Doomey - Profile

Love the story so far and I like the fact that he doesn't immediately fall in love with someone do to the imprinting or mate bond which seems like a bit of an easy way out. I also like how his system isn't completely overpowered and I like the slice of life storyline where he goes day by day. I hope he eventually makes his own pack or group I also wouldn't mind some other crossovers or maybe even background plots of the main story. It is different than most twilight fanfics and I hope to see the author continue it in a way that is not like the other ones.

I love how you add in stuff from the entire series of the elder scrolls. I also love the character development and how he doesn't try to kiss the butt of an npc and he is making his own faction. I hope you continue to update this story and I am invested to see where this goes. Great story, only complaint I have is not enough chapters but I can understand inspiration takes time as well as you not wanting to put out a subpar chapter.

Main character doesn't tell everyone who he is or what he is doing so far, as well as he doesn't come out and try to make unfavorable conditions with the main characters ill stick with this novel to the end. Best game making novel ever in my opinion keep up the good work and write faster.

Loved the novel and idea behind it but, I did not like the chapter with the x men breaking into the guys house when he has runes everywhere to the point where it seemed they got lucky when none of them even have magic nor can they sense them inside. In my opinion its just to push the plot further which is okay, but the author could have done it in a different way for example letting the supreme mage find them after he brings her back or something that makes more sense.