Webnovel Author: YueYe - Novel&Fanfic Collection

:3 It's BG, sowwy.

It's very understandable. As someone whose mother tongue isn't English, I can understand how hard it is for non-English people to be proficient in it. But your level of English is good enough for others to understand the gist of what you are writing. Don't worry and just practice more! You can improve your language with time ^^

That sounds very interesting! I'll read through your book when I have time and am also looking forward to your next work! I love stories with magic in it so I'll definitely be there to read your book! Wish you the very best! ^^

Actually, I'm not really into sci-fi and mystery stories but I've read a few. This story starts out slow but flows smoothly with no sense of interruption between the dialogues and the scene playing in the plot. The characters are distinguished well with their own features and their interactions and reactions are very realistic which makes it easier for the readers to engage with the plot. I love how you describe the actions and the event with simple words but gives a very detailed image in our mind. There are no grammar errors, which is really a plus point. I make mistakes in grammar sometimes too and correcting them really is tiring xD and reading a story with too many spelling mistakes or grammar errors just makes the reading experience feel bland. So I really love this. The author has a good writing style and it keeps the readers at the hook to know what really is going on. I enjoyed reading the first few chapters and I will read the rest as well when I have more time. Great job! ^^