Nicwatson

Mommy Bai closed the door, but Bai Qingqing still felt that it wasn't normal. She put her hand into the toilet while trembling, felt around for the switch, and then turned on the lights.

Nicwatson

2yr

Replied to Bonnie_Hopper_RN

No, he's a grieving father. It's understandable he'd feel that way.

Arthur had lost his children. Rather than saying that he had saved the little eagle, it was more of a case of the little eagle having saved him. The little eagle was his salvation, his child.

Nicwatson

2yr

Replied to nishidurani

And don't get me wrong, I have so far enjoyed reading the pov of Katherine and Charles. I think adding James or anyone else to the mix will cause the story to be drawn out. Maybe the others might make good side stories after the novel has been completed. That's just my opinion. Only you as the author know where your story leads and how you want it to be told. As a reader, what you have done so far has me hooked. Please don't give up.

ch 212 Barren lady

Villains also get second chance

History · nishidurani

Nicwatson

2yr

Replied to nishidurani

Half? 😳 Oh my. That's disappointing because I find your novel entertaining. I think what might be a problem with some is the language barrier. It leads to grammatical errors and confusion, but you have many loyal fans who are continuing to support you despite it. Please continue your wonderful work to completion.

ch 212 Barren lady

Villains also get second chance

History · nishidurani

Nicwatson

2yr

Commented

I think if you do too many povs the novel gets stalled. I already think there's too many different povs as it is. While it is nice once in a while and certainly adds insight and added detail, we don't need to read about every character. As it is, adding more storylines to the novel without any timely conclusion or advancement of current storylines will drag out the entire novel. If you drag it out too long, you'll lose readers. For me right now, I'm beginning to get frustrated by the changing storylines after every chapter or so. I think you're doing a great job and would like you to keep up the good work, but please keep in mind the slippery slope you are currently on with too many povs, too many storylines, and the constant change of storylines without advancement or conclusion.

ch 212 Barren lady

Villains also get second chance

History · nishidurani

Nicwatson

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic Wand

ch 211 to help a friend

Villains also get second chance

History · nishidurani

Nicwatson

2yr

Commented

Sometimes I want to smack Marianne. After everything, you'd think she would know better than to believe most - if not all - of the things that come out of Isabella's mouth!

Didn't she say that they were having physical relations?

Villains also get second chance

History · nishidurani

Nicwatson

2yr

Replied to Wilhelm_Vanderbek

🤣

He nodded, "I want you to put Phillip under you. And if possible provide him logins too." he replied gravely.

Villains also get second chance

History · nishidurani

Nicwatson

2yr

Replied to LeeenB

She's with Bluepool

ch 1072 Escaping Successfully (3)

Nicwatson

3yr

Commented

No sympathy from Bai if Alva were to force himself on Molly.

If she was Alva, she would care less and just pounce on her.

Nicwatson

3yr

Replied to Shazza095

Please look up the world "several" in the dictionary. It means more than two, but fewer than many.

Her soul had been buried for several decades in the ground, and her emotions had turned a lot fainter than before. If it wasn't because she had been dug out, her memories might disappear completely in another few years.

Beauty and the Beasts

Fantasy · White-Headed Dream

Nicwatson

3yr

Replied to Shazza095

It said SEVERAL decades, not seven.

Her soul had been buried for several decades in the ground, and her emotions had turned a lot fainter than before. If it wasn't because she had been dug out, her memories might disappear completely in another few years.

Beauty and the Beasts

Fantasy · White-Headed Dream

Nicwatson

3yr

Commented

😱😱😱

Harvey said, "You still have time to consider. I will experiment on wild birds first to practice before applying the treatment on you, increasing the chances of success. You guys can decide if you want to go ahead with the treatment then."