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Tri_knight: Enter the third wife who is also his travelling partner. Hahahahaha. Nice

Journey Towards Greatness · C442
2 weeks ago
Don't speak matter of facts about love at first sight, you can't say if it's possible or not. What you are saying is filled with your biased opinion towards it. But I agree with the thing being too rushed, author haven't explained or showed gaara's feelings well. View More

Polkageist: I have to be honest author, I really don't like this chapter. I almost hate how this chapter turned out, but let me explain why, instead of just hating on the chapter.

You see, I usually don't like romance in novels, because 9/10 times, I feel like the authors don't develop the romantic feelings or relationships in good ways. And sadly, I don't think you developed Gaara's feelings for Yui well in this instance either.

I saw your comment about love at first sight, and let me tell you, you don't just suddenly fall in love with someone at first sight. Sure, LUST or ATTRACTION at first sight are totally real and tangible things, but they're not love, and it seems a lot of people confuse these different emotions. It takes longer to develop any kind of meaningful romantic feelings for someone else, not just a few days. I don't think there's any real basis for Gaara to be this deeply hurt in this situation.

Sure, he could be upset at the development, and regret killing Yui, but there's no way he would be this devastated. There has simply not been enough time to develop these kinds of feelings you give Gaara.

To me it feels like you did this to twist Gaara in some way. Maybe he'll keep this in mind and cooperate with the Land of Snow/Spring due to a guilty conscience. Maybe this will motivate him to train even harder, so he can protect everyone he loves in the future. Whatever your reasons are, I still don't like this chapter, and this forced development. It just seems so forced and cheap to me. You're better than some cheap forced relationship for plot twists.

In any case, I'll still read your story. I won't lie and say I'm not disappointed in this chapter, but I still like your story too much for me to just drop it. And you still have my support with your story, despite my negative review.

I just hope we won't see something like this again. Almost everyone hates this kind of plot development, so I don't see any reason to use it.

I'd like to hear your opinion on my points, and maybe an explanation or reason for your decisions in this chapter, if it won't spoil future chapters.

Have a nice day author.

Gaara · C0
1 month ago
So in the end why is he trying so hard to be alive, is it only to stay 'alive'. In all the words he travels, him living haven't really started yet. View More

Itisn1tmyname: that's why I specified "true death" - not 'I die and come back some time later' but 'my soul gets obliterated and I cease to exist, no chance of recovery'.

If he gets ejected before learning what he needs to learn there is a very real chance that he'll be done for good, or at least he thinks so. :3

《Infinite Stamina》 · C65
1 month ago
I mean yes its normal to be scared of death, but he experienced death already which removes the fear of the unknown into it and most importantly he doesn't have a clear goal or motivation to push himself, imagine all he do is training, then training and more training. He's like a machine by this point. View More

Itisn1tmyname: cuz he fears that if he gets ejected out of the world those chains will spear his (already injured) soul again before he manages to reach the next world.

The fear of death - true death - is a powerful motivation. :3

《Infinite Stamina》 · C65
1 month ago
Just wondering, why is he trying so hard? View More
《Infinite Stamina》 · C65
1 month ago
*hugs* View More

FallenBlue: Haha, hello, sis. Aye, me here. XD
*hugs*

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C85
2 months ago
Sis blue I see you lmao View More

FallenBlue: I sincerely hope it doesn't turn into a harem story
coz it's an amazing read so far and I would hate to drop it if ever MC started collecting trophy gfs/wives.
Thanks btw for the chapter. Keep up te good work, KillerBee :-)

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C85
2 months ago

FallenBlue: I sincerely hope it doesn't turn into a harem story
coz it's an amazing read so far and I would hate to drop it if ever MC started collecting trophy gfs/wives.
Thanks btw for the chapter. Keep up te good work, KillerBee :-)

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C85
2 months ago
Its one of the norms, everyone is different so won't be able to satisfy everyone so please just stick to urself. View More
Reborn: Ulquiorra in DxD world · C0
4 months ago

shashank_bhatt: Dude you're imagination is even greater then me....
I thought he will become a problem solver of everyone.... Trying to solve everyone's problem because he put them and know what will happen to them....

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C63
4 months ago

TheGreatWeirdo: for short. Don't become zhang ye. hahhaa

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C63
4 months ago

CloudyAlliance: Hmm... The next chapter should be reaction of the viewers or the pov of xiao rin or mixed or two chapters each. I just fear that this might turn repetitive although this gives more interaction and feels into the story but it doesn't give much depth to the plot its its like ur following a line of dots and we can't picture the whole map. Where is this heading or where is the X placed.
Tho your story is really good I just hope he doesn't suddenly turn into a singer, artist or martial artist and please don't get him involved into gang wars.

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C63
4 months ago
Hmm... The next chapter should be reaction of the viewers or the pov of xiao rin or mixed or two chapters each. I just fear that this might turn repetitive although this gives more interaction and feels into the story but it doesn't give much depth to the plot its its like ur following a line of dots and we can't picture the whole map. Where is this heading or where is the X placed.
Tho your story is really good I just hope he doesn't suddenly turn into a singer, artist or martial artist and please don't get him involved into gang wars. View More
Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C63
4 months ago

CloudyAlliance: Cliffs are everywhere.

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C62
4 months ago
Cliffs are everywhere. View More
Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C62
4 months ago
Chopper is a mythic pokemon XD
Then how about the gun-dog? View More
One Piece - Adventure of a Pokemon Trainer · C23
4 months ago

Better_Name: Bah who wants that ****ty boa Hancock she can’t be trained or evolved she’s like one of those trashy legendaries that you capture but put in storage and never use

One Piece - Adventure of a Pokemon Trainer · C21
4 months ago
Yeah so true. View More
One Piece - Adventure of a Pokemon Trainer · C21
4 months ago

Curiosity44: author-san! please dont forget that kisuke won a bet with sona where he can get pictures of sona in a magical girl outfit! he can use this to get on serafall's good side

Playing with other Supernaturals · C135
4 months ago

Lyandy10: Looks like Xiao Rin may be joining. Hope she doesn’t kill the female lead of the movie or something.

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C53
4 months ago

Moepop1: Excited to see if the girl he helped joins him in the movie.

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C53
4 months ago
Your on the roll south! View More
Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C66
4 months ago

Djoeking: Xp

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C52
4 months ago

CloudyAlliance: Although I already expected this to happen, but d*mn that was awesome!

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C52
4 months ago
Although I already expected this to happen, but d*mn that was awesome! View More
Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C52
4 months ago
We're tricked T_T View More
Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic). · C140
4 months ago

lee2313: More plzz

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C51
4 months ago

shinleigh_06: Deym... I want more...

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C51
4 months ago

ImmortalFeng: Oye need more , dont drop us at a cliff

Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C51
4 months ago
Please i need more chapter, this cliff is is is is is sooooooooooooooo crazy. View More
Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C51
4 months ago
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