Webnovel Author: Dakie_Salamander - Novel Collection

The Overpowered Gamer by PercyPendragon3 on fanfiction net

Answer is easy. No respectable author would ever make money on WN (aka Qidian) who is owned by Tencent. Their offers and contracts are utter trash, they can freely break the contract and good luck suing them as they are based in China. Second, Webnovel.com is inaccessible in China as there are western authors who bash China regularly. If YOU break the contract, they will sue you for everything. They can also took over your work willynilly. It's in the contract. You can't have Patreon, SubscribeStar or any other income from your work as 50% of all profit belongs to Qidian (really, from every source). They also manipulate the ranking in all categories to promote Chinese authors and their incompetent translators/editors with elementary schoold English (and yes, even though it's banned in China...) That is why.

Great! Really like it! Writing Quality: From time to time mistakes, but nothing flow-breaking. Stability of updates: Could be better... *sniff*, Author has his own pace. His books are fun, so, let him take his time. Story Dev: well it's fanfic. However, now that the betaboy Momonga is not in the boss, it seems more interesting. Frankly, I didn't like the original much, because of MC. He was... so weak, psychologicaly. Now, we have somebody who is not. And slipped right into the role... World BG: Fanfic of Overlord. I guess most of readers knows the original and those who do not... will know

I tried to give it a chance. It was waste of time. But I won't respond to you anymore. If you don't want to put heart into writing... Well you do you...

I understand why you had to write it. Important for growth of character, etc... However, I think it could be skipped with the timeskip and shown as flashbacks before important scenes. I guess it would have bigger impact that way. Your training montage feels like the worst between japanese shounen and chinese xianxia. It was really not a good writing. Hey, but, you do you. It's your story. Otherwise the novel is fairly good and I enjoy it. Just hope there will be satisfying revenge/ brutal deaths. And I really hope, the MC won't turn into discount Naruto. I really want him to see to eradicate human race. I think it would be the first novel like that (where the MC destroys the world). And congrats to amazing spots on front page.

I quite liked your novel... however big problem is that 'school' arc... gosh, thats boring... you have high octane action and then suddenly go and show this... plus were there any kind of repercussions for gov after the release of the truth and his 'murder'? Because for dozen or so chaps there is nothing explained. Nothing interesting happening. At all. Like... it makes me to just drop it. Because now it feels just so... empty.

You know what is enjoyable character development? This novel is not it. The MC is major turnoff for reading past 10th chapter. He is so bad, it's just impossible to read.