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Saarlink: But but...super girl genius... :(The World seems Realistic but Why do I have a Leveling System? · C9
LeechesOfSoul: QuidanSytem: [post 20 chp straight]
Reader: what seriously?? (Open the book)
Reader: are you devil?
QuidanSystem: yes, superior Devil.
Reader: ...Gamers of the Underworld · C116
Grandchase: Almost jumped with joy after seeing the notifications about 21 chapters..
Then I see the privileged thingy..
My disappointment was immeasurableGamers of the Underworld · C116
Saarlink: pointlessly deep with waaaay too much ambiguity. Still a good read but I hope this doesn't contime.The World after the Fall · C16
Shifty_DaoistMage: Nuclear Gandhi is the best character in the gameGamers of the Underworld · C63
Pepesigh: He's coded that way, it's an Easter egg from a bug in the original Civ. His aggressiveness used to be the absolute minimum, but some events would lower aggressiveness, As a result his value would overflow and he'd go from minimum aggressiveness value to maximum aggressiveness. Since then Nuclear Gandhi has been a Civ staple.Gamers of the Underworld · C63
SmilingReader: Not sure who the greater devil is-Sherlie milking his goblins for all the magic stones that he can or Ghandi preaching world peace while he drops nuclear bombs on your head 🤔Gamers of the Underworld · C63
Lottie_Baskerville: yup and it will continue to be peaceful in the future too.
- the novel won't be so serious but rather of 'go with the flow' theme. More focus on building the dungeon (game updates), hilarious interactions between gamers and their reaction towards the game.
Of course the plot will progress but in light hearted tone.
(SOURCE: skimmed through few raw chaps)Gamers of the Underworld · C20
ImortalButterfly: If you google search the novel title in english, you can find the Novel Updates page it. Novel Updates will have the original Chinese title under Associated Names or something like that. I often use this method and then google search the original title to find the raws.
This method also has two bonuses. The first is that sometimes someone else has already translated a bunch of the story under a slightly different translation of the title and you'll find that title listed under Associated Names as well or even direct links to the chapters. The second is that if you google search the original Chinese title and look through the links, you can usually find all but the most recent chapters on websites other than Quidan for free if you're having trouble getting locked chapters from the Chinese site.Gamers of the Underworld · C10
Carefree_shadow: Jesus only 20 chapters the greed is real with this novelReturn of the Legendary Hunter · C1
DevilsMocktail: Paywal in less then 20 chp adds to itReturn of the Legendary Hunter · C1
kugguj: Qidian does an awful job of promoting its Korean novels, 1 month and this has 3k views and 0 comments aside from the one I'm posting after discovering it 10 seconds agoReturn of the Legendary Hunter · C1
TheOneWithBooks: Overall the updating is very bad!! Like very bad, but some how the author has time to stockpile chapters??? Clearly done for money which is disgusting!! As around the 10th chapter you are already paying with stones to view the chapters and at the 22nd chapter you need to pay for privileged?? My advice is not to start reading DO NOT READ THIS NOVEL, unless if you are very rich and want to waste moneyReturn of the Legendary Hunter
Saarlink: This is amazingly...cute? Sweet? I'm not sure what the right word is but it is great fun to read.The World seems Realistic but Why do I have a Leveling System? · C3
The World seems Realistic but Why do I have a Leveling System? · C9
HalonFox1: Noooo the mage buildThe World seems Realistic but Why do I have a Leveling System? · C9
MinxMean: Oh no, exposed. x.x
Actually just finished reading that novel and I enjoyed it a lot <3The World seems Realistic but Why do I have a Leveling System? · C6
Weirdo: Is this inspired from only I level up?..The World seems Realistic but Why do I have a Leveling System? · C6
The World seems Realistic but Why do I have a Leveling System? · C3
Divine Beast Ascension · C49
Saarlink: Gets stronger by eating? By listening to Grandpa's stories? By running really fast? So many options!Divine Beast Ascension · C47
Divine Beast Ascension · C47
Divine Beast Ascension · C46
EndLockingChapters: Same author as Castle of Black Iron I believe. He's making the same mistakes yet again. Story barely began and already racism. Plus already started the filler crap. A whole chapter about a freakin bow and what its made out of, a weapon that's gonna become useless after 1 or 2 more cultivation breakthrus. Considering its the beginning of the novel, he's gonna breakthru quickly. Was a whole chapter really necessary for a bow that might be with us for maybe the first 100 chapters?
