Tyrant_Carmnine
Lv 5- Joined Sep 2018
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Original Works
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A Battle of Eyes Against the Gods (paused)
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What happens when an Entity of unknown power, who happens to get bored and entertained easily, decides to make his own entertainment? Our unlucky (Lucky?) protagonist doesn't even get to find out as he finds himself in a world of cultivators with a "Golden Ring" of a system inside his head. Under normal circumstances, finding yourself in another world would be the fantasy of an otaku but when it's the world of Against the Gods, Jin can't help but remember the lead character and frown. "Against the Gods? That means Yun Che should be here... If I run into that psycho who knows what might happen. On the other hand, he is a prick so it would be a fun idea to mess with him and keep those girls safe. Might even see if Qingyue is all the book made her out to be~ Not like he deserves her." Follow Jin as he tears up the plot, trolls the would be MC, and grows in power with the help of his snarky system. (I don't own the art, found it online) https://discord.gg/ra9maJK
Moments
If he remembered that, then he would know that there was no way she was in fatal danger. Maybe bruised and scratched up but not anything that would kill her. View More
Hassan_Hadi: her body is that of a normal human with the ability to create things so yeah getting slapped by a giant robot would in fact kill her
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C14
Playing with other Supernaturals · C37
Beast of Winter : The White Death (DxD FanFic) · C6
Ky4ler: Lol mc these days think with there dicks and not there brains lol at least he’s not a dick slapping idiot mc👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Playing with other Supernaturals
Shirou's life as the son of maou · C3
LordInsanity: Also don't listen to those guys saying harem this harem that, do whatever you want dude.
Playing with other Supernaturals · C34
Trazors: The ML is basically a pedofile.————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
Reborn Aristocrat: Return of the Vicious Heiress
Clara_the_fish: I liked this before it turned into pedophilia and sexual harassment. So maybe about 8 chapters. If you’re into that, you’re gonna have a field day. Have fun.
Reborn Aristocrat: Return of the Vicious Heiress
Akusa187: Be warned readers, the ML is a pedo who is grooming the FL. He is disgusting and creepy, but unfortunately, he's the ML. Very very nasty. D:
Reborn Aristocrat: Return of the Vicious Heiress
RoamingReader: The book itself seems to be interesting, HOWEVER the comments being made in chapter 60 are worthy of being repeated here. It does seem that the older male character is grooming the younger in age (albeit not as young in soul) character like a pedo would. Just a warning.
Reborn Aristocrat: Return of the Vicious Heiress
DemonicPanda: I've put so much hard work into this, it's like my child. Do you think I would drop my child?
Rebirth in Bleach · C88
RedSushi: Now you're just reaching at this point,like i said before, you dont seem to understand the difference in power levels between itsuki and orange boy.He is on a different power level scale you understand? DIFFERENT. Itsuki power level goes 100 -1000 ichigo power level goes 1-100.You get it ? No amount of time would change that,he could be sleeping for all i care and ichigo shouldnt be able to touch him.Youre talking as if ichigo has the potential to reach ituski in the first place,he doesnt at all.Itsuki is the mc on the novel,he has powers not in the scope of the bleach world.He shouldnt be able to be touched esp when he has trained to the point he cant hold his own against yamamoto.Youre basically saying ichigo at his pre time skip,pre hollow,pre mastered bankai form can hurt everyone in soul society.At that point what is the point of training for them if ichigo can just surprise attack everyone rofl.Ignorant.
Rebirth in Bleach · C86
Tyrant_Carmnine: Happy birthday.
For anyone complaining about ichigo hurting Itsuki, remember that his hollow side is way more powerful than himself normally and that side was bleeding through during the attack on someone not expecting combat.
It's like walking up to a friend and they suddenly punch you in the crotch.Rebirth in Bleach · C86
Rebirth in Bleach · C86
So far Itsuki has been training longer than Ichigo, possibly putting it in his subconscious mind that he's more skilled.
Itsuki already knows the story of Bleach, making it as if everything is going to go the way he wants so long as he acconts for his own involvement. This potentially making him feel everything is in the palm of his hand.
Lastly, Itsuki just finished a battle and recruited a new subordinate, while saving Senna. Unless he keeps up with who knows his abilities and who doesn't all the time, would he even think about Ichigo during all this and account for him lashing out? Especially after the fact Itsuki beat him so much that he twitches any time he sees him.
Under all these circumstances, is it really that hard to believe that a single surprise attack in Ichigo's currently most powerful state could reach him? The answer is rhetorical by the way. View More
RedSushi: I dont think you comprehend the difference in power between itsuki and orange boy,go reread the novel and you'll see how ignorant you sound.For your analogy,itsuki has a iron crotch.
Rebirth in Bleach · C86
Glasir: Sup bitches, hey author, please don't make a harem. Like harem is for losers yeah, lol. If your reading this brad, FUCK YOUR HAREM SECT and your over-priced chicken strips!
