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I hope your knife or something like that is safe ...
Thanks for the chapter. Very short chapter, more please! View More
Survive the apocalypse with a system · C17
4 hours ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Ring View More
No Time[BL] · C65
5 days ago
HAHAHAHA! View More
Demon Emperor's Wild Husband · C21
5 days ago

MXMentalStanderd: Story is translated on babel novel 400+ chaps quite enjoyable but albeit slow and alot of military descriptions ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

Hegemony in Apocalypse
1 month ago
And where do I read the original novel? View More

NinjaKittens: not original - copied a different person's translation.
Sucky thing to do. Read elsewhere.
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The Doom Lord
1 month ago

KoFu_: Writing Quality: Barely readable. Sure there is not a lot of grammar mistakes, but the way he writes is awkward at best. The author really needs an editor, or he needs to edit his past chapters. It was tiring to read, I wanted to enjoy the novel, but the grammar errors really threw me off.
Also, he doesn't separate Info dumps of stats, so it really messes with the flow of the story. 2/5

Updates: So-so. Not a lot but not so little. No consistency of releases though.
3/5

Story: A go-to-the-past-and-fix-everything-novel. Not original but not good enough to stand out in the mountain of these types of novels.
Generally, in these types of novels, the MC doesn't have anything special about him, only the knowledge of the future. So he uses that to his advantage. But our dear author thought that that wasn't enough! He gave the MC 45 levels stats being lvl 1. one unique skill (Basically RE: Monster, killing something gives you skills or stats so your status page will be as long as an entire volume in little time), a couple of more skills (because why not?) and apparently he's surrounded by his friends who are also talented! Did you want more? 4 chapters in and he's already leading a group of 100 people that they entirely trust the MC because of STRONG MC! MUST SUCK DICK!
1/5

Character Desing: Generic MC with no personality what-so-ever. Cringe lines like "Oh thank god you are not dead, I mean...follow me, my minions!" And they just accept being lead by that.
He has a unique skill no? I have to suppose that some people do the moment the doomsday arrives...So he's not worried about one of the irregulars is in his group? Oh right, he is perfect. Nothing is capable of making a dent on him.
1/5

World Background: Meh, no existent. Only put 3 stars to maintain a 2 stars classification.


RECOMMENDATIONS:
1- Edit your chapters properly. You really need to do it before keep writing.

2- Put some logic in the actions of the MC and be more interactive with the side characters.

3- Put some kind of obstacle or trouble. He's already too OP and doesn't even sweat.

Humanity's last hope
1 month ago

memberberry: This chapter was a disaster.

Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS) · C40
1 month ago

Angor_Mike: ughh, I'm kinda annoyed that they are always suspecting he's doing things cause of quests now...

Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS) · C40
1 month ago

Morggyb: Rose is a weight

Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS) · C40
1 month ago

ErozothDraeor: He wasted points on oil so they can to sleep later?

Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS) · C40
1 month ago
Quiero saberlo también... View More

Rico321: Eles vão desenvolver poderes ou evoluir fisicamente?

Outbreak Chronicles: Dead Pandemic · C9
1 month ago

Rico321: Eles vão desenvolver poderes ou evoluir fisicamente?

Outbreak Chronicles: Dead Pandemic · C9
1 month ago

Froschmo: Thank your for the feedback! I will try harder, especially my grammar lol

The Black Out
1 month ago

SnoozySloth: I'm a straight man and this is the first time I ever read BL. Upon starting I was a bit worried. Would I catch the big gay? (That's a meme. No offense meant LGBTQ community). Fortunately, I made it through all six chapters without questioning my sexuality.

Okay. All jokes aside, the story is actually quite interesting. An apocalypse mystery novel with a smart surgeon and yandere ex-prisoner BF. The BL seemed like an addition to the novel as opposed to the main story, which I appreciated.
I've scored the story below:
Writing Quality 3/5: The story suffers a bit here. I feel like the author might speak English as their second language? There are frequent grammatical issues that sound weird in my head when I read them. However, the author also has really good descriptions for what's happening. The grammatical mistakes are also minor enough to still easily understand what's happening. The best way I can describe it is that it reads kind of like a novel that's been translated by a newbie translator that speaks English as their 2nd language.
Stability of Updates 5/5. I think updates are fairly frequent from what I can see? Seems to be a brand new novel.
Story Development 5/5: The novel excels in story telling. The story is what kept me reading.
Character design 5/5: Characters are interesting, but I feel they can be fleshed out a bit more. It's still early though, so I may be jumping the gun in that judgement. I hope yandere BF doesn't go full-rapist. He's already a bit creepy with how he does things. Then again, it's an apocalyptic world and he's a psychopath. Not all characters are meant to be loved. I believe the author should do what he feels is best for his story.
World Background: 5/5. Just like the story, the world background is excellent. The descriptions for describing the surroundings were excellent and I felt like I could see everything vividly. Excellent work.

