Akaryuu01

1yr

Replied to Kapuchinik

lol got it,😅 I was wrong. I was thinking to the point that if you say that anything can go wrong than why can't anything also go right?🧐

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Thanks for the reply😁.I see your point and, As I said I just see this trope too often. In almost all of the novels that use this trope a powerful being gives 1 wish or more. what I find interesting about this wish trope is when the mc makes a simple wish and makes do with all the unforseen consequences. When you go to a store to buy food you get what you want. However if someone is offering you free food you don't typically tell them how to cook it you just except what is given gratefully.😃 This however is just my opinion and it's your story so do as you like. As I said before thanks for the story and keep up the good work.😄

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Gamer in Overlord

Anime & Comics · Student_Of_Culture

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

Why did he not wish for things to always work in his favor.(plot armour) 🧐

ch 0 2 Wish

Gamer in Overlord

Anime & Comics · Student_Of_Culture

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

OMG😭 Ok so one wish.(system)=(I want this and this and that and that and this) can you see how this is more than one wish hidden in one wish. 😱God do I hate the wish gimmic. The only thing I hate more is the clone skills in novels. lol sorry for the rant. I just see this to often. Please keep writing.And thanks for the content.😂

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Gamer in Overlord

Anime & Comics · Student_Of_Culture

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

The wish gimmic never leaves readers satisfied with the wish. Why not just have the god grant the subconscious desire of the person instead. 🤯

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Gamer in Overlord

Anime & Comics · Student_Of_Culture

Akaryuu01

1yr

Replied to Djabilong

Murphy's law is ,anything that can happen will happen. It's not anything that can go wrong will go wrong.😁

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Gamer in Overlord

Anime & Comics · Student_Of_Culture

Akaryuu01

1yr

Replied to Izashi

... would she servive...😱

"Well, let's say, freedom for freedom. If you win, I am yours. But if I win, you are mine. Are you willing?"

LUSTFUL PARADISE: Shinmai cross DxD

Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

and what the hell is arara ufufu

"Arara! Ufufu~! Welcome, Basara-kun."

LUSTFUL PARADISE: Shinmai cross DxD

Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

God the arara is being overused. use it when she is being cheeky not at the beginning of regular sentences.

"Arara! Ufufu~! Welcome, Basara-kun."

LUSTFUL PARADISE: Shinmai cross DxD

Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

under the rug

In the end she decided to swipe the matter in the rug and go back to busying herself.

LUSTFUL PARADISE: Shinmai cross DxD

Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

calling out not up

The cries of a young girl calling up to him sounded behind him, but were drowned up by the rumbling of the grounds.

LUSTFUL PARADISE: Shinmai cross DxD

Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

Come on. Rob be like.you are my entertainment thus I will get rid of any situation that could be harmful to you that should be fun. oh and I have to earn your trust because seeing you live with some uncertainty would just kill the entertainment value. Really 😔

[Oh, another thing, I forgot to tell you that no one was able to sense any power surge from your location. It was the work of the R.O.B and he also made sure to erase the memories of those insects who were living in that gear. Your title 'R.O.B's Hunter' is not just for a show. This should also prove to you that he doesn't intend to harm you in any way. After all, you are his source of entertainment.]

I'm Issei Hyoudou who bake Cookies

Anime & Comics · HumblePoet

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

Rewards? What could he possibly need. after a mission he gets a reward that makes him "superer" or more gimmicky.

You don't have to worry about any kind of punishment as you can choose whether to do those missions or not however remember that completing these missions would allow you to earn good rewards.]

I'm Issei Hyoudou who bake Cookies

Anime & Comics · HumblePoet

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

he should be dead lol. he's like a double a battery that ate a nuclear power plant. his body should not have been able to handle that much power.

Physical Power- Satan level.

I'm Issei Hyoudou who bake Cookies

Anime & Comics · HumblePoet

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

This doesn't make much sense. she should know better than him how long it should take and if this is an anomaly she would not leave.

"Rias, it seems that the process would take a lot of time. You can head back to your class for now."

I'm Issei Hyoudou who bake Cookies

Anime & Comics · HumblePoet

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

I'm pretty sure you draw with a pencil. You need paint to paint or it ain't painting.🤯

I began painting with a grin; as I worked, the pencil turned black, with ink falling from it, only to vanish as soon as it touched the ground.

DxD: Ink and summoning

Anime & Comics · LaYEn

Akaryuu01

1yr

Commented

That's more then one wish lol.

3- I choose to reincarnate in the world of Dxd, bringing all of my memories with me. There's not much to say about this world; it has everything I wanted at the time: magic, girls, conflicts, and so on. I also asked the Longinus Annihilation Maker alongside a way to hide it because I didn't want to be discovered so soon and with a male body that cannot get sick.

DxD: Ink and summoning

Anime & Comics · LaYEn

Akaryuu01

2yr

Commented

Pfffft lol that caught me drinking.😂

"Well," I mused, "Kind of like a cave, a very damp one, with ghosts and zombies walking around, muttering things that only have a meaning for them, so… like Walmart,"