Badges 9
Moments 21
10mth
Replied to OtakuSumit ๐ will to each there own
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The Villain's Story
Fantasy ยท Blazuku
10mth
Replied to Creator_of_Chaos he is not a child. did you guys already forget it's a reincarnation story he has his previous life memories. and as you could see this is a takeover reincarnation. Not a fusion so, yes he's not a child
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The Villain's Story
Fantasy ยท Blazuku
10mth
Replied to Andrey_M he is not a child. did you guys already forget it's a reincarnation story he has his previous life memories. and as you could see this is a takeover reincarnation. Not a fusion so, yes he's not a child
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The Villain's Story
Fantasy ยท Blazuku
10mth
Commented hopefully you'll see the problem here. if he reincarnated and has full control over his body so young it makes him being the villain null and void all his actions will be his alone. you've just made him being reincarnated into the villain for no reason now. with how the butterfly effect works he would change the whole entire story. there would be almost nothing the same as he has written in his book. this means realistically when the protagonist meets him there should be no animosity towards him unless the main character here decides to antagonize the protagonist and become his villain anyways.
I remembered my past life when I was three years old, my name is max.
Villain of my own novel
Fantasy ยท _Eshwar_
10mth
Commented this story isn't very good man. it empty. Alot of nothing is happening.
ch 30 Ch 28: Jack Hollow's plan [pt2]
Surviving as the Second Main Lead: Second Lead's POV
Fantasy ยท daygonyuuki
10mth
Commented So a godly being doesn't have the self control not to look up๐. You could have simply made the dragon want the fight and have the dragon fly into his line of sight. So in turn the Mc would get into a fight he was trying too avoid.
ch 20 Chapter 20-Seeing Is Deceiving.
GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
Fantasy ยท DMadLord
1yr
Commented The portion where you talk about the solar system doesn't really make sense. You claim they don't know about the solar system and they think their world is on a snake's back. So if that's what they think why does he claim the solar system is the same? Where did he getting the knowledge that their solar system is the same? If he doesn't have actual evidence in the memory then is he just assuming that they're wrong. This is another world who's to say that the world isn't on a snake's back?
ch 0 9 9.ย Purchase. [1]
Sin and Virtue System
Fantasy ยท Oskar_04
1yr
Commented ๐ฉ
ch 141 Everything is a lie !
First Stygian Diviner:Apocalypse
Fantasy ยท Isaac_black
1yr
Replied to Thunderheadz man this thing has no flow. That the main problem with this whole story. It's all very disjointed.
ch 45 Betrayed
First Stygian Diviner:Apocalypse
Fantasy ยท Isaac_black
1yr
Commented So you're telling me he didn't realize she was hot the first time he saw her. Like for real man ๐
ch 11 Infuriating two beauties
Hitman with a Badass System
Action ยท don_offl
2yr
Replied to Hand_Number_37 THINK GOD
2yr
Commented going to punish the rapist says the rapist.๐
ch 154 Chapter 154
Everything will be my way!
Eastern ยท Wing_Span
2yr
Commented why was he in the slums in the first place???
ch 0 1 Nightmare
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy ยท Eveofchaos
OmnipotentApeGod
A Pure white.
The Villain's Story
Fantasy ยท Blazuku