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You did well in giving him a background of a PvP player, the next you should do is setup the power levels of Nazarick vs the denizens of that world (I.E what Momonga did vs Sunlight) and then follow it up with what kind of a PvP player Jack is (I.E he might like challenges or beating weaklings or just straight up outhinking people, but keep it in mind all of those are not mutually exclusive from one another) View More
Overlord and the Seraphim · C3
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C906
I'm stopped reading somewhere just as Vahns kids were about to be born
Can anyone tell me what chapter that was ¿¿??

ALSO IT'S NICE TO See the amount of dedication the author has wow View More
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
3 weeks ago

Mirokawa: Hello again, sorry for not replying on your previous comments but you cannot please everyone, even the best fanfic writer I follow has made some questionable world building and character development, that being said the best way to avoid writing yourself Into a dead-end is constantly reading your work and see FOR Yourself what you did wrong instead of listening to every single crybaby on this platform.

I believe will all of that out of the way avoid weird traps that ultimately lead to leaving your novel filled with fillers like zealously describing everything. That's not needed, an apt and concise description will do.
Harems are hard to maintain without making the other harem members seem like cardboard cutouts. 2 maximum is hard enough.

Overpowered is not bad, Hyper plot armor is bad

Overlord and the Seraphim
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C0
Hello again, sorry for not replying on your previous comments but you cannot please everyone, even the best fanfic writer I follow has made some questionable world building and character development, that being said the best way to avoid writing yourself Into a dead-end is constantly reading your work and see FOR Yourself what you did wrong instead of listening to every single crybaby on this platform.

I believe will all of that out of the way avoid weird traps that ultimately lead to leaving your novel filled with fillers like zealously describing everything. That's not needed, an apt and concise description will do.
Harems are hard to maintain without making the other harem members seem like cardboard cutouts. 2 maximum is hard enough.

Overpowered is not bad, Hyper plot armor is bad View More
Overlord and the Seraphim
3 weeks ago

ZGearCecil: oº,.ºo

Overlord: Blue Citadel Alternate
3 weeks ago
Reeeeeeee View More
Playing with other Supernaturals · C126
4 weeks ago
Reading Status: C5
I would recommend you focus on one work first or at least find a good stopping point for the first one, you barely started and you are already branching out. You are going to get burnt out and ultimately quit writing
I'm not a writer, but I have worked with writers who have quit simply because they have too many ideas but didn't focus on one so they couldnt finish anything View More
Overlord: Blue Citadel Alternate
1 month ago

ZGearCecil: I'll see what I can do.

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
tyyyy View More
「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction · C29
1 month ago

JimmyBlah: First!!!! And thanks again author, I like the direction this is headed! Also make sure to keep yourself in good health!

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction · C29
1 month ago

BattleKing10000: Thanks for the chapter

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction · C29
1 month ago
Reading Status: C29
coooooool
i like the premise
the grammar is acceptible
the pace is acceptible
the lead isn't that unlikeable
but srsly at leasts make momonga have some kind of role
he's very replaceable right now View More
「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
Thanks for the update ;D View More
「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction · C25
1 month ago
Well you kind of got how Niklaus acts when he doesnt get what he wants in relation to his family, he gets 1 track minded and tunnel visioned so good for you View More
Original Wolf - (Teen Wolf/ The Originals) · C36
1 month ago
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