dyzj

8mth

Commented

author-san, some people may say that you have spent too long on the tunnel ball arc. these people if they exist are wrong. everything you write is a joy to read. RISE OH DARK ANTHONY!

ch 1063 Chapter 1174 - The Rising Sun

Jeez. Even though I evolved, these guys are still an impressive size. I mean, it doesn't help that I'm so much longer than I am tall, meaning the War demon towers over me, despite being a similar mass. I guess I'll just have to bite your kneecaps off!

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

dyzj

1yr

Commented

It's fun, as always, and as expected! I'd say there's not a huge need to poke quite so much fun at the Chinese overthetop descriptive idioms, but that's what works for you, so I should shut up and let you get on with creating the magic I love!

ch 17 Review Please REPLY!

Classless Reincarnation

Fantasy · ClasslessAscension

dyzj

1yr

Commented

faster than a what?

Then before the foxes could do anything about it, the girl rushed out faster than a bolide!

Classless Reincarnation

Fantasy · ClasslessAscension

dyzj

1yr

Commented

sorry to hear it's rough bro. especially when you're low on $ it's hard to justify therapy, but solo or couples therapy could be a good idea. story is going well, I think this floors idea is good. and it's nice to see his old items/skills back! I wonder what form his ship will take this floor.

ch 157 157: 4th Floor Welcoming Party II

Titan Rising Online: World Breaker

Games · Anone

dyzj

1yr

Replied to ChellyArks

awesome :) no rush, I'll stay along for the ride [img=recommend] take your time.

ch 312 58.3 Endgame?

This is a Beta Test?! - A Literally Broken System

Games · ChellyArks

dyzj

1yr

Commented

what do you mean, actions have consequences? :o good writing :) but if shizu wants to walk away from some responsibilities, it's not so bad. also very fixable if she does want to keep princessing, I feel like without vesper, they'd probably revert back to neutral. I wonder if shade and maruki will stay if she's not a princess!

ch 312 58.3 Endgame?

This is a Beta Test?! - A Literally Broken System

Games · ChellyArks

dyzj

1yr

Commented

Vesper is far from blameless, putting a potentially unstable energy source directly below her city while she experiments on it. but I like that you introduce consequences/morality in an important, but also avoidable/ignorable way! classic gaming ignorance :)

ch 278 51.X Interlude: Righteous Fury

This is a Beta Test?! - A Literally Broken System

Games · ChellyArks

dyzj

1yr

Commented

I know you don't get much feedback. I only started reading recently, but have really enjoyed it. thanks for going as long as it has! and keen to see a book I like actually reach an ending (premature as it may be)! xo

ch 245 47.2 Meaningful Choice?

This is a Beta Test?! - A Literally Broken System

Games · ChellyArks

dyzj

1yr

Commented

hey author :) you've made it to chapter 150! well done, definitely a milestone to celebrate. the story and writing are going well, keep up the good work. remember to take care of yourself too! xo

ch 150 150: Elsewhere V

Titan Rising Online: World Breaker

Games · Anone

dyzj

1yr

Commented

chapter 100! congrats!

100: Tango In Red Salvation IV

Titan Rising Online: World Breaker

Games · Anone

dyzj

1yr

Replied to Anone

I'm excited! Thanks author :D That has certainly cheered me up! keep up the good works!!!!!

ch 40 040: A Family Affair

Titan Rising Online: World Breaker

Games · Anone

dyzj

1yr

Commented

Sorry author. I am really enjoying the story so far, but the last few chapters have had a lot of spelling mistakes, grammatical errors and nonsensical statements. I think you really need to spend more time on editing or get an editor (back?). But I really do like the story, world built so far, and where it's going! I will keep reading :) Keep up the good work! If you need to take rest, take rest. Or get an editor.

ch 40 040: A Family Affair

Titan Rising Online: World Breaker

Games · Anone

dyzj

1yr

Commented

simply Brilliant

ch 916 Just, Brilliant (1027)

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

dyzj

1yr

Commented

"infiltrate deep into the bushy parts"

Dash was usually only active for ten seconds before it got deactivated and went into cooldown mode. However, this was enough time for Chen to infiltrate deep into the bushy parts.