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OMG this cliff hanger is insaneeee. Don't leave us hanging for too long thanks for the chapter the fighting scenes were awesome! <333333 View More

Leixein: Is it just me or webnovel is veryyyyy slow nowadays? It is so buggy whenever i use my pc to open it... it even wont let me release this chapter from my pc. Keeps saying complete your novel story first~

Anyway, sorry for those whos hoping for nyaruko-chan to be nyarlathotep form but i honestly cant imagine that nyarko being all serious lol...

Sorry for the long delay and i hope you guys enjoy the first part of the fight.

I honestly find it really hard to write and describe prolonged fighting scene such as this especially since my vocab is extremely limited... so if its bad i apologize because this is the best i could do.

With that said, peace out girls scout!

The Wish of the Dragon · C93
2 days ago

Leixein: Is it just me or webnovel is veryyyyy slow nowadays? It is so buggy whenever i use my pc to open it... it even wont let me release this chapter from my pc. Keeps saying complete your novel story first~

Anyway, sorry for those whos hoping for nyaruko-chan to be nyarlathotep form but i honestly cant imagine that nyarko being all serious lol...

Sorry for the long delay and i hope you guys enjoy the first part of the fight.

I honestly find it really hard to write and describe prolonged fighting scene such as this especially since my vocab is extremely limited... so if its bad i apologize because this is the best i could do.

With that said, peace out girls scout!

The Wish of the Dragon · C93
2 days ago
Omg author best wishes hope you get well soon. <3333 View More
His Genius Wife is a Superstar · C485
2 days ago
I like how you had baraqiel move on. Thanks for the chapter. View More
The New Issei · C21
3 days ago

dragonmage124: You should not go overboard of girl plans ....and miya and maya are old enough to be his mother 1 of which is already dying from natural means so you might as well remove her since and her sister unless you want to have him foolishly have thrown himself onto the radar of all major world powers. (Besides he is still a kid not yet old enough to enter high school and lots of the names you want for him seem to be from big families that would want someone with high magic talents and other factors like loyalty to their house not marrying into a large number of houses that no major family or governing body will let happen on the grounds of power balance...unless you show by the time he is in highschool political means to deal with all the red tape and personal power that can beat all the families even if they work together while hopeing they do not send people to kill the girls when they no they would have to work with other major families to have a chance at killing him [might even try to collect hair and blood to see what is genetically different and if they can make an artificial version if not should they plot to take his kids or force them to marry into their families )

New Life In Mahouka Koukou No Rettousei, The Way To The Harem! · C7
1 week ago
More chapter please I can't take this cliffhanger!!!!! View More
His Genius Wife is a Superstar · C470
1 week ago

Manolo15: You are annoying. You are always and you only have the same comment.

Harem harem and more harem.

Please, stop.

Devil Emperor · C1
1 week ago
Haha I just rambled on and wrote what ever came to mind. If it gave you any ideas and stuff all I can say is that I'm glad I could help. Keep writing I enjoy your work!! <33333 View More

Writing_Scion: I would try and do this in future chapter

Beast of Winter : The White Death (DxD FanFic) · C0
1 week ago

AdrianLopez: Thx for chapter

Beast of Winter : The White Death (DxD FanFic) · C0
1 week ago

Nidian: Thanks for the Chapter 👍😁

Beast of Winter : The White Death (DxD FanFic) · C0
1 week ago

Syynergyy: Here is some advice. Your novel is good however everything can always be improved.

In this chapter the main character went from a weakened position to becoming relatively strong. As someone who read this chapter I didn't experience any of the struggles the MC did during his long 20+ years meaning I don't really care much and I won't be thinking about it in my own time. You haven't really captured my mind and got me addicted to Shiros story.

