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I had reread the chapter,and yes...The way you too much of skill explaining(Which is good by the way,but its too much...Hurm,like a cake...1 should be enough,but 3?4?Understand what I am trying to implying here?),making everythigs turn redundant...For me,just do your simplified improvement stat,like"Studying 15>17,Magic sensing16>17" something like in later part of the chapter...The one where you explain in middle part,it makes the chapter loss its light. Tis is strictly my own opinion,you can just ignore it if you want... View More

MrMerlin: I understand and I am grateful. No worries, I don't feel bad. Your honest opinion helps me improve. I really want to make story insta interesting, but fuel for it will run out fast without foundation. Or maybe my writing is just bad))
MC is not OP so it is kinda hard to introduce exciting parts and spells are not too interesting at first year))
I will do my best to come up with something interesting, I promise)

Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C11
4 months ago
No,its nothing wrong with your writing,but the skyrim system that makes it bored....I didnt even care if there is bad grammar,time skip or anything...But,the skyrim system that you used had made it boring...Maybe because I am not used to people using skyrim system,but in my memories,skyrim is actually quite fast and not slow as this...Not only that,the way you applied the system,hirm...I cant pinpoint it,but it let me felt something wrong there..Like,something is lacking... View More

MrMerlin: I understand and I am grateful. No worries, I don't feel bad. Your honest opinion helps me improve. I really want to make story insta interesting, but fuel for it will run out fast without foundation. Or maybe my writing is just bad))
MC is not OP so it is kinda hard to introduce exciting parts and spells are not too interesting at first year))
I will do my best to come up with something interesting, I promise)

Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C11
4 months ago
I will be honest...Your story may not be long,but its getting more and more boring...I humbly apologize for hurting your feeling,but as your reader,I think I should be giving you an honest reply...I will not drop,dont worry... View More
Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C11
4 months ago
He is long gone....From the moment he didnt resist Mad Saber from bringing him to Ling,he is far,far gone... View More
Serpent of the Chat Group · C55
4 months ago
Reading Status: C25
5 star just for the heck of it...Bite me if you want!!!!But use tongue when lick my RuyiJinguBang....I love to eat roast peanut with chilli seed,bite some tough jerky,sucking on flower pollen,having tea while snacking on roast octopus,eat fries with mayonis,licking my wife all 3 flower bud,reading bedtime stories to my kids preferably story with great moral,wearing socks on my hand and perform Mr.Socks versus Catzilla,sometimes Dogzilla of our house to entertain them,buying some bread for tommorrow evening snack for my wifw,watching Hachiko.....Is it 140 yet?Seems like alot.. View More
I am in Harry Potter!
4 months ago
For the balls,just give us the usual lemon tea moment,mild one please....Those chummy moment,dialogue that so romantic and sweet even ants got diabetes....And when he visit Neville and weasley,please show off their house asset...Like Longbottom glorious house specialty,threaten the bad uncle,train neville abit,the grandma give him some lesson about their house special charm,explore their dungeon...For weasley house,help them settle the stone elf permanently,charm their house with space charm,get twins some new idea for prank from muggle world,sneak to muggle world also fine..Accidentally found some underground kingdom,unravel mysteries... View More
I am in Harry Potter! · C0
4 months ago
Yes,I know...But you must also remember that she had done it a few times now,then its mean she really had not been clear with all Harry had told her....He had again n again told her about his background,his way of thinking towards everything,even his little secret...But she still had that bad habit,thinking like dumbledore,"All I done is for your own good"..And that attitude is what Harry hate the most...And come on,Harry is her 1 of the 2 friend,and she had known most of his attitude,especially the one with those teacher...But she still done it...To me,Harry is a 1 bad example to learn,but the way he thinks really should be reviewed seriously since what he done till now is for himself,just like normal human do....But Hermoine,she is a lost cause...If you ask me,I say'Dump Hermoine'... View More

Miteshkumarbag: Guys that girl grewup in isolation without friends its common to make such mistakes at ripe age of 11 they are in the first yr .

