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ChocolatChan

ChocolatChan

female LV 11

I only write trashy novels.

2018-08-16 Joined United States

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It got me hook from the very first chapter and did quite some time until the free chapter and did a couple locked chapter as well. It was a very enjoyable read with a very engaging narrative, stable updates, and a very solid world build and it really seem that you know what you were doing. I think the first volume was engaging enough that it didn't seem that slow imo. However, now for the cons. The reason that made me less interesting in the story (mostly subjective). 1. MC entering the academy. It for me was kinda cringey and also cliche although it made sense why he did so and introducing the master and bonding with other character. It doesn't make it less cliche and cringey. 2. the mc flaws: his ability not to lie. It not a huge deal breaker for me. However, it did seem a bit forced that he will uncontrollably blurted out what he thinks. However, it still tolerable for me. 3. Required a master. Honestly, I rather he went solo and instead of having to be depend on someone and being bond to that person forever. Why? cuz I just like the freedom for Mc to explore the world and also haven't seen much quality in the potential master yet. 4. Total unrelated but I want to see some more male characters that I hope aren't the villain or one dimensional character. Nevertheless, I think still a pretty engaging story. Most of the cons were a lot of restrictions in the setting, his thought (can't lie), and required to have a master that give him less freedom,which was a bit off putting to me. Overall, I think you have a fantastic story going on and hope to see it develop.
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Meh, doesn't matter

In the end, Ryan left Mia and Daniel alone without waiting for an explanation or a half-assed lie. The next day, the funeral was held in the largest cemetery of Dallas… the city where his parents grew up and met each other. Since Ryan and then lived in Shreveport, he was the only one who attended the ceremony, aside from the Father and the cemetery workers. He didn't have cousins, uncles, not even grandfathers or grandmothers because both of his parents grew up in the same orphanage.

Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain

Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain

Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99

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So, wait, you're ten years old?!?!

After 2030, the world is changed into a new place. A place where the hunger for power increased. A place where Robots with emotions and Humans being apathetic and emotionless, work side-by-side. But everything comes with a cost and that cost was experienced in 2050.

Shin the 'Hacker'.

Shin the 'Hacker'.

Sci-fi · Seulil2061

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Very fancy
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Entwined souls

Entwined souls

Fantasy · nishidurani

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