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That novel is golden. How could it not be choosen? It is beyond me.

A very classic story, many clichés, but enough personality to keep it interesting. I find myself actually rooting for the characters.

1min plank and 10 push-ups from the get go is an excellent start. He is either in better shape or way more determined than I thought.

the scariest thing he ever experienced is having an old woman shout at him ? We already knew nothing much happened in his life, but this is something else! XD

and gold and purple, but I don't think it has to do with imperfect or not.

Very interesting novel, I hope it resumes.

if the Priest could carve the Bones, why couldn't he carve the core?

It really is an interesting story. I love the subtle developments.

It is certainly an interesting take on the tropes. I am very curious about the development.

lol aura doesn't work like I would have thought, but it makes sense in a way. 'the shape of my will' has a nice ring to it. thought I don't see why he would have to leave the party, they just have to not interfere with the fight.

Didn't the cultists wear cloaks during the attack? how Can he recognise so many?

the narration is pretty weak and lessens greatly the impact, but the concept is very interesting.

oui. écrit par un français, avec un narrateur français vivant en France quand ce pays existe encore.

wow, predecessor was a pure douchebag.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

author asked for pointers so... here it comes: -use all senses, or the characters and events won't feel as real. for exemple, mentionning the pounding of blood in his ears from fear and pain is more effective than just saying "he was badly hurt" -show, don't tell. It is an universal truth in writting, but here I meant it for character development. exemple: mention of his shivering body, and tears of anguish due to betrayal is more effective than saying "he couldn't believe his Heroes sent his to his death". Honestly, this novel's setting and plot are very interesting and have a lot of potential, but I don't feel involved with the character, to the point I don't know if it will be worth to keep on watching him.

It is an awesome story. Thank you for sharing it with the world.

It is not perfect but I really like this story. Despite really annoying répétitions it's unique flair is really enjoyable.

Interesting new informations. It is starting to really look like a full 'complete' world.