Phoeneix

5mth

Posted

The author keeps referencing to things that he never explained. Some knowledge from reincarnation? Never mentioned during the story development... Some reference of system drops? Never mentioned why is it different for him then to other players. I think he thought we will just know those background information that should be in the prolog or first chapter without him ever writing or publishing it. The story have potential but the immense lack of world and situation background drastically decrease it's quality. If those are fixed tho, there is potential...

Deities: Starting From Goblins

Games · Gray Ashes

Phoeneix

11mth

Commented

What do you mean there are no assasins and the Knight class are popular? Dude, if you played any MMO, you know that the plate armor classes are tanks and they are never popular as the popular classes are the ones who does the most dmg. And assasin is a synonym for DPS

Alex nodded and looked carefully at the interface, he chose the Assassin class, he had never seen anyone with this class, but he knew as an assassin he should focus on his speed and stealth.

MMORPG: Strongest Assassin Online

Games · Mhizta_Ray

Phoeneix

2yr

Commented

Then all the epic and semi legendary item became useless after 20 level? Does that mean that the excalibur that he just bought will be useless after a few level? A bit contradictory or spending money on things that will be useless to you soon...

After the first major update ... items would start having durability and equip conditions , one of which being level ..... level 30 dark gold equipment could only carry you till level 50 max .... although you should change it every 5 levels ideally ..... With the bulk player base still at lv15 to 17 this LV30 dark gold equipment design set would help him mint money for months to come.

MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master

Games · Raj_Shah_7152

Phoeneix

3yr

Commented

"good to him and his mom" ?? Previously it was stated that he met him after 2 years of his mom's death... It does not add up...

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Apocalyptic Family Reunion

Fantasy · snowstorm16

Phoeneix

3yr

Commented

If she did not talk with them 6 years now, then lived 7 more in the apocalypse not talking with them before coming back, then the amount shouldn't be 13 years at least?

"Lia dear.?" Listening to her mom's voice she hadn't heard in 6 years Emilia's eyes teared up and she called out with a shaking voice

Apocalyptic Family Reunion

Fantasy · snowstorm16

Phoeneix

3yr

Commented

Quite large? For someone who ran away at the end of high school? That amount is unreal. A university graduate usually starts around 60-70k annually and higher management with 10+ year experience earn about 120k... So the 250k is total bullshit for a high school graduate.

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Apocalyptic Family Reunion

Fantasy · snowstorm16

Phoeneix

3yr

Commented

I'm not sure you are aware about how much a house costs. If a normal office worker could just buy 3 house and modify one from her pocket after working for 6 years, then 99.9% of the population are doing something really wrong.

"Hi is this Mr Song. Ya this is Miss Lu , right the one who bought house no 5 in Jinya gardens. I would like to buy house no 4 and 7 . Yes I'm serious." Looking at the time and seeing that it was still 5 Emilia decided to get it all done now. " Mr Song is it possible to go through the procedures now, we can meet at 6:30 if your ok with that? Ok Mr Song I'll see you later today. Bye then."

Apocalyptic Family Reunion

Fantasy · snowstorm16

Phoeneix

3yr

Replied to DaoistaWfwkB

Well when you go to a LAN party weekend in the '90, then you don't want to miss anything. :)

Hours passed without sleep: 71.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Fantasy · Reili

Phoeneix

3yr

Replied to Phoeneix

Well I slept for about a day after that tho, but I'm normal. :D

Hours passed without sleep: 71.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Fantasy · Reili

Phoeneix

3yr

Commented

Just beginner numbers. I achieved that already during my teenage years and my stats are not enhanced by the system. If I had a system, depending on the level, going without rest for a week or two may be possible.

Hours passed without sleep: 71.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Fantasy · Reili

Phoeneix

3yr

Commented

The iai strike is when you draw the sword. If he is already battling with it, then it can't be an iai strike...

"Stay focused. "Alef, their instructor, barked dryly as he parried an attack with his katana before beheading his opponent with an iai strike.

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize

Phoeneix

3yr

Replied to Dex2

... I think you totally missed my question. If you read carefully then you should remember the zhorion hunter and thrall hunter feats... That was the reason why he decided to kill all of them with lava, to complete those feats.

ch 322 Being Heavy Isn't That Bad

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize

Phoeneix

3yr

Commented

What about the Zhorion and Thrall killing feats? Those should have reached the highest rank too!

ch 322 Being Heavy Isn't That Bad

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize

Phoeneix

3yr

Commented

This should be 9. Originally he had 4 on level 1 and during the 5 level ups he git 1 on each

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The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

Fantasy · DonnEll

Phoeneix

3yr

Commented

This is the same as the previous chapter...

Janus(A Filler Chapter)

Versatile: Alternate World

Games · Kyosei

Phoeneix

3yr

Commented

With fractured arms?? yeah... bullshit. You cant even lift with it, not to mention drawing a bow that puts much strain on it. Use a bow first before writing bullshit.

Summoning her bow, she saw down and started to shoot the birds out of the sky one by one. After the first wave was killed, she jogged over to collect their bodies. After all, it could be used for food later.