Webnovel Author: maddaug - Novel Collection

She did know but she didn't expect anyone 'beneath' her to fight back against herself or her champion if that makes sense.

Thank you so much for your in-depth feelings on it so far! It means the world to me. I think the cringe lines(No excuses though) are from me being a relatively new writer tbh. I understand where you are coming from completely and I am trying to get better as I go but man is it hard. I do want to answer some of your statements however as I feel like it might be useful for other readers to know as well as yourself. I made a mistake when first bringing Tina into the story and I have tried to amend that by making her more tolerable. I, personally, like her character now though I understand others may not. The only reason she wanted MC to not attack the group at the hospital was that they were the ones that saved them in a sense. She loses this empathy quite quickly however and understands that survival is more important than trying to make the right choice in a situation. I noticed that almost all of the strong characters were related to Lucas so I have been trying to add some foreign characters that don't even appear within Lucas's line of sight in the meantime. I only wanted some characters to connect to him because I thought it would be good for the story in the short and long term. As for the high-level monsters appearing randomly... I have no excuse for... It was just me being a poor writer in the beginning. I try and explain some of the future ones and make explanations on why Lucas can find them but for the beginning, it really makes no sense with the night cat. I also plan on there being much more to Lucas's crafting ability but he actually has to develop as a person before he finally comes to the realization of just how powerful it can be. He is stupid. I'm trying to show growth but it will take time for his stupid monkey brain to progress to at least a middle grader's level lmao. The change should happen relatively soon after the current chapter I have written however so that is good.

I never thought of that...

He just didn't want to have an item that was tainted by the goddess. It wasn't a smart move but more a personal choice than a tactical decision.

That's an interesting concept. I think if I implement that into the story(Probably will later on tbh) it will require a trainer to do so. The person training you will probably have to have more points in that skill than you and the higher the stat the better they are at training you(Plus relevant experience in teaching and related skills).

I'm trying to add more likable characters later on but I have grown to like Lina personally. Thank you for trying to stick to my book. I am a relatively new writer and have very little actual experience so hopefully my newer chapters prove that my skill is improving.

It is difficult for me as well. I'm trying to make most of the skills relevant but often make mistakes and forget about specific skills. I have them all kept track of in a 12 sheet document but man is it exhausting to keep track of all of them. I think here soon (At around 55 chaps in) I will post a full status sheet and have that be just one chapter in itself. Just so people have something to refer to when they are that far in instead of having to refer to individual chapters.

Yeah, there is a real serious reason why... but I would rather not say it out loud since I address part of it in a few chapters.

I feel you. I was debating for a hot moment whether to do it or not but in the end, decided that it should just let you evolve a lot more other things than just itself. Though that is not the end for all the secrets of the class... lol