Hermione is not as mature as harry who is a fully reincarnated person and have a moral code of a trained killer .
Penelop is almost an ***** by magical standard and girls mature faster .
Dapheny is taught in politics since she was in the womb .

The only normal person here is hermione will low social inteligence she need time an a few chances to cope up with this old fogis in chil bodies .

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C90
4 months ago
But it still a high grade ingredient though...In HP canon,even its small patch of dried old shed skinn sells for few hundred of galleon,and its venom also a top grade stuff... View More

Original_Dorito: Well as a hunter he must have got money from that and well if he can easily kill the basilisk

harry potter and the true sorcerer · C11
4 months ago
If he is a junkies,then the broom quest will be easy.... View More
Wizardry System · C10
4 months ago
Aaahhh,potterhead is indeed potterhead...Just let them be,why would you help them?But mc still is potterhead,so even if he is slytherin,he will still help him by been friendly to harry and been shunned by Ron...And Rqvenclaw is the best house for wizarding system... View More
Wizardry System · C7
4 months ago
Did the practice room adding 1 extra hour for him to train or what?Just asking.. View More

JeffreyDO: did i say top 10. Oh goodness, need to change that to a 100. I'm missing zeroes today.

Wizardry System · C4
4 months ago
But he will surely love to join the adventure if not at least follow them and watch them doing all their stuff while eating popcorn....If I was mc,I will do the latter,follow them and watch real live action pack movie while eating popcorn....10m galleon,not so much considering that most noble family is rich,unless their are redhead clan... View More

JeffreyDO: A potterhead does not necessarily indicate a person who likes Harry Potter, the character.

Wizardry System · C3
4 months ago
I had a weird feeling tgat accidental magic is not indication of either they a squib or not...But sadly Ma'am Rowling didnt specified the requirement to be a wizard is to have magic,not accidental magic...Why cant they just let their kid go and test for magic?Surely there is a device somewhere that could help to determine either they have magic or not... View More
Wizardry System · C1
4 months ago
Baldy,dont do overgear fanfic please,I rather you to pick super mario bros as your fanfic...It will be fun,seeing you writing the mc keep banging his head on the ceiling or floating brick,stepping on turtle and let it slide,climb inside pipe and jump up to the flag... View More
The Road Of The Summoner · C0
4 months ago
Agreed...And whats with that dexterous finger anyway??!!!Even a big guy go moaning with a touch of his finger..And he is a freaking virgin in real life...And his child is stupidly handsome and got a harem,IN GAME,DATA HAREM....A data child,is there anything more stupid than this??Even his accidentally created legendary pick for mining is far more believable... View More

Earthshaker34: I hate overgeared. why? players are just whiny idiots who make me wish they didn't exist. they are fighting against a fucking blacksmith and whine about him having better items. the whole thing with Lord is just cringy. dude asks women to take care of his son, comes back 3 months later and his son already has a harem. so yea. pedophilia to the max there.

The Road Of The Summoner · C0
4 months ago

Earthshaker34: I hate overgeared. why? players are just whiny idiots who make me wish they didn't exist. they are fighting against a fucking blacksmith and whine about him having better items. the whole thing with Lord is just cringy. dude asks women to take care of his son, comes back 3 months later and his son already has a harem. so yea. pedophilia to the max there.

The Road Of The Summoner · C0
4 months ago
Actually I had this kind of teacger in middle school before too...A teacher that join music club,thinking that she is cool,a dark history...And most importantly,forever virgin...Till now...She is now,a 40something teacher and she is still....Sadly......A virgin... View More

Alvi101: Yeah

Start by Becoming a Mangaka · C491
4 months ago
Its just an excuse for him maybe...Since when does comment and review could influence anyone to stop their story anyway?Its just an excuse that we cant deny because its his story and we are just a reader... View More

MedTryglaw: Somehow I do not believe the author, I suspect that he lost his will and enthusiasm ... Who is so mentally weak that he gives up after reading stupid comments from anonymous people on the internet? People are not always nice, they have different expectations and tastes ... and this is obvious to anyone who is more than twelve years old ... but not for the author.

