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Ohh I didn’t mean to hurt u author 🙀. I see, your explanation does make sense. Honestly that was just me nitpicking. Everything else is a work of art. Can’t wait for more chapters!

This story has a really nice plot and amazing plot. There are some scenes that fail to create the right ambiance; like in parts where everyone is serious and suddenly the couple gets lovey dovey thus coming off cringey (maybe its just me). Nonetheless I really enjoyed most of the family’s interactions, especially the snu snu parts. Another thing I’d like to point out is that character that always swears. Honestly, I get it there is a person like that in real life but they dont just use one swear word. I did notice some readers pointing it out and the author just says its his ‘character’. The point is this character has so much potential to be liked by many readers but because of the poor choice of words we tend to just censore his lines and regard it as meaningless. No importance. Really, just adding different cuss words can at least make him look more ‘intelligent’ (more swear vocab). Maybe that way we’ll find him a bit more likable and at least entertaining. Besides that, great story, great characters. Keep up the good work author.