_raidha_

4mth

Posted

It just doesn't look like this is your first novel. You have a good control of your words and really love the initial development of the plot. It keeps the reader hooked.

Celestial Pervert: Reincarnation of an Immortal

Fantasy · Evil_Avatar

_raidha_

4mth

Posted

I love the initial flow of the novel. I don't swing by fantasy or action genre much, but it definitely adds to the list for now. Looking forward to reading the whole thing.

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_raidha_

1yr

Posted

It's easy to flow and has good writing. There are no grammatical errors and the author has done a good job in going with a background and then jumping into the plot.

_raidha_

1yr

Posted

I honestly got tangled up in the plot. From the world background to the innovative story-line, the author has a lot of potential to explore. Loved reading the initial chapters and hopefully, this story will go for an amazing plot development!

_raidha_

1yr

Replied to Biva

Thank you! Hope you stick around and love the plot as well! Would love to hear your insights!

_raidha_

1yr

Replied to Yusuf_I_JR

Thank you so much for your kind words! Hope you stick around and give love to my work!

_raidha_

1yr

Posted

It has a strong plot. Loved the details and character development. There are few grammatical errors, so it is easy to follow. Looking forward to the next chapters! Good job, author!

_raidha_

1yr

Posted

I love your work! Amazing details and easy to read. Loved how you portray real life lessons. Definitely adding to my library! It has a strong plot and no sloppy details.

You Are Mine, I'm Yours Season 2

Urban · safa_bukhari

_raidha_

1yr

Replied to Muthoni_Murira

Hehee

ch 0 6 History is Remembered, Not Repeated

_raidha_

1yr

Replied to Muthoni_Murira

yeah, she is the girl in the 1st chap. About brother, you need to read hehehe

She stood up after witnessing the rising sun, with a finished cup, a clear mind, and an abandoned heart. It's become a habit for her. A cup of chai, her on the lawn, and the dawn of a new day. A routine she devised just for that one person. That lone soul who preferred the sun to sleep. A soft laugh escaped her lips as she remembered that time, and her hazel eyes studded with saline tears. For her, everything revolved around that person in some way.