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Nice and all but how would his father even know that those books are important for him?

ch 15 Death and Domain - Chapter 15

Harry Potter: Death and Domain

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ch 11 Devil Fruit User

One Piece: Gacha System

Anime & Comics · HereAlice

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nice chapter

ch 62 Liam's Worth for Crew and Crew Belief for Liam

Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates

Anime & Comics · Evil_Paragon

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Missing the details, feels more like a step to step explanation but it's okay I think.

ch 0 7 An Unforgettable Night

One Piece: Gacha System

Anime & Comics · HereAlice

1yr

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Feels like a parody from Harry Potter's first year.

ch 40 Chapter 40. Invisible Nightmare

The Slytherin Magus

Book&Literature · _Ink_

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Thanks for the chapter.

ch 47 V.2 Chapter 18

Swordsman System In Naruto

Anime & Comics · Mathematical_Pi

1yr

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Starts out good with new innovative ideas. Later on, author goes the usual rout with canon ... . For me the story goes downhill there, plus, with the change of the story it feels less than a One Piece story than a story about a guy with mental problems.

One Piece: Wild Hunt

Anime & Comics · Einlion

1yr

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Story is good but kind of awkward with Danzo around and how MC behaves...

ch 46 V.2 Chapter 17

Swordsman System In Naruto

Anime & Comics · Mathematical_Pi

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It's easy to understand, character is quite competent it seems.

ch 11 Author's note

Naruto : Mizuki Reborn

Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker

1yr

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Story itself would be good but I can only give 1 star to story development and stability of updates. Author is revising the story all the time and deletes chapters already out. As a reader you don't know whether you have to reread or not. Better be slow with the chapters than deleting stuff already out.

Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi

Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario

1yr

Replied to TOS

It's too see that he loses at the start but I thought he can't die to many times as it affects his vitality?

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Nice fight

ch 0 8 Not a good day

Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi

Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario

1yr

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Thanks, nice progress.

ch 20 Chapter 20

The Will of Gil (Gilderoy Lockhart SI)

Movies · DragonField

1yr

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Liked it more before the edit but...

ch 0 6 The anger

Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi

Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario

1yr

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Hopefully he isn't that "special" that there is only one black crystal.

ch 0 6 The anger

Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi

Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario

1yr

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Build up of the story is good but I sometimes miss the detail. Like he has some abilities but the story doesn't really show when he got them. In the last few chapter the story is a bit too much focused on "every woman likes him".

Naruto: Cool Shinobi

Anime & Comics · lbj_169

1yr

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Thanks nice work

ch 0 4 Ch.4 - The Train of Fated Encounters

Transported in Harry Potter

Book&Literature · DefinitelyNotACat

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Thanks

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Thanks, don't like such abilities though.

ch 35 Devil Fruit Abilities

Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates

Anime & Comics · Evil_Paragon

1yr

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Thanks for the chapter. Compared to the other good chapters it was only so-so. Felt as if the MC was under a confundus charm.

ch 26 Healer

Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)

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Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi

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