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Naruto: Dream to immortality
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Naruto: Dream to immortality
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Awn0021: Can not be! MC who does not give a damn about his "mother"?! Finally!

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1 week ago

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Naruto: Dream to immortality
1 week ago
Hahahaha 🤣🤣🤣🤣 I know I confuse so many stories also. View More

fearlessj2008: your right it was a different story that i read earlier today had to go back and look.

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C33
1 week ago
Plus I gave no info on his first life in the first chapter.
Get your facts... AND THAT IS A FACT 😎 View More

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Naruto: Dream to immortality · C33
1 week ago
Wait what... I think you have it confused he wasn't an otaku nobody... I think you read so many stories where the MC is an otaku nobody that you just assumed it was the same 😂 View More

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Naruto: Dream to immortality · C33
1 week ago

Sig001: People are stupid MC is fu*king awesome what is 'evil' anyway and he cares about something himself also i hope he wont go leaps and bounds for some wh*re that give hime no benifits beside her pretty useless looks.

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C22
1 week ago
😭 Thank you... I also love evil MCs... View More

neymar: Dont listen to him an evil character is always more interesting than a heroic one

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C22
1 week ago

neymar: Dont listen to him an evil character is always more interesting than a heroic one

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C22
1 week ago

neymar: I really like this character.

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C3
1 week ago

ganshunter: Good story I like dark main characters. Also, it would have been cool to steal Minatos future wife Kushina so that naruto would not be born.

Naruto: Dream to immortality
1 week ago

Roshaan: thx

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C55
1 week ago

InfiniteChoices: Hokage~sama

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C55
1 week ago

Electez: Good chapter and that's how it should be. Bros before hoes and all other duties, it's like chess really. Your bros are the queen while only your family are higher ranked and considered kings. So go and have more fun with them, both you and they deserve it.

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C55
1 week ago

HolyJoker: He wouldn't trust Oruchimaru I mean he did betray the Kazekage and killed him. But if he did ally with Orochimaru in anyway Yami would stab him in the back first. THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT I HAVE BEEN GETTING SH*T FOR MY CHARACTER SINCE I STARTED THE STORY.

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C3
1 week ago
Wow I just read the comments down there just wow...
Just saying here this story is fiction ok, it's not real...
😒*Staring at the profile picture* Ok I can't keep quiet anymore what the f*ck is that picture... 😑
Anyways lets get back on the topic... my MC isn't someone who is necessarily evil like someone who kills for fun... if he was able to achieve immortality easier and without k!lling anyone then he would do it... but he won't stop himseld from getting his hands dirty eather though if it's needed... if I was to define my character it would be Neutal Evil... plus I can't really change him now like 54 chapters in the story I have a plan for some kind of character development for him.... but that is waaaaaaayyyyy later in the story... also he is kind of like a finished product I mean he was manipulating in his first life and he is the same in this one I mean he did have the whole first life thing... soooo yeah... View More

TheDemonNazI: I like villians. But I advise you to read more villian stories to add more depth to the villian itself. Its more complicated than "(insert name) hates world and likes to do what he wants"

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C3
1 week ago
Wow I just read this right now I don't get a comment notification if you reply to someone else... Dude I don't know how some people got this idea that I don't like my mother in real life... I love my family in real life and would give my life about them especially my mother but even though I don't really base the MC in myself. If I was reincarnated I would never love my new family as much as the one I currently have.
I hope you are happy in real life and your mother clearly loves you, just be sure to treasure and love the people in you life. View More

TheDemonNazI: This made me want to kill the author and the mc. I mean my mom tried her best to take care of me and loved me with all her heart even tho she she got an injury before she left the army. And the i read about some dip**** not loving the woman who takes care o him. The woman who could have just dumped hims somewhere(and if she did he would be like " i hate you cause you dont care about me") and just not feed him. Yet he has the nerve to act like an edgy 12 year ols sociopath to his own mother? If i had a little brother like that id kill them in a heart beat.

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C3
1 week ago

DragonslayerKnight: What's wrong with y'all dumbass people. The MC just had a life with his family before his rebirth. Unless its a state that allows same sex marriage you can't have 2 mothers. Stupid Ass. It's like being a 17 years old new foster child being told to call his/her foster family mom and dad. If you get your head out ass you'll see the facts. Fucking Troll

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C3
1 week ago

WetToast: It's well written (for fanfics), haß an interesting premise and I like that it plays before the canon story so it doesn't turn into one of those storys that just repeat the main story with some changes (like 90% of all reincarnation fanfics do).

Naruto: Dream to immortality
2 weeks ago

Ikasuki: haha appreciate the reference (trying not to eb too ****ty in my replies) yhea so far I appreciate the story despite all it's flaws. I guess you should try to find at least 1 (if not some) beta readers, to help correct some basic mispelling, present/past tense, and formualting some sentence in a better ways. other than that the character in interesting (en if completely F up).

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C25
2 weeks ago

GodFather: his new nickname should be "Hell Hound" since hes a Inuzuka and all

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C54
2 weeks ago

blaiz: thanks of the chapter

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C54
2 weeks ago
Sorry 😢😢 ... I forget sometimes...
By the way are you enjoying the story so far... just saying... if you say no... I will hate and curse you...
no need to feel pressure we live in a democratic society... but also know that I have a particular lack of skills.......... So I will never be able to find you or
k!ll you... but if you like the story I have 2 old yougioh cards I have big shield girna and dark magician... you can have one of them... Actually I don't want to make that trade I thought I wanted to but I don't... sooooo good night 😴 View More

Ikasuki: you shouldn't put things like that into comment... If you feel the need to justify or explain you action put it IN your fictions, dialogues goes a long way in helping to flesh out characters...

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C25
2 weeks ago

Ikasuki: you shouldn't put things like that into comment... If you feel the need to justify or explain you action put it IN your fictions, dialogues goes a long way in helping to flesh out characters...

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C25
2 weeks ago
Also thanks for the comments and the help on how to personalize characters when they talk.
I am a new author so I am looking for improvement. View More

Ikasuki: Also from a village of ninja the fact that no one make the rapprochment between him being extremly cunning, extremly good at haggling, having his friends dead and the chief suddenly die just when he comes back from the war (without any prior warning of disease)... is weird... some of it could be overlooked because they are at war. But remember thay they are all assassins spies... you make all of them appear like brain dead maggots to make the mc appear more intelligent when he acts in clumsy and quite frankly not so intelligent ways...

P.S ... there are other words than "say" and "says" when you make your characters speak. Try to diversify it. You don't even have to use it. Make them speak, interrupt, question...

P.SS it's "because" not becouse.

Naruto: Dream to immortality · C27
2 weeks ago
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