Webnovel Author: Ghostlywiz - Novel Collection

my mistake it's not the length it's the pacing of the story maybe that's got my concern

did the author split this chapter in half? if I'm not misunderstanding this chapter consisted of the teachers briefly talking and then the door being smashed, then an introduction. I think the author may be getting a little burned out writing at such quality and releasing twice a day. I'd recommend slowing down release, and writing a bit more, I mean this novel is really good but the chapters are premium, it's a little much, Thank you anyway, love the novel

honestly saw no problems with anything, this was just a really fun read. thanks author.

pyscho -masn

love the story, thanks author, keep trying just a bit longer in this loop of negatives

I'm not crazy you are, just because I hear the word more repeating doesn't mean I like this..baka

I'm convinced that these chapters are hypnotizing me, I read and read but it feels like it's never enough, it's almost too satisfying

yeah you show that final fantasy character, on another note, thanks for the chapters, suddenly finding there was no more was truly heartbreaking

sounds good, a binge a week, keeps the gods meek

ah yes, deary, do you mind getting in the oven to clean it, it will certainly help your martial arts

so you've really pushed us off this cliff hanger, neat

one right after the other, much appreciation for the chapters, but don't push yourself too hard, it seems like you've been through a lot, take it a little easy but don't forget about us

were still here, we took a seat on the cliff with a nice view of the mist. I apologize for your loss, I hope things start to go better for you.

I could definitely feel a change in the dialogue as it felt more fluent slightly, though I'm a bit biased since I enjoyed your dialogue since the start so I can't say much in form of criticism.

i would say the story got less complex with everything coming together, in a good way. Some the ngs in a story, in my opinion, should be left mysterious and unknown, such as demon magic, we don't need to know how it works, only what the result of it is, that way you don't get caught up in needless details to satisfy a few curious people. it also allows for a more open ended advancement in case you wanted to pull out say a trump card without it seemingly to come out of there butt. I'd say you pacing is good but excruciating. I guess just keep up the good work

always good stuff to be found here, this chapter felt pleasantly long, thanks for the chapter love you ;-)

the chapter lengths have certainly picked up, yet the cliff hangers still leaves us all addicted for more, thanks for read

good chapters lately, your on a roll starting from around chapter 1 to now, keep up the streak

it almost feels like the chapter was purposefully cut in half, it' makes for good suspense but it's just to short, my man's arrived, got possessed, went to the computer and... cliff hanger

no revisions but still quality, thanks for the chapter, just whish they could be longer