Webnovel Author: Davlyn - Novel Collection

it's decent, right up to 200 where it basically becomes a different book lol... idk if a few chapters got miss placed but it makes no sense after that point

Synopsis, tags, and title; had me expecting op necro Rick rolling skele bangers... I got sad, arrogant, cowardly, stupid mc; no necro skele bangers.......To be fair, it's well written and probably someone's cup of tea; just not mine. 3/5 Left me feeling Rick Ashley'

hadn't even read it and that comment had me roflmao, the whole damn story summed up in one hilarious sarcasm

Honestly, it was a really good take on an old theme, but it was absolutely ruined with clichés and unwavering predictability. If you're not one to be bothered by those two things, this really is a decent novel worth a read.

If you can stand the nationalism nonsense, it's not half bad solid 3.5/5. Other than a ridiculous harem, it does keep to its main theme, which is outstanding considering the competition. There are surprisingly few grammatical errors considering that the main character has 'flawless' comprehension of the English language but refuses to speak it, simply because it's not Hua...

was going really well until about chp300 then it just became confusing cultivator nonsense seems like there are chapter skips or something because there are plenty of references after chp300 that are never actually brought up it simply becomes cultivator nationalism at that point even the sign in system basically becomes background at that point rarely getting a mention every 50ish chp

after chapter 100 half the chapter is basically copy paste of recap, idk why it has a harem tag no r18 or even vanilla smut so?!? honestly it started good then went downhill like the author gave up and wanted to finish it asap with no real plan of action. don't bother wasting your clings reading this.

This was a pretty good read. I won't lie though...that harem tag got me feeling salty. There is no smut at all in this it's about as vanilla as vanilla gets for r18. And the man doesn't even have a harem lol, he legit 'unintentionally' cheats on his at the time gf. Fair warning I've only gotten to 2700-2800. Maybe it changes, lol. Overall, it's a good read; maybe even great, but if you're looking for something other than hack and slash, this isn't for you.

Honestly, it's not a horrible book. However, when I read something that starts with farm system I want the farm system... not a convoluted magic, animal, enslavement, sexually confused; mess. I don't care if he's gay, straight, or even bi; but pick one and have relevance to the story. The rest is just a mess that I don't want to touch with a 10ft pole. 155ch in and it was just a bad impulse buy.

There are a lot of things about this book that are interesting and new, however... The title of the book should have been adventures of a store owner. 😂🤣😂 It gets repetitive and rather boring fairly quickly. In 600 chapters it basically follows; store 1-3 chapters, training 2-10 chapters, game 1-10 chapters... rinse and repeat. In those 600 chapters the owner goes on 1 in house slaughter, and 2 outside 'adventures' once to wipe out enemies, the other to 'have fun killing shit'. Almost everything about the actual store process is skipped and random slaughter is added as filler... It's a good read for casual 1-4 chapter per day readers, but it lacks any hook that gives it's audience a 'what happens next?!?' feeling.

the premise of the story is great however the execution falls flat on it's face. it's more of a daily journal than a story, and it feels very distant as if it's being told to you by a cousin's friend's uncle; who may or may not have been there to witness it. there are a lot of contradictions which are very annoying in and of itself; he starts off absorbing crystals in the dungeon then later decides it's stupid and dangerous... ok sure no problem there, he upgrades skills and gets a wealth of knowledge to go with the skill that makes it similar to him having practiced said skill for weeks or months, then turns around and decides he needs to train and train and train to comprehend the skill himself... I don't understand that logic, the power system introduced into the story revolves around absorbing stat crystals to progress in strength, and yet, the character trains and trains and trains... and trains, he gets system points for defeating monsters, yet avoids combat; except for the first few chapters in which he absolutely wrecks them, only to Sophie become weak af in subsequent chapters... he wants to learn sword, magic, and archery, but chooses heavy armor instead of light or even leather armor and as if that wasn't wanky enough throw in gravity bracelets, anklets, and belt for fun... he does get stronger by absorbing stat crystals right?! occasionally the author will get in a rut regarding a certain idea and expound upon it for two paragraphs when s simple sentence was all that was necessary example being he forgot to eat the previous day and was hungry, he was hungry because he hadn't eaten he ate without any manners because he hadn't eaten the previous day. then the final and perhaps most annoying thing about this story, every action with almost 50% of every sentence is proceeded by he... he starts he does he's hungry he...he...he but occasionally the author will sometimes call the mc our mc so there is that. all in all I think the idea for this story was fantastic, it could've been wrapped up nicely in 3-500ch; however, due to sheer freaking mind boggling murder it has been turned into an inept captains log. without a massive revamp and serious editing I can't honestly say I'd ever recommend this book to anyone. in all honesty I never bother writing reviews good or bad, and yet this book has managed to make me so irritated... ... ugh just do yourself a favor and don't bother reading this book.

Honestly, the book was neither great not horrible. Simply meh, there were good parts and bad parts. There weren't any huge distracting grammar errors but they are there. The sex scenes which if everyone is perfectly honest, the only reason we picked up this book in the first place; were decent if repetitive. The MC was very cyclical in nature and often broke character which can only be blamed on poor planning and a need to force some changes in certain scenes...only to revert after 'serious shit' is done with. The ending is horrible and there is a lot of background building that is unnecessary and goes unused. Overall this book accomplishes a very minimal time distracting easy read. If you want something that is simple and fun, this is perfect for you. If you want a more in depth erotica with actual character building and progress, you will be severely disappointed. I give it a 2.5/5 and would only recommend it to people who want a easy time killer mixed with a little smut.