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Just curious you stated wrath charged at pride which is limitless but in this chapter you have wrote reckless. Just wondering if it was a typo

I really love this story n wish I could spend more coins for privilege but the chapters you get compared to the price is a bit expensive compared to other authors prices for there stories. Is there anyway you can re consider the prices for privedlge chapters ?? I guarantee a lot more people will buy it to the the prices is readjusted. Just a suggestion though the final decision lies with you n I will still follow the story regardless I just yearn for my chapters but I’m on a budget 😭😭😭

Since there’s that many imagine when the nightmare is finished how many will become saint to further throw the world of sovereigns into choas and disrupt there plans If so many saint come from this nightmare then would there be a chance to fight back the nightmare spell in earth? Also this is a good chance to see one of sunny teammate he led in the center of Antarctica. Me theory for this nightmare is that there’s that many people this is going to center on how the army of the dead came to be and why there fight is every lasting and the true reason on how the war came to be. Pretty sure we shall se the daemon Ariel make an appearance and maybe even some information on weaver if we’re lucky. Heck we might even see hope as she might have came to Ariel’s tomb after her prison break !! So many possibilities and I can’t wait to see where the nightmare takes us !!

Not a Hassle at all , happy to help how ever I can!!

Nice way to wrap it up in a few chapters after the last time you asked for your readers opinion I’m def interested to see the politics and other relationship between charcter to continue Also if you want to slow down the story you can def do tht now Liam is at the third rank n soon yo be zenith remember even in BOTDS zenith usually took hundreds of years to advance, when Noah was rank 4 he managed to do it in a few decades before he slowed down a lot, Work with how creative Noah powers can be when combined to find new and creative ideas instead of a power boost in rank As always take what I say and see what resonates with you , your doing great and keep it up!! Hope you have a great day

Nothing is perfect just try your best and as long as you know you put your 100% into it then be happy making mistakes is how you learn . Always progress never perfection

It would also helped if you maybe develop a bit of the side character a bit more and there influences on the plot to help getting more depth into the story

It’s not boring as it’s great to see how much Liam’s strength as progressd agaisnt real challenges but if I remember correctly this is the second or third tournaments in a couple 100’s of chapters so I would steer away from any tournament based plot lines for a while. Every reader of this genre knows there will be cliches tht come up but it’s the spin on the cliches that making it refreshing, I like the detail of each fighter adding a rule to the fight as it is a nice spin to a tournament arc, but with Liam killing a zenith what would be his next match up?? Make sure to not write yourself into a corner and to make the main character suffer set backs instead of things always managing to work out even in the most dire of circumstances. What makes a great story is the ups and downs the Mc or even other characters related to the story plot go through and how they build themselves back up after the set back Go at your own pace and try to set up a vague plot line you see yourself writing and work on it from there, also if want to really go into it look up the writing concept of a “hero’s journey” helped me when I was writing as a hobby. A good example and twist to a hero’s journey is what marvel did in infinity war instead of the protagonist going through the journey the directors made the main villain Thanos go through the journey which is one of the main contributors of why tht movie was such a hit ! Sorry the rambling but hoped this helped some

Reverend insanity Legendary mechanic Shadow slave Top three on this app in my opinion (also BOTDS but this book is inspired from it so it’s not the list otherwise it would be)

He has traveled through the universe and reincarnated into Khan all the while trying to find the reincarnated June

I enjoyed the chapter as you said every chance he got was due to something else, you did mention time and time again how the damage on his body affected his fighting, plus as you said kha has an monster mana reserve since it’ a natural A teir mana core, so the spells are not tht much. Don’ take one persons negative comment to heart keep writing a story that you will like to read!! At the end of the day it’ all about having fun with it and not make it feel like an job Plus it’s fire so khan got burns throughout the whole fight not something tht will be immanent to his death like a stab or slash through vital organs, the vitals were protected just not the skin and muscles on his body. I felt like the battle made sense I’ll end it with tht

Thanks for all you hard work!!

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Always love the interaction of fellow colony memebers and how they perscieve Anthony from their pov

It’ not so much the women on women action as the author just showing how much the relationships of the the harem has progressed. There really wasn’t any smit stuff goin on

All kings know this requirement but the players don’t so unless a group just wantonly kill everyone on the floor until they succeed or have leverage over a king. So yea has you said it’ an easy and hard requirement indeed

Thanks for the ch!!!!

If you look at brenengars rise to power it also took him roughly 5 years. It’s just we were there for every step of the way so it feels longer then what it really is. Also remember he didn’t start his conquest right away, he still had to figure himself out and that of the situation he was in. It wasn’t till almost ch 100 ( correct me if Im wrong) that he realized that he would become a king. With this side of the story we get introduced to her near the end of her rise to power but at the beginning of her unification ( which also took brenengar a few yrs, but also remember the author said while our Mc focused on developing all aspects of society ( culture, miltary, economy, and anything else I forgot ) Itami mainly focuses on two of these aspects which is miltary and economics ( but she isn’t as good as brenengar in economics this regard) So therefore, although it feels rushed to you and may seem that way to others which is a valid opinion once you break down the details that the author left us the reader it all makes sense

I enjoy this side of the story it helps develop the world on a global scale instead of the view of brenengar and his Allie’s. Plus it adds a nice layer to the story the MC cant have global domination to easy as no one pre-modern age can contest with him. Plus we still don’t know which god reincarnated her and how she will react to this information. Keep up the good work thanks for all your effort!!!!

I read that with the hog riders voice fucking underrated comment right here 🤣🤣🤣