Jyn_Chaos

A level 2 soul from the beginning can be considered as super men by breaking their first physical limitation and since these people are stronger, the usefulness of firearms will decline immensely at this level, although they can't be considered immune to them yet. Here the individual begins to integrate a type of energy into his body to strengthen it.

Soul Evolution System: Reborn

Fantasy · Jwunder_99

Jyn_Chaos

7mth

Commented

I think you missed a chapter the jump between chapters doesn't flow well

ch 17 Barl City

Soul Evolution System: Reborn

Fantasy · Jwunder_99

Jyn_Chaos

7mth

Commented

Knowing whats to come in the future i think the description of soul levels should be updated bc a strong/peak soul 2 can definitely desimate a city let alone a hous

A level 2 soul from the beginning can be considered as super men by breaking their first physical limitation and since these people are stronger, the usefulness of firearms will decline immensely at this level, although they can't be considered immune to them yet. Here the individual begins to integrate a type of energy into his body to strengthen it.

Soul Evolution System: Reborn

Fantasy · Jwunder_99

Jyn_Chaos

7mth

Commented

Thank you for pick this up I enjoyed reading his story mistakes and all but knowing someone will have good editing and possible continuation of the story I wish you the best of luck🫡

ch 0 1 Reborn

Soul Evolution System: Reborn

Fantasy · Jwunder_99

Jyn_Chaos

10mth

Commented

Fix the grammar for the cultivation relams get confusing with the names

ch 0 4 Sea Opening Realm Sixth Stage.

Han Li Marries a wife and live long.

Fantasy · Rahmon_Lora

Jyn_Chaos

1yr

Replied to EvilisMyNature

Fair if it’s not your strong suit just keep up the good work

There won't be a harem or romance element, and while there may be some crush of females, it won't be like other novels and won't be shown much.

Cultivation PC: I Became Stronger By Downloading and Installing Data

Eastern · EvilisMyNature

Jyn_Chaos

1yr

Commented

Sadge lack of romance/harem for a novel like this makes me wanna stop. But overall still interesting story so ill continue for now

There won't be a harem or romance element, and while there may be some crush of females, it won't be like other novels and won't be shown much.

Cultivation PC: I Became Stronger By Downloading and Installing Data

Eastern · EvilisMyNature

Jyn_Chaos

1yr

Commented

You got stop saying top G its cringe mate

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MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

Fantasy · Champsing

Jyn_Chaos

1yr

Commented

Congratulations !!

Alright, My novel finally became contracted. Now, I need to stockpile. Hehe.

Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem

Fantasy · starry8sword

Jyn_Chaos

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 141 Under the Table

Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem

Fantasy · starry8sword

Jyn_Chaos

1yr

Commented

There's no such thing as to many girls the more the merrier

ch 135 House Invasion

Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem

Fantasy · starry8sword

Jyn_Chaos

1yr

Commented

He's got to use it for the meme

" Whew, Hypnosis, eh? It's really here. But for the sake of girls, I will destroy such an evil book. But well, Let me learn it first."

Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem

Fantasy · starry8sword

Jyn_Chaos

1yr

Replied to Sammy_Amigo

That be funny😵‍💫😵‍💫

" Hmph, Think whatever you want. All I can tell you want someone to use a special poison to kill you. However, Your benefactor sealed the poison in your veins. So, Your life got saved, but your abilities were sealed."