Unlimited Spells Works - A Harry Potter fic. · C27
4 months ago
Hurm,cant really blame anyone here....So I am gonna go and eat some popcorn.. View More
Unlimited Spells Works - A Harry Potter fic. · C27
4 months ago
ITS OUR ALL TIME FAVORITE SUN MERMAID YAKUZA AND DISGUSTING MOON TSUNDERE!!!!!!!AND DONT FORGET ABOUT SOME CHIBI CONCHSHELL!!!!!!!!! View More
Start by Becoming a Mangaka · C492
4 months ago
The rock wannabe teacher... View More

SuzakuRyou: K-on..

Their teacher

Start by Becoming a Mangaka · C491
4 months ago
Or someone just accidentally saw his main pokemon,then pair up to comet destroyer white flame monkey,and BAM!!!"ITS JULIAN!!!!".....And whole world break in chaos due to the accidental truth that had been revealed and people manhunt Julian... View More

Basement_Keeper: Was I the only one who thought about stuff when I saw the title.....
Break the news:
-They got a baby?
-more like break the hymen
-fuk my life( is this gonna go hiatus?)
-someone's gonna break up???

Journey Towards Greatness · C207
4 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C129
4 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
A World Worth Protecting · C92
4 months ago
Makes it modern,clean of all the dust,do some great lighting and instead of a mess of box,put a shelf like in the chinese medicine store and let each shelf had only 1 wand,with a label and prize... View More

EternumLAWS: Rebuilt the Store of Olivander i think this old man and old store need a care.

I am in Harry Potter! · C24
4 months ago
Stupid dog that run like a blind dog,ram into train level speed big wolf,nearly die,got heal,and forget about it....And all those BS!!!!LOL,funny dude....And selling books?Create some photocopy magic machine for magic book!!! View More
I am in Harry Potter! · C24
4 months ago
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BlankVicky: Welp that's good too here but what I want to delay the MCs training and make his foundation too sturdy to say because he is running with time and all to keep up with his multiple enemies in TTT, stairs,hell,DSC and heavens and his way of cultivation is too fast to keep up you know so that's why I suggested this AST novel as one of them because it provides mc solid body cultivation with multiple occupation with perfected by previous owner of tech. Welp if you add that pendant to this MC (Yue yang then it's like he is skipping his cultivation because 1st 4 levels of pendent are based on sex partners and given time he can easily open other level too and don't forget his skills too it makes him op in 1 week for DSC and in one month he can conquer whole TTT and 9 month he gotta control the ¼ of heaven only based on introduction of pendent not tech.) So he gotta lots of time to complete LLS plot and travel to other World too may be he can mess with doldou world (Welp there's 4 type of rings shows in 4 manga which upgraded version of history of rings evolution)

Ultimate Summoner System · C1
4 months ago

BlankVicky: Welp that's good too here but what I want to delay the MCs training and make his foundation too sturdy to say because he is running with time and all to keep up with his multiple enemies in TTT, stairs,hell,DSC and heavens and his way of cultivation is too fast to keep up you know so that's why I suggested this AST novel as one of them because it provides mc solid body cultivation with multiple occupation with perfected by previous owner of tech. Welp if you add that pendant to this MC (Yue yang then it's like he is skipping his cultivation because 1st 4 levels of pendent are based on sex partners and given time he can easily open other level too and don't forget his skills too it makes him op in 1 week for DSC and in one month he can conquer whole TTT and 9 month he gotta control the ¼ of heaven only based on introduction of pendent not tech.) So he gotta lots of time to complete LLS plot and travel to other World too may be he can mess with doldou world (Welp there's 4 type of rings shows in 4 manga which upgraded version of history of rings evolution)

Ultimate Summoner System · C1
4 months ago
Reading Status: C360
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WELCOME 2 "RICE'S" daily Jokes !!!!
4 months ago
Sex....Sex everywhere... View More
WELCOME 2 "RICE'S" daily Jokes !!!! · C360
4 months ago
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