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Well I do understand somewhat of what you say and know you don't have bad intentions.

i can agree with most of what you have written but the MC is not particular about who he mistreats or looks down upon. So i don't like the ***ism card you pulled.

Nah man you don't have to worry. I won't ask anyone to write novel in your conditions. You are a good writer and improving. And you are willing to learn which is tons better than many other. This type of novel is one that I don't generally read but I have binged your novel in 2 days. Just relax and at first write when you have free time.

I like your story though at first i didn't like it based on reviews. it is decent story. though i feel sometimes i feel you are trying to make things too complicated at times. another problem in my opinion is your slow pace and due to which it can't be enjoyed in this webnovel chapter format. Yours is i think something to be read in bulk like after 5 or 10 chapter. Overall i like it. I think it is right balance somewhere between extremes of all wish fullfilment stuff where everyone worships mc and the other extreme where anything and everything goes wrong for mc. Yours characters also feel like people though mostly shitty though that is mostly real life things i guess. Everyone isn't a shounen character. though sometimes it goes too grimdark, i guess. Like everyone has something dark about them them. Also you should gauge your story every now and then between realistic stuff and entertainment for which most people come to read a novel. Too much wish fulment type novel get stale pretty soon but too realistic also have problem of not always being entertaining. Though best of luck. I will follow your writing.