Webnovel Author: Skaystha - Novel Collection

I like story at over all but one thing I don't like it it too much scheming. Yes it is good thing but why like gold expert stephon can be counted for his parents death but he is just subjugating him for schemes. but if saying scheming is good but taking down such characters bring more to emotional development you can have used other ways to hide news but keeping him alive don't sit well it makes me think mc is too inhuman no matter how much he help devlope his sister and rose in a way I feel he just give up on his parents when he just subjugated him instead of eliminating him

too much filler. less story devlopment lack of human relations and emotional quotient as all its is like a commentary of a single players game

bro not mob he just literally added a comedian elite mob to wipe normal mob and forcefully pulled Vivi till now whose story already ended🤣🤣

that's point but it's like author is just copy pasting man . I say don't add drastic change in plot but just add a little change in plot if you insert character

wow I think same at least author must change things little he is just describing straw hat journey with little tweak and MC perspective I say he just added a elite mob nothing much

here is the point man every thing is good expect 1 thing?? why are you copying and pasting one piece. If I say you are portraying MC as 3rd character view you just made him a mob like. if you don't change any thing or plot just keep MC for mob cleaning job?? you may try to make MC revalent a little as I see you are only copy pasting original one piece MC is just a elite mob which wipes weaker mob. It's not a story man there is almost no development of MC he is just getting stronger as elite mob. as I liked it at start personality of MC but through mid way I just started to doze of as it becomes more and more revalent that it almost copy paste just a little tweak and MC perspective added