Hero-Villain System: In the Marvel universe. · C0
CHICK: In fact, this was very sudden, when he is not training he is working or having a rare time with his girls, the author is being too hard on him, ichigo should not have the ability to hurt him even if he was with the Limiter and previous chapters have suggested that he removed this limiter by being given permission, seriously, what happens in the author's head to get ichigo to hit a blow there ?! This was so unfair that I want the ichigo to die soon after the plot armor abuse, how many years of training does our protagonist have? go to hell with this stupid disability
Rebirth in Bleach · C86
For anyone complaining about ichigo hurting Itsuki, remember that his hollow side is way more powerful than himself normally and that side was bleeding through during the attack on someone not expecting combat.
It's like walking up to a friend and they suddenly punch you in the crotch. View More
Rebirth in Bleach · C86
DarkJaguar87: Bet Mingxue gets the Seph sword and Smelly boss gets clouds buster blade
Also gotta love how .
Mingxue older brother has been completely forgotten aboutBlack Tech Internet Cafe System · C497
ANON404: playing "Final Fantasy VII - One Winged Angel"
Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C497
yourservant: Sephiroth has come to the cultivation world. A whole new kind of edgelord is about to be born, god help us all.
Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C497
Playing with other Supernaturals · C24
Tyrant_Carmnine: Follow K.I.S.S. (Keep It Simple Stupid) and just have his Hero name be something like Prime.
Reborn in My Hero Academia with Superman powers · C10
Albanzeqiraj: If you finish this fan-fic it’s surely gonna be one of the best completed ones✌️
Rebirth in Bleach · C84
Long Live Summons, for example, got out of it by having it be that the girls all knew each other and the fact almost none of them instantly fell for Yue Yang. He had to put in work for his harem, while offering them a reason to stay. Namely getting stronger in a world where might makes right. Combine this with other factors and it makes for a good example as a harem.
High school DxD on the other hand, is a bad example for a harem. View More
Senior_Nepuko: Indeed my friend, it's all the execution!
But as I said, it's no the Harem's fault. If the author dosen't execute it well and dosen't give them true personalities, then even if it was Single Love it would've been the same. As this is a problem of writing.
Problem is, people started ahving this misconception where a lot of bad harems started popping, and I totally get that. It's just that at the end of the day, it's the author sucking at "Romance" in general, not "Harem". If you suck at romance, you suck at Harem and Monogamy. If you're strong in Romance, you're do a good Harem and a great Monogamy.
As simple as that.
Because if you suck in characterisation of the characters/femeale love interests, you do it everywhere XD.
have a nice day :)Rebirth in Bleach · C83
Senior_Nepuko: The Harem dosen't "ruin". People began having this misconception after sh*tty authors started focusing too much on on a Harem and made it the usual sh*tty Japanese one. Or when the girls' personalities are completely meaningless and they're basically just dolls.
It's a sh*tty *Romance* (and not just harem) that ruins. The whole "Harem ruins" is people taking their bias and pointing at the harem, saying it's its fault rather than the not-well exectuted romance and characters an author is doing.
Then it turned into a childish petty "Harem vs non Harem" instead of just watching the *Romance* itself. Ugh.
And no, I really don't see what it "ruined". It happening in this story is compeltely going with the MC's original personality, it also flowed natrually and smoothly.
The Seireitei is also old-ish and traditional, with Clans and stuff, not unlike the Feudal period, so again, it compeltely goes with it.
If it WAS going against stuff and ruined aspects, people would have already began shouting in outrage in the comment section dozens of chapters ago.
People who still wish for THEIR view on the matter to still happen even if it goes against any building and characterisation, that's called snobbish and being egoistic. Or Selfish. But humans are selfish anyway ;).....
And yes, if it was Single Love it would've went against characterisation established as early as chapter ~3, and would have ruined more aspects later on in the story.
Reducing the author's efforts to make it seamless the best he could, make it flow naturally while not neglecting the girls' personalities, all along him actually focusing way more on the story itself and the plot rather than "the" harem, to a simple "accept his decision"/"gg harem community", that's kinda not cool.
Seriously guys.Rebirth in Bleach · C83
Senior_Nepuko: Glad to see a like-minded fellow here. Even if the harem grows in the future, those 2 are absolute no-go for me. While granted, it's not NTR because it didn't happen yet, if it was simply that I wouldn't mind.
But they had frigging *KIDS*. We'll basically stop characters, innocent kids from existing, simply for lust or whatever reason.
Dosen't sit well for me.
Others are free game tho.Rebirth in Bleach · C83
Senior_Nepuko: Man, those bring back memories. Somewhere along the way tho, everyone turned quite and simply watched, and even as the Harem slowly but surely and smoothly unfolded, even the Harem-opposers were quiet XD.
A rarity in fanfictions *sweats*.Rebirth in Bleach · C83
