Ifchickenandnuts

Ifchickenandnuts

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I read to much

2018-09-28 Joined United Kingdom
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Ifchickenandnuts
Ifchickenandnuts
13 days ago
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Nezumi

"I am Captain Rat, commanding officer of Marine Branch 16. I received information that this is the Arlong Pirates' base. I have come to exterminate them!"

Pirate: I'm! Golden Lion Jr

Pirate: I'm! Golden Lion Jr

Anime & Comics · INKSHADOWS

Ifchickenandnuts
Ifchickenandnuts
13 days ago
Commented

Oto and Kogarashi?

"Phew~ That technique belongs to the Golden Lion, doesn't it? And those two swords… Karamatsu and Sakura Ju."

Pirate: I'm! Golden Lion Jr

Pirate: I'm! Golden Lion Jr

Anime & Comics · INKSHADOWS

Ifchickenandnuts
Ifchickenandnuts
5 months ago
Posted

Overall it's fine, but the author has a habit of repeating the same thing over and over, one chapter was just talking about zoro being one shot over and over for half of it.

Ifchickenandnuts
Ifchickenandnuts
5 months ago
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Ifchickenandnuts
Ifchickenandnuts
6 months ago
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He guided chakra into the eye. Under Shizune and Ina's gaze, the diamond-shaped mark of the Yin Seal on his forehead split down the middle. The flesh slowly parted, revealing a blood-red eye. The ice-blue diamond mark of the Yin Seal was now split in two, framing the Sharingan on either side, giving it a unique look.

Overdrafting the Future, Starting in Naruto

Overdrafting the Future, Starting in Naruto

Anime & Comics · Hollowborn

Ifchickenandnuts
Ifchickenandnuts
7 months ago
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(T/N: Just so you don't get your hopes up — Mystic Eyes of Death Perception was a mistake by the author. He meant the same ability as "Deadly Gaze," so it should be called "Mystic Eyes of Petrification." This will be clarified later.)

Hogwarts: Chill, I’m Not That Riddle

Hogwarts: Chill, I’m Not That Riddle

Movies · Coreal

Ifchickenandnuts
Ifchickenandnuts
8 months ago
Posted

It's a fine read, everything makes sense and seems to be fine grammatically, but the story drags itself down by characters repeating the same thing over and over again, several paragraphs could be turned into one if the same lines weren't repeated over and over. Becomes a real slog to read through

Ifchickenandnuts
Ifchickenandnuts
8 months ago
Commented

Are his genitals gonna have a tiny hashirama face on them?

"The First Hokage's cells, and... the Sharingan!"

Naruto: Starting with Yhwach's Template

Naruto: Starting with Yhwach's Template

Anime & Comics · Kaizo26

Ifchickenandnuts
Ifchickenandnuts
8 months ago
Commented

Bro this is like ten chapters ahead

Chapter 151: This Is the Plan of Driving Away a Tiger by Letting in a Wolf

Naruto: I Became Tsunade's Husband and Took Over Konoha

Naruto: I Became Tsunade's Husband and Took Over Konoha

Book&Literature · atomelectron

Ifchickenandnuts
Ifchickenandnuts
8 months ago
Posted

The story is pleasant enough to read, the grammar and terminology is all correct, but it doesn't really go anywhere it just kind of drags itself along and becomes quite a tedious chore to read. It feels like the first 20 chapters could have been five and the rest of the story will probably follow the same trend

  • The Ritual of the Summoned Ones original

    The Ritual of the Summoned Ones

    Fantasy SYSTEM

    When humanity was on the brink and their Gods dying, a desperate attempt was made to save the survivors. A Ritual was created a Ritual so strong that it's survived the end of Humanity, that it survived the end of God's that created it. The Ritual of the Summoned Ones. This a story of one of them. Also posted on RoyalRoad

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