and Nonō Yakushi aswellNaruto: Jin's Path · C10
Azrail: Forget those points for a moment.....
I don‘t understand why he doesn‘t get them both......
Useless things such as monogamy have nothing to do with powerful dbz characters.......
They set the rules and no one else......
There is no reason that he can‘t get them both.......Dragon Ball: Saga Of The Strongest Human · C51
exceed12: No harem no life !!! This is fantasy genre super powers etc. Who want it just adventure when you reincarnated just fighting novel became repeated.Romance and harem good addition to story.and harem not need a lot of women just having bulma,18,21 is good and manageable.Dragon Ball: Saga Of The Strongest Human
Virgo_Shaka: why not go for a mythical zoan deagon Ra i mean the one from yu gi oh god of sun can use golden flames to regenerate himself but burn others he have the power of sun can shot cruel sun from escanor and rising sun from feite hxh and emitt heat of sun while glowing golden light and can shoot heat rays (golden rays) and in huma form can be like logia sun you know sun is golden glowing magma fire liquid (normal magma is thick) and sun magma is liquid like water as for how can it be logia (it's not) but his sun magma would heal wounds instantly like marco phoenix like this and his Ra dragon form like in yu gi oh 60-100 meter height
another suggestion is bone bone ( bones as strong as steel) can generate bone spikes in a certain range and create skeleton army can create different height up to 20 meter height and there us bons parasite that is create a small bone insects that enter others and control them through their skeleton and there is bone trap grow skeleton hands on the ground in a certain field that trap enemies in them also there he can create creatures from bones like sea kings or even bone dragons and all it's a good fruitOne Piece: New Beginning · C2
Conqueror of All · C132
Akashic · C124
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