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Pksr: Author's choice , although you have already written I discovered it late. 😜😜
Brilliant slice of life man, I was feeling down today when discovered this hidden gem , pepped my mood right back up 😁😁Knight in Another World · C34
wynaut: Well I'm kinda late, but I just discovered this story and read it in around 10 hours. Yeah I'm tired rn...
I still don't know if I preferred the story in itself, the comments, or the little plays at the end of some chapters. Anyway, much love even though you put Dylan in the friendzoneKnight in Another World · C113
Genius Doctor: Black Belly Miss · C2260
NonstopReader: That’s okay Regis, take your time. At least you don’t randomly drop it without announcement, and I thank you for that. Writing is a process, it’s never easy.. **Cough** I suck at essays and writing books xd
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NonstopReader: I'm kinda confused on which direction this story is going.
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NonstopReader: I'm kinda confused on which direction this story is going.
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mFearXD: I added thia novel to my library 1 week ago... was hoping for a stockpile of chapters....
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mFearXD: I added thia novel to my library 1 week ago... was hoping for a stockpile of chapters....
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NonstopReader: @ImmortalRegis Sorry for the late arrival! I've been pretty busy and just logged onto today. Anyways, onto the book reading I go!
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Safir_Himmel: Don't worry, and thanks for the chapter!
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WidestGrin: Okayyy.......
I wasn't expecting it to turn out this way..... Thought it was just gonna be the usual merchant type and store keeping with a bit of drama about finding rare plants to sell and create an empire......The Villainous Cruz Family · C0
WidestGrin: Well... the synopsis seemed fine. I can't really say anything about the plot yet since it's still just the first chapter. I guess I'll be brief then.
There are many readers who read on their mobiles. It would be easier on the eyes if there were more spacings. You could put 2-4 lines in one paragraph. It doesn't really matter as that is the normal format for a webnovel anyway.
Since this is a novel that tells the story of a shopkeeper of a flowershop, it needs to have a lot mote details. That is especially true about the background and the shopkeeper himself. It's these finer details that will make the story all the more charming. Here is an example:
"The shrill screeching of the old lady pierced the ears of passerbys. The little police officer tried to restrain her as she whacked the purse-snatcher with the very same purse he had swiped. People watched on, amused at the distress of the little officer.
Right across the chaotic scene, stood a tiny small and peaceful flowershop. Its plain glass door and sweet smelling flowers created a stark contrast to the happenings that were directly opposite it."
All I did was stretch it a little, added in a few 'non-repetitive details'- and there you have it. I won't tell you how to write. You are the author so you make the judgement. The above bit is just an example. Think of it as fan-fiction. Oh. Wait. Did I just write that for a book that just has one chapter?????The Villainous Cruz Family · C0
WidestGrin: Well... the synopsis seemed fine. I can't really say anything about the plot yet since it's still just the first chapter. I guess I'll be brief then.
There are many readers who read on their mobiles. It would be easier on the eyes if there were more spacings. You could put 2-4 lines in one paragraph. It doesn't really matter as that is the normal format for a webnovel anyway.
Since this is a novel that tells the story of a shopkeeper of a flowershop, it needs to have a lot mote details. That is especially true about the background and the shopkeeper himself. It's these finer details that will make the story all the more charming. Here is an example:
"The shrill screeching of the old lady pierced the ears of passerbys. The little police officer tried to restrain her as she whacked the purse-snatcher with the very same purse he had swiped. People watched on, amused at the distress of the little officer.
Right across the chaotic scene, stood a tiny small and peaceful flowershop. Its plain glass door and sweet smelling flowers created a stark contrast to the happenings that were directly opposite it."
All I did was stretch it a little, added in a few 'non-repetitive details'- and there you have it. I won't tell you how to write. You are the author so you make the judgement. The above bit is just an example. Think of it as fan-fiction. Oh. Wait. Did I just write that for a book that just has one chapter?????The Villainous Cruz Family · C0
Safir_Himmel: Thank you so much for this wonderful story :)
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Ramzawing: wait what, i was away for not even one week and it ends? Where i will get my fix now?
Anyway, thanks for the history and im looking forward to any future ones you have o/~Knight in Another World · C113
WidestGrin: Alright. I'll believe you for now. I'll wait for the next one. (*Cleaning and polishing all assassination equipment.*
*Doing maintenance of guns and tanks*)Knight in Another World · C113
YoungestKing: Oh snap I was out of continent! and missed all of this!!!! WTH it's over oh goddddddddddd where was IIIIIII!!!!!
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NonstopReader: Can you please explain why you decided to abruptly end the story like this?
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mFearXD: Better make a new story or its hunting time...
I have my shotgun ready anyone would like to join on hunting the author?Knight in Another World · C113
ai_dyah: How about making spin off mathias and janine? I would like to see his invention merging tech and magic! Anyway thank you for your hardwork author!
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WidestGrin: I am sad, disappointed and feel really let down by this chapter. Why was there such an abrupt end? What did they do with their lives? How did they cope with the new world? What happened to Matthias? Did he end up with Anyone? Will Fir die lonely with no partner?
What of the unsolved matters in the other world? And Sherry's parents?
I read this story and invested a lot of emotions in it and had daydreams about it. I don't know why but I just can't accept this end. It should have gone on a little longer. I feel awful now.
With such a sudden conclusion, the story just breaks off. What was the point of it? I feel like crying injustice for the story.Knight in Another World · C113
bebel: Omg , my heart, thanks so so much for your hard work, I will remember this amazing history for the rest of my life, thanks for the smiles you gave me .
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Ritschichi: thanks for the story... if you write another story cann you comment on this comment to let me know? pls
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AllenNeedsToWakeUp: Any new stories planned?
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