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It sucks that the author tend to overexplain everything. There's too much of "Tell don't show" in this story. No sense of mystery at all and the novel doesn't evoke my curiosity because author keeps explaining the personality and relationship of characters in the narration rather than showing it through actions.

Ah i can't anymore, i gotta go. This is an absurd Litrpg story that heavily relies on [90% LUCK] & [5% Skill] & [5% Hardwork]. Garbage romance where MC was cheated on, then after he heard the Reason from her he starts blaming himself and accepted her back, not the worse yet, so the Author just decided to let MC fvck as much women as he can to even out and the Girl even encourage the MC to do so because she felt guilty. MC achieved the Dao of Patheticness by this point. Most of the harem consist of Game NPCs so yeah, i just can't do this anymore mate. Peace out.

When infodump was a Genre, you get this shit. Entertainment 6%. Too much word padding, author doing it a lot on cultivation infos narrated in the story. Some reviews praise the cultivation a lot, yes it's good and author put a lot of thought into it i know, but if you try to read it carefully you will realize how much nonsensical some parts added into it... and that's where info dumps comes in, it was inserted inside those explanations to make it longer and verbose. Some parts doesn't need explanations but still force into the story to read because why not? I just can't enjoy this, the story almost doesn't progress for fvcks sake.

Not really bad story but sadly it Peaked in volume 1 for me. From volume 2, it slowly progress to a crawl and author write too much detail on describing small and unimportant events. Even the action parts could be skipped or shortened because they're just boring grinding and the mc will overcome it easily and but author will spend 2-3 chapters to describe everything in great detail of actions and refuse to skip even a single unimportant monster. This is my main reason of dropping this. This story would've been more bearable if author knows when to skip something. But overall Characters are great and plot is alright too. If you're fine reading a somewhat interesting but very dragged story. Then this is an alright read.

I didn't really read the Second Book yet. I finished the First Book months ago, i've been searching for something similar to this but can't find any. That one is quite underrated, definitely one of my best read from originals in this site. I tried reading this one but the early chapters is quite disconcerting. Mind if anyone gimme some mild spoilers~

I'm dropping due to future chapters seems to be bleak. Might be similar to WMW but with an MC who isn't villainous. It has wonky translation but specifically the names and genders are quite often translated wrong and swapped together, but the overall grammar is quite alright. I didn't get far but i read a review that it worsen in later chaps, not sure if it was edited now so i won't bother investing time on this one for the time being. Anyways. If you're fine with all that, you might wanna give it a try, it actually seems interesting to me, i quite like it. PS: Someone gimme heads up if the TL after hundreds of chaps are readable.

I tried enjoying this but i couldn't get into it. There are subtle info dumps but written horribly, the grammar is written in the most uninteresting way possible, just plain tasteless for sentence structure. The characters aren't that good either, especially Valera her actions and dialogue are forced and felt artificial, she just keeps acting like a maiden in love the moment she appeared without process. I also felt like the beginning chapters felt too unnecessary where MC is bullied and made friends with fellow bullied kids but then they died, MC didn't resurrected them in time so they basically have no souls anymore when he turn them undead they're just walking worthless zombie, so the first 10 chaps isn't worth reading because aside from MC the characters in those chapters are all gonna die and disappear and for a revenge story this novel lacks any feel and hype for it, along with the mc who talks about justice here and there, explaining the reason for his edgy view in life and shit is just embarrassing to me. I didn't enjoy this a single bit, idk why, maybe because author is so bad at math. lol jk.

Did it say in the story that he had both prosopagnosia and phonagnosia?

It's a great story but it's too bad that the writing is a mess later in the story! The story is very engaging but what makes this story best is because of their characters. They all felt alive and they all had their own quirks albeit a bit overdone. But the MC and FMC is definitely well written characters for the first hundred chaps. Not all of it is great. Lots of characters are hard to picture in my mind, author keeps using overused description for all side characters and lacks distinctive descriptions, everyone are just describe as bunch of brunettes and blondes. Author describe character appearance almost the same as every other. Aside from that the writing is very confusing and verbose, author use a lot of advanced words but doesn't do well on grammar structure. You can't even trust the "Time and Date" in the story anymore. So basically everything started in June 2, and then it progress continuously until it becomes July 1, July 2, July 3, July 4 then suddenly becomes June 3 again. I don't even know what the fvck is the Present time anymore the whole story is discombobulated. This is a non-linear story then author makes mistakes in dates but never corrected it and the whole confusion just keeps deepening. Chapters 1-100 is Peak! Chapters 100-150 is Good! Chapters 150-200 is Alright! Chapter 200+ i lost interest! It's a character-driven story, but those characters are getting worse and worse around 150+ chapters. Dialogues are only really good at the first 100 chapters but after author just tries to make almost every dialogues in the story had deeper meaning, it was superfluous. TLDR: Great depth of characters, but the "Plot" itself isn't that deep and it's obvious that we will never get to that main plot.

Chapters 1-100 is Peak! Chapters 100-150 is Good! Chapters 150-200 is Alright! Chapter 200 i lost interest! It's a character-driven story, but those characters are getting worse and worse around 150 chapters. Dialogues are only really good at the first 100 chapters but after that it's just superfluous depth.

Well i guess i could say it's an Alright novel, i guess. I can't say that i like it but i don't think i dislike it either. Just read this if you want an Ultra-Super-Mega-OP Protag. The Characters are at least 'not' bad, the interaction doesn't feel annoying but they lack any development. The R-18 scenes is really boring, maybe for newbie readers they might enjoy this a bit but i've read many R-18 novels and the R-18 in this one is seriously lacking, especially when MC's relationships with women are very shallow yet the author create a very long R-18 chapters with those women even tho they're not interesting and lacks development. Just imagine as if MC met a woman randomly then without any development the author decided to create a long r-18 chapter with them. It's also lowkey chunni, author making the MC act cool too much is a bit overdone. His personality is like a mix of various main characters that i've read, so i'm guessing the author Patch up the MC's personality from other novels.Overall i think it's an alright read if you're new to R-18 novels and are really bored to death.PS: It's comically and not to be taken seriously.