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Is a fanfic bro...

I'm late but, if you read with and you know how to interpret and read. You would realize that they are not blood brothers, his father married Gu's mother so... You know.

Veo que viste sun-ken-rock hermano!

1 FL no more

For me yes, it's very annoying to be honest.

For me yes, it's very annoying to be honest.

My problem is not that I give him a Nerf my problem is the stupid reason for this. Also, if the "higher level more invocations" mechanism is already there, I don't see the reason for the Nerf, and then get him into a problem porque "le faltan soldados" (dragones en este caso). Espero si me doy a

I doubt that enemies are lacking, it is a world that basically "hates" him for being from another world apart from the other lords of the castle. In the end there are others enemies.

Thanks for the chapter

Hi

Hi

The only problem that I have and will have is that I do not train with weapons, for something cold weapons were and will be more lethal than the body itself. And if the MC is serious (as you propose) going to another world WITH MAGIC AND POSSIBLY PEOPLE ABOUT HUMANS DEDICATED TO THE HANDLING OF A COLD WEAPON ... I just see the MC as a total idiot.

I am really grateful for the two chapters today, but I would like to tell you that: Floor 1 is taking too long and I hope the other floors are not like this. Because it's really getting a bit tedious, but I still like it hahahahaha

In short, if you want to make the MC look unfair because of his age there are better and many ways to do it, with the decisions and attitudes that the MC is having, he does not seem like the "more mature than his age" boy that you say he is. I hope you take this into consideration. In the end it is your story and the only thing I could do is drop it and not recommend it to my friends. But apart from the above (which can still be changed) I don't really have many complaints.

This is my opinion is your story so you do what you want. I already said before because I am in favor of the MC going to school via Greg but I will detail my thoughts better here. 1- That you are not good at socializing does not mean that you do not have self-esteem, pride and / or self-esteem. Therefore the affiliated school that everywhere yells "BACK DOOR" or the way I see it "SCHOOL FOR SERVANTS" is not a very good decision. I don't like very arrogant MCs but I think MC shouldn't and wouldn't like to take that broken. 2- Considering how his mother died, the weirdness around everything and that it sounds more to me that the family for which the MC's mother worked would hurt his death is more out of pride than anything else. Why would the MC want to get involved with Greg's family? When obviously the latter do not want it to be? We are going to tell a boy who has a supposedly useless soul, non-existent strength and with little or no experience that valley and kill 5 star beasts in 3 weeks is it to help? They are considered? Do they like you? I do not believe it. 3- This here is for the MC himself, even if he's blind he shouldn't be an idiot, but why does he seem to be? If someone told me to help them find a husky at a cheap price and said husky even breathes fire but those people have ill will to me, I would honestly be quite angry. To the point of not wanting to have anything to do with them. 4- I think it was pretty obvious why Greg was "good" with the MC so why did he get along with him too? And so fast at that? The MC had problems with his eyes, not with his brain. 5- Even if the old man feels disappointed I will continue to insist that the old man is not stupid, he should know why the MC's soul is weak at the beginning. Even ignoring that with the MC's eye talent and "strange" soul would be enough for him to help him enter a school in a teacher-disciple relationship. And that would be a better option than owing something to Greg's family when they owe him a lot. 6- I continue with the same here, change the MC's mentality as soon as possible, if he is a 13-year-old boy who is an orphan in a post-apocalyptic world he is more mature than those of his age, but to be honest I have not noticed the "maturity" of the MC. Only his endless stupidity, after all a guy who treats you most of the time coldly, obviously uses you to solve his doubts and stops talking, invites you to his awakening then keeps in touch with you for no reason is totally normal in a society where the weak die and the strong reign supreme. Yes, it's totally normal let's be friends.