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  • Never Date a Man in Pink

    Never Date a Man in Pink

    Fantasy Romance romance magic comedy mystery supernatural horror fairy korean

    4.9

    A prophecy says Ye Rim will be rich and famous, but a man wearing a pink shirt will become her lover and cause her death! Dr. Kim is a handsome and famous plastic surgeon with a bad temper, but he hides a secret. While a supernatural peril looms over them, discovering her best friend is a fairy that is sabotaging her love and career life is not as bad as discovering there is another prophecy about her! ***** . ***** Fate united Nam Ye Rim and Jung Eun Ha through a supernatural event on the day of their birth. Years later, Ye Rim strives as a singer in a shabby place, singing old songs to a diminishing audience. The fairy Eun Ha learned to use her wand by herself, but all she can do is jinx and accidents. A few months before the due date, the prophecy seems about to happen when in unusual circumstances Ye Rim accidentally meets a man in pink shirt. What is this man’s secret and how the incident in the two besties’ births is interconnected to the supernatural events happening in the city right now? Read and discover! _____________ Hello. It's a story meant to have a slow pace, and will include mystery, crime, horror, monsters, fairies, hot leads and hot support characters, some misunderstandings, a lot of comedy, lots lots lots of plot twists... And a dose of romance, of course. I'm not writing to get a Nobel Prize in Literature or anything. Also, English is not my first language, so... Peace. ____________ Updates: 4 chapters/week Let me know your thoughts, please rate and comment. Knowing someone is reading and somehow appreciating, helps a lot! Lots of love! Buy me a Coffee? https://ko-fi.com/vanjos

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SSBGoditz: There are frequent grammar mistakes and tense changes, but not so much that it detracts from the writing.
The prose itself seemed a bit dull and boring. There was nothing that drew me in, and I had to force myself to read the 1st (2nd) chapter.
I found the prologue unnecessary, though I guess it served as a sort of buffer between the source and this fanfic.
POV is sometimes messed up, and a general lack of description and sensory detail meant the world (if I can even call it a world) lacked depth, uniqueness and a lived-in feel.
All in all, events seemed to happen for the sake of happening, with not much emphasis placed on the importance of said events for the POV character.

A focus on telling events also led to a lack of description. Characters... I can't say much, except that the one character introduced thus far seemed rather dull.

As for world design, the novel seems to want to focus on the in-game Glory world (evident in the introduction of VR) but again, the overuse of 'telling' meant it fell short.

Overall rating is 3.2.

New Age of Glory (The King's Avatar Fan-fic)
2 days ago
Omg, I'm so curious now!!!! View More
Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana · C7
4 days ago
Oh she's so scared! I pity her. The sisters are so likeable! I hope the two sisters are really alive, btw .. 😱 View More
Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana · C6
4 days ago
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Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana · C6
4 days ago
Good grasp of **** confused emotions. Keep uo doing the great work! View More
Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana · C3
4 days ago
Ah I see.
I'm sure there are more people like me who likes romance mixed with something else. Pure romance is a bit boring and predictable most of times. But your book have a refreshing quirk. Soon I will review it, even though it's a established book already. View More

Norah_Koch: Well, I changed it back to the old title. I don't find the new one fitting for the story since it's slow romance and more supernatural stuff.

Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana · C0
4 days ago
Waiting to learn more. I didn't read the "cheat" chapter because I like so see how the writer will explain inside the story. So I'm curious. Good start, I'm liking so far! 😘 View More
Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana · C2
4 days ago
That's an interesting thing. Your new title would never have attracted me to pick your novel, but I think I'm an exception. I am surprised because I literally picked your book few minutes ago (other cover by the way), but when I tried to add to my collection it vanished. I needed to search by the author's name, and try to guess from the options.
Just so you know. 🙂 View More
Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana · C0
4 days ago
Nice. View More
Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana · C0
4 days ago
I started reading a book called Supernatural Adventures and suddenly it becomes His detective wife.
Not sure if it's a bug or the author decided to change the mood and theme. I liked the first chapter. View More
Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana · C0
4 days ago
Well, I can relate. Also, I barely have time to read, myself. Yours and another one are the only novels I still read. Frantic real life. But, I hope you find your inspiration back. View More

Aysel_Inara: Will increase word count further. It's just I'm kinda losing motivation to write and planning to quit. *Sighs*

Calla Lily, The Eunuch King's Goblin bride · C36
4 days ago
Ahhh so short...😢 View More
Calla Lily, The Eunuch King's Goblin bride · C36
5 days ago
Guy, you have a good start. But your novel needs editing. Like, serious editing. Many things are translated in a way it doesn't make sense. Good luck, you have a good idea, but it's tiresome trying to guess what you meant in some parts. All the best! XOXO View More
Law Sukai · C1
5 days ago
Thanks! View More

DaoistGenerics: Take my powerstones.

Never Date a Man in Pink · C23
5 days ago

Bumbaboon: I really like these scenes. Your dialogues are great, so natural.

Never Date a Man in Pink · C56
5 days ago

DaoistGenerics: Take my powerstones.

Never Date a Man in Pink · C23
5 days ago

RingRingHello: She's as weird as Eun Ha hahaha

Never Date a Man in Pink · C43
5 days ago

RocketMan: Uhn faunny conversation. He's calling! Interested! But she's truly itneresting, not like some MCs that have the only advantage of being the MC, as they are boring as hell.

Never Date a Man in Pink · C39
5 days ago

PenelopetheSpider: The whole hunting was very interesting, thanks for the story!

Never Date a Man in Pink · C51
5 days ago

Aysel_Inara: I was like (hahaha) the whole way😂

Never Date a Man in Pink · C21
5 days ago

PenelopetheSpider: He has this problem, being so hastily to judge...

Never Date a Man in Pink · C52
5 days ago

Sunset_Vermont: After this night I feel Kim and Nam are going to date like in a week?
They are more comfortable now and even Kim admits he may like her

Never Date a Man in Pink · C50
5 days ago
He's even touching her...wand. View More

Sunset_Vermont: This hunting is just drawing them close😁😁👏👏❤️❤️ hehe

Never Date a Man in Pink · C49
5 days ago

Sunset_Vermont: This hunting is just drawing them close😁😁👏👏❤️❤️ hehe

Never Date a Man in Pink · C49
5 days ago
Wel, he is not the son of a conglomerate CEO or the such, as Ye Rim thought at the beginning. View More

Sunset_Vermont: Hmmm I liked grandpa backstory

Never Date a Man in Pink · C48
5 days ago
I'm not sure I replied already because I'm really busy, but thanks for your kind words! View More

Mukta: My my... Author, you narrate so damn well 👌👌
This is just so amazing. If this is just a prologue then I don't think I can even imagine what beautiful journey you have planned further ❤
Small details are even described so well. The vast difference between two characters 👌
Amazing 😍

Never Date a Man in Pink · C3
5 days ago

Sunset_Vermont: Hmmm I liked grandpa backstory

Never Date a Man in Pink · C48
5 days ago

GroovyWoody: I bet she's going to ask him what they were talking about

Never Date a Man in Pink · C43
5 days ago

Mukta: My my... Author, you narrate so damn well 👌👌
This is just so amazing. If this is just a prologue then I don't think I can even imagine what beautiful journey you have planned further ❤
Small details are even described so well. The vast difference between two characters 👌
Amazing 😍

Never Date a Man in Pink · C3
5 days ago

CuteAegyo: Well, Lee was using a pink shirt too, so I think he's winning this dispute somehow in the future... He's a wolf in sheep's hide, mark my words

Never Date a Man in Pink · C42
5 days ago
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