Also a character changes a lot in that span of time. You could probably say "Shiro is now more comfortable with his companions since he's been with them for so long." This is just a sentence that doesn't give much.if you wrote a chapter on how he became more comfortable with them for example: writing full chapter on how Shiro and crew had to fight a life and death battle against let's say a Minotaur and writing their struggles of this boss fight and how his companions had his back would show us how his relationship improved with his friends instead of you the author just telling us. (That's was just a random idea I made up)

This limitless peak idea was a very good idea. In my opinion you should have written a few chapters on their journey up the mountain.

My advice is that instead of telling us events in the story it's more engaging if you showed us by describing his adventure. As a writer being descriptive is the best thing you could do since it allows us the readers to use our imagination more.

I personally would have liked some chapters describing the climb up the mountain. You could have made it interesting by giving the Mc and his friends trials. From fighting monsters to solving puzzles to even completing rooms that test the trust and loyalty between Shiro and his companions. Again just some random ideas.

Also a good chance to give us the companions POV and give them character growth too. The reason why a lot of harem story's aren't liked is because authors add girls and don't give them any growth making their existences pointless. I hope you don't follow this trend.

That was me rambling I enjoy your story thanks for the hard work <333

Beast of Winter : The White Death (DxD FanFic) · C0
1 week ago
Here is some advice. Your novel is good however everything can always be improved.

In this chapter the main character went from a weakened position to becoming relatively strong. As someone who read this chapter I didn't experience any of the struggles the MC did during his long 20+ years meaning I don't really care much and I won't be thinking about it in my own time. You haven't really captured my mind and got me addicted to Shiros story.

Also a character changes a lot in that span of time. You could probably say "Shiro is now more comfortable with his companions since he's been with them for so long." This is just a sentence that doesn't give much.if you wrote a chapter on how he became more comfortable with them for example: writing full chapter on how Shiro and crew had to fight a life and death battle against let's say a Minotaur and writing their struggles of this boss fight and how his companions had his back would show us how his relationship improved with his friends instead of you the author just telling us. (That's was just a random idea I made up)

This limitless peak idea was a very good idea. In my opinion you should have written a few chapters on their journey up the mountain.

My advice is that instead of telling us events in the story it's more engaging if you showed us by describing his adventure. As a writer being descriptive is the best thing you could do since it allows us the readers to use our imagination more.

I personally would have liked some chapters describing the climb up the mountain. You could have made it interesting by giving the Mc and his friends trials. From fighting monsters to solving puzzles to even completing rooms that test the trust and loyalty between Shiro and his companions. Again just some random ideas.

Also a good chance to give us the companions POV and give them character growth too. The reason why a lot of harem story's aren't liked is because authors add girls and don't give them any growth making their existences pointless. I hope you don't follow this trend.

That was me rambling I enjoy your story thanks for the hard work <333 View More
Beast of Winter : The White Death (DxD FanFic) · C0
1 week ago

Epaxx: Yeah! Change it to Raichu!

Conquering the world with One Piece · C43
2 weeks ago

Nirvanic_Sun: i cringe every time I read Pikachu, please change it

Conquering the world with One Piece · C43
2 weeks ago
I'm actually addicted good job author!!! (。♡‿♡。) View More
· C24
2 weeks ago
This cliffhanger , ┻┻︵ヽ(`Д´)ノ︵┻┻ View More
His Genius Wife is a Superstar · C450
2 weeks ago
Saw this coming 10 miles away :/ oh well thanks for the chapter View More
The Irregular In ATG · C22
2 weeks ago

RedSushi: Ughh its so interesting but so short T.T

Lord Of The Blood Emeron · C23
3 weeks ago
Ahhhhh so shorttt!!!! I need more I'm addicted!!!!!! (┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻ View More
Lord Of The Blood Emeron · C23
3 weeks ago
Man you can tell this was Rushed. View More
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C18
3 weeks ago

EvilDemon: Seriously all for one injured a kryptonian wow this is a drop for me weak ass ***** lmao like really? A kryptonian got his ass beat by all for one lmao

Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C18
3 weeks ago

EvilDemon: With his quirk and a fucking kryptonian body he shouldn’t lose to anybody I hate when authors do this stupid ****. They make a op character in a low tier world then fucking nerf the mc. Even a weak ass Superman would **** on my hero academia so yea it doesn’t matter if he doesn’t have all his powers. All he needs is speed and strength and I’m pretty fucking sure he has that

Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C18
3 weeks ago

Ezukejyll: Full kryptonian's power or not he shouldn't be this weak. Author had him trained in martial arts and then combined then into his own. That alone would make him as powerful as batman and in batman vs superman batman showed that you don't need superpowers to beat heroes but learning their weakness. Mc not only knows his enemy weakness from show he trained in martial arts to the point be can beat masters in his dojo AND on top of this he has krptonian's power. Not lets take a look at clark kent. From a child he trained to control his powers and was absorbing more power from the sun. Yet as a child he performed feats the likes which heroes from DC world have marveled at.

Looking at micheal you could see that the author traines better than superman for he was trained on not only controlling his strenght as it grows but the way to utilize such strength for fighting AND killing. Yet he still loses to some one Clark would smack around like a bitc.h when he is 5yrs old.......

Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C18
3 weeks ago

Ezukejyll: Ok soooo, couple points to make here,
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First is the fact that last chapter you have a meeting of heroes because Michael was so powerful that all might and nezu were worried that all for one would target him and yet they did not decide to have someone watch him?!?
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Secondly, kryptonian's are NOT weak. This whole traini g thing you're making him go through.... yeah wrong training. Superman did NOT train to grow his power but to CONTROL it. <--- big difference. It means that superman's power was the strongest and he only lacked the control to not kill people accidentally.
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Sure you could have Michael learn Control because its his first time using such power but a kryptonian's power isn't that weak.
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Thirdly micheal is trained in different martial arts and yet he makes NO use of it in this fight........ probably shouldn't mention him training in it then if he doesn't use what he's learned. That's not even mentioning that you portrayed him to have intelligence yet he turns his surrounds with heat vision to a hot climate and THEN COOLS HIMSELF DOWN?!? As soon as I read that all for one sees with heat then doing the opposite of that would be bad and while I consider myself to have some intelligence, I would not say I have the intellect that you gave micheal.
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In conclusion, the chapter has alot of plotholes and it is understandable because you implied that you rushed this chapter because you want it online to notify your readers that you did not quit the novel but it may have been to hastily created.

Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C18
3 weeks ago

TrinityKing: The way he treat her like she's something he can just fix if she got broken...ugh😨...i guess this is part of character development but still i don't like it.

A Commonplace Story of Overpowered Sorcerer · C20
3 weeks ago
LOOOOOL View More

iEatSlippers: Who's Jin Liwei's Fiancee? How dare you institute that Rose young is Jin Liwei's Fiancee? Huh? do you want my mighty slippers so much that you dare think that Boss Iris isn't enough?

His Genius Wife is a Superstar · C444
3 weeks ago

iEatSlippers: Who's Jin Liwei's Fiancee? How dare you institute that Rose young is Jin Liwei's Fiancee? Huh? do you want my mighty slippers so much that you dare think that Boss Iris isn't enough?

His Genius Wife is a Superstar · C444
3 weeks ago
Man this chapter had me hyped even though I knew she wasn't going to reveal Liwei 😭 View More
His Genius Wife is a Superstar · C444
3 weeks ago

Jailing: Thank you for the chapter!

A Commonplace Story of Overpowered Sorcerer · C18
3 weeks ago

GinOokami: Instead of getting heated up, I was very nervous when he changed the structure of the nerve system before having ecchi time and stay nervous until the end. I really hope her mind is alright.

Thanks for the chap tho' 👍

A Commonplace Story of Overpowered Sorcerer · C17
3 weeks ago
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