RustedSoul - Profile

very nice novel, descriptions are fleshed out well and very detailed. excited to see more content

I like the story and concept a lot. There is a lot of development and internal dialog which can be used to understand situations and events. Progression is also very good as the transitions from one event to the next does not feel out of context, place, or weird. the only thing would be writing errors here and there. I understand what it is saying even with the errors but it is just here and there.