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Mike_R_T_F: Seriously, copying the plot from another fan-fic?
I remember reading the same plot a pretty long while ago, and I only remember it because I didn't like it.DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C26
King_Lazy: BRUH biggest forced plot ive ever seenDragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C26
Webzayne: The author still isn't listening to comments, I'm dropping. I can't sit here and try to read these giant blocks of text. Elementary stuff.DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C25
Gabbu_Xul: While I get why he tricked Sasha to trigger her transformation (as Goku did something similar to Gohan, egging him on as a failure unable to protect his friends and family), if he doesn't straight up tell her he did it to help her, his help will come across as insincere. And a ***** for not owning up to his actions, not something a saiyan warrior would do. Especially since Sasha will know he's lying.DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C25
GreatDarkLord: Did he just watch her train? Why not training his combat skills while she do her thing?DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C24
NaniTheFack: sigh~ as always he’s a d*ck😂DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C24
Your_Daddy1: Every time the mc meets with Elise, Sasha, and luna I begin to despise him. I'm not sure if how he treats them is meant to be funny, but it makes me cringe...DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C23
ErozothDraeor: this novel is lacking the most important thing, a story.
The MC is extremely similar to other DB fan fic MCs. Some of them are in the top 100 as well.DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C23
cade2065: More like a brat, cause that’s how he’s been acting...🤷🏾♂️DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C23
shypunk: yep MC is a massive dick im beginning to think the author is aswell even tho its a fanfic its bugging the shit out of me how he treats them a normal girl/women would of beat the hell out of him or shot himDragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C23
Gabbu_Xul: MC is a dick. That's not the way to get girls to fall in love with you.DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C23
RandomPasserby96: Moral of the story: never wear seat belt if u want to be reincarnated 👍DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C1
AlghurTheMadForce: Author you should read up on what nephilim means and fix your chapters.
Nephalem= Demon/AngelDante in DXD · C2
Paradox41295: Wait a second please tell me it’s not the douche bag from dmc devil may cry cause Dante is demon/human not a Nepheline demon/angelDante in DXD · C2
Shuragen: but you really copied this fan-fic
from your brain to webnovel :pThe Strongest Omni Traveler · C163
Vallori: I will absolutely try and not let you guys down with this novel. And now that I have to take longer to write chaps, they might actually be more planned out than previous ones. So we'll see if this might actually turn out to be something positive for this novel.A New Path · C113
StevenSenegal: Don’t worry about the schedule too much, sporadical updates are fine too. I just hope you don’t fully drop it, the novel has been getting better and better recently, especially since you started with avatar. One of my absolute favorites at the moment.A New Path · C113
Rouge_Prince1738: What the **** plz don't make him naive I always hate this stuff😑😤😩😭The Strongest Omni Traveler · C162
Asura_Vajra: So far this has been rather underwhelming. You have such a cool premise with the MC's cheats, but so far you've just been largely going through the canon plot with very few differences and an extra character.
Well, I'll keep reading. Hopefully the story will improve.A Commonplace Story of Overpowered Sorcerer · C50
KhaoticPrime: You should kill Ehit and become a God then jump to a new dimension where the manga 'Is it wrong to pick up girl's in a dungeon?' and create your own familia. Rio is too strong for any decent story so focus on slice of life with action where it's about Rio's familia. Frey's interest in Rio etc etc. Let him be a teacher. Training Bell to be hella strong as well as his girls. Perhaps go to Overlord where he creates his own faction and he and his girls kill off the enemy. Maybe even go to Re:Monster. Point is, Do some kingdom building, create focus on other things than the said person being overpowered. Make it challenging for the MC. Let him do some thinking rather than fighting. Further Character development etc.A Commonplace Story of Overpowered Sorcerer · C50
Sommerscave: Thanks for the chapter 🙏 looking forward to the future.A Commonplace Story of Overpowered Sorcerer · C50
RazerLazer: Yeah, me too, ever since the author put the ability to create skills as his cheat this fanfic was doomed from the start. I mean like, im pretty sure even the author is running out of excuses of him killing ehit which any reasonable person would of, instead, he creates excuses calling it "boring" and "seems like too much trouble" but he could easily create skills to help him with that. So hes probably going to kill him when ehit pisses him off or something.A Commonplace Story of Overpowered Sorcerer · C50
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