Plus trying to make the MC smart when he's just kissing butt. A little butt kissing and everyone around him falling head over heels for him.
Now he's gonna make a gun? Whats the explanation gonna be? A whole chapter on Chinese education system thats so outstanding that they prepared him to make anything anywhere? <- Sarcasm
Also: SAY MY NAME!^Silver Overlord
ur_stupidity: Okay. So firstly. I tried. I really tried to stick with this novel. And give it leeway cus gaming novels are hard with stats and balancing RL and VR. But seriously author. Wtf. Are you even rereading your work? Making notes of past chapters? Planning and outlining? Listening to the reviews?
It’s an amazing concept and the first chapter was excellent. But then it’s just downhill at a ridiculous pace. I would suggest rewriting it from the beginning. But take time and plan. And observe how other novels are done. You need to plan not just the MC development in game and outside. But also the game world. Story line. Skills. And stats. And most importantly. You need to stick to your own details. Also it seems the stats are messing you up terribly so just ignore them and use descriptive and vague words. Allow for auto assignment and development of stats. Plz avoid over done % effects that can stack and fixed damages that will be be no sense when ppl level up their HP. Sure 500 damage is cool at first. But the time the MC is able to use the move his HP is already over 2000 and he isn’t even a tank. Much less later. Also the progression of the stats leveling up is inconsistent and just random. You are doing too much too soon. Overdoing everything. Rewards. Leveling. Masteries. Churning out legendary equipment within the first year of the game when it’s the the second to highest level of equipment with 5 levels under it??? That breaks the game especially since he can’t use the weapons due to his class and rich ppl suddenly own the game.
You need to develop your story. Not just **** it out fast. Take time to fight and learn and grow your character and their world. He is just blazing through time, fights and stats. And it’s boring, inconsistent and useless. He isn’t even OP cus he has so little conflict to show OP ability and has very little impact on the world according to the novel.
So here it is. Final words. Remember that the best stories have cliffhangers due to conflict and real world relations and developments. As well as in game world development and changes. Not everything has to be directly and immediately related to the MC and you don’t have to force time and character progression. Character and world development is more important. A whole chapter on the effects of a players actions can still be epic. Also include more humor and action. The story is too dry. More meat. Even if it means slower chapters and slower time progression. Also you need to decide what type of MC you are going for. A struggling MC with character development. Or an oblivious OP MC with insane luck and skill. Each one will have its own conflict storylines. OP ones mean more comedy and face slapping and will allow for broken dumb luck and unbelievable situations. Although you have to temper it to their character. Sly. Hotheaded. Etc. struggling MC will require more feelings and backstory and inner thoughts. Connections and deep bonds. And finally. You need to have goals. An MC without goals/standards is useless. Even if it’s just to have fun. What is their goal both personally and for the game. And this will affect their choices.
Writing a story isn’t ****** and shouldn’t just be done blindly. Put thought into it and passion. And reread your work. Compare to others of similar genre. Definitely google some writing tips.Cultivator in an MMORPG
Divine Beast Ascension · C40
KARBONZ: Last sentence put me off, if it's tragedy I'm dropping and if hes saying that because it's his laid back and lazy life will be over then that's not too badTrue Space Mage · C7
Dotter: This is a normal childhood! You know how rare it is to have normal childhood in this qidian site?True Space Mage · C3
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