My final thoughts for the author: Keep writing and reading. Work a bit on your English and I think the books quality will soar. The story itself was much better than I expected. If you ever move out of the BL Genre, then I wouldn't be surprised if you could build a fan-base around your story development and world building alone.

The Black Out
1 month ago
I do not understand yet. Are the chapters cut? From chapter 22, jump to 73 ?? 🙈🙈😰 View More
Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 2 · C23
3 months ago
That's stupid.
And to think I'd read it all in this manga.😡 View More
Battle of Ascension · C58
3 months ago

Mexulexi: I promise I won't drop it

A Gatekeeper and The Celestial Sovereign
3 months ago
😍😍😍😍 thanks for the chapter!
Li Jun don't go! 😢😍 View More
Demon Emperor's Wild Husband · C16
4 months ago
What a retarded protagonist.
What is the reason to hide? Insurance for malnacido. Nothing more.
How much loss he will have afterwards. His friends died for something...
Now he's going to kill his parents... To his father who goes hunting and to his mother who worries...😣😣😣😣😡😡😡😡😧😧😧😧
Luckily the atmosphere of the plot is very good. It is also something new the way in which the End of the Earth is told and all that...
The way in which they have to survive gives many opportunities to live and is not all death and hopelessness hahahaha
I hope the protagonist gains a little more brain in the near future. ..😥 View More
Battle of Ascension · C24
4 months ago
It's going to be 4 months in a few days from the last chapter ... 😢😢😢 View More

Meliodas5: No, I just have exams next week that's why I wasn't able to publish any chapter for a while.
But I promise to make it up for you guys after the exams.

Humanity's last hope · C11
4 months ago

Sofien: From what I've read so far, I believe that this novel definitely has potential and if it is done right it could be pretty good. So all that's left is to wait for more chapters. Hopefully, it will be a good one.

Humanity's last hope
4 months ago

KILLER153: Apocalypse + game elements+ OP and caring MC+ reincarnation. OMG!!!!! My favorite.
And let's not forget the interesting story so keep it up, author.

Humanity's last hope
4 months ago

Meliodas5: Hello guys, I am the author of this novel.
Since this is my first time writing a novel and since I am also a university student I can't write frequently, but I will try my best to release more chapters every week but I guess for now I can only publish at most 4 chapters a week. But I promise to increase the release rate in the future.
Thanks for checking out this novel and thanks for your support.

Humanity's last hope
4 months ago
''The ceiling barely reached Lance's head, who happened to be the tallest in the party.'' ?? Wasn't Darius the tallest? So much did Lance grow in the month!?????😲😲😲😲
Thanks for the chapter! ! View More
Invincible Earth! · C37
4 months ago
Hahahaha yea 😂 View More

Wandering_Traveler: This chapter is confusing...

At first i was like "Huh?"
Then i was like "Wut?"
and finally at the end of the chapter i was like "Aaaah..."

Carefree Path of Dreams · C79
4 months ago

Wandering_Traveler: This chapter is confusing...

At first i was like "Huh?"
Then i was like "Wut?"
and finally at the end of the chapter i was like "Aaaah..."

Carefree Path of Dreams · C79
4 months ago
True. The MC is killing me. 😱😥 View More

FreakReader21: MC IS BROCKEN CHARACTER.. RETARD LIKE 5 YRS OLD..

But I keep reading like finding good-egg/bad-egg in every novel I read But this.. wuuu.. I can't recommended this for my friend..

Battle of Ascension · C15
4 months ago

FreakReader21: MC IS BROCKEN CHARACTER.. RETARD LIKE 5 YRS OLD..

But I keep reading like finding good-egg/bad-egg in every novel I read But this.. wuuu.. I can't recommended this for my friend..

Battle of Ascension · C15
4 months ago

ColdShadow1_1000: I definitely love this novel and its story was out of this world!
The way the characters were developed were intriguing and fascinating!
The whole story sends to a roller coaster ride to endless mysteries and unpredictable events, I am supporting this novel and the author and I would recommend other people to read this novel!

The Black Out
4 months ago

HYBRIDANIME: Wow is all I have to say! I am really intrigued with this story line! As I read I can picture it all happening in my head, the action, the characters! Love it all!! Keep up the good work author!! Can't wait for the next update! So excited!

The Black Out
4 months ago
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