Death_Scythe - Profile

Average at best, so many things he did and so many things happened but the result is that it's just the same in the canon, what's the point of getting reincarnated and almost half of the story currently dedicated to his training and mastering jutsus and he can't change a damn thing in the story to makes this more interesting. Felt like the story will stay the same him being below the the OG strong characters and he will do nothing about it but hide and flaunts his fuckin careful, cowardly, and "i dont want relationships in this ninja world because it can get me killed" nature. I bet the story will go the same as the canon but we will have the MC training and training again and again and still find himself inferior of the strong OG characters, so author can have the reason to continue doing this routine again and again until this story goes from outer space. 🤷‍♂️

Well it's possible to have 5 pitchers in a team but the point is that they must all be first string players (the main team). That's why i said earlier aside from there's too many pitchers, there's also only 3 slots left for the first string. That's why it's hard to make a great DNA fanfiction especially a self insert pitcher since the team has only limited slots unless you want make it in another era like Rei same year with Yuuki, Chris and others (the 3rd years in original) or Rei same with Miyuki or Rei with another team. Adding a pitcher in the same year with Sawamura and Furuya will make the Seidou team full of pitchers but can't use all of them. Sawamura, Rei, Kawakami, Tanba (ace) and Furuya that's 5 pitchers and i don't know how will you distribute the playing time.

lol Seidou without Sawamura is like One piece without Luffy, he's the MC for a reason and their future ace, him not playing competitive for his whole first year means slower progression, no yips arc results into a weaker Sawamura. Well, it's your story man, your story your choice.

i mean you have no choice there since Miyuki will be the one who will be the main catcher. Chris is already injured and won't play in his last year, so i don't know how can you make a battery with him, the only time Rei can make battery with Chris are games in friendly matches or training. Unless you make Chris never got injured but that will make Miyuki as a reserve catcher since the main catcher can be only one. Also there's a thing about the first string, at the moment there are only 3 slots left originally that was taken by Sawamura, Furuya and Haruichi but since Rei (MC) is in Seidou you need to make an adjustment there. P.S Chris isn't in first string since he is injured.

then most likely it will be a mess since there's too many pitchers and also making a battery with Chris it means that Sawamura will practice with other catcher. There are only 3 catchers that are good catchers right now, they are Chris, Miyuki and Miyauchi and with 5 pitchers Rei, Sawamura, Furuya, Kawakami and Tanba i don't know how will you make it work. There's also Ono but Ono only improved after the Chris retired, that gave him opportunity to train with Sawamura that's why he's able to catch Sawamura and Furuya pitches in his 2nd year.

First, may i know what year did Rei join Seidou? i mean is he in the same year as Miyuki and Kuramochi or same as Sawamura and Furuya? because Chris only played during his first year and second year in Seidou after that he got injured.

lol Steve not doing anything about mycah's death is BS, Steve is not a saint but he was good man so him not doing anything and forgetting about mycah's death was big BS. Looks like these so called "some questionable, some noble, etc actions or decisions" will be nonsense forced plots that will forcibly portray a different Steve.

First of all, I'm not talking about his sentiments about his new family, i was talking how forced the plot was and did you even read the prologue. He died when he was 15 years old, still a kid, he didn't even forget the "family" he had when he was still Shin, even though he didn't experience a complete family and his father left him with debts still he loved his family. Now he was reborn as Yahiko, at first he struggled but eventually accepted his new life with loving parents and this goes on for 8 years, now tell me a kid who lacks parental love and forced to work odd jobs at such a young age and be reborn as yahiko with loving parents and for 8 years, you expect him to not have a feelings for his new parents? LOL