Pgimz
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Hi 🤓👋🏼 "Experience teaches wisdom. Learning to live beyond the limitations of my past ways."
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She Knew She Loved Him
4.5
It is no secret that love is an emotion that gets the heart beating. Whether it be rapidly, sometimes slowly, other times in a sweet rhythmic thump or even in a painful tone, we felt it all. We had an overall idea of what love was from watching many romance movies, to receiving love from family and friends. Yet still, we were enthralled at how some romance movies made our hearts pound for the characters sad, painful, and happy moments. We never once imagined we would get to experience this emotion. So strong, yet so passionate love brought us together. With entwined bodies, lips locking, soul-mating, we hopelessly found love. This heart-pounding, sweet sounding doom..doom..thump..thump that enveloped that small important and delicate muscle hiding behind our left breast; We found love. A love story of Zunnie Bai and Alexander Zi. How they found each other, fell in love and the people they had to overpower to be happy. [ The beautiful girl bit her lip as she reached her hand to rest them on his shoulders. Alex was hungry for her and sensing his man-hood erect all the way. He grabbed onto it and slid it inside her wetness. The girl moaned with pleasure, arched her back and bit her lip again. Just as he was about to thrust deeper into her, his alarm went off. Still groggy from his dream, he picked up his phone and hit the 'stop' button to his alarm. Under the sheets, his shaft stood erect and throbbing. "What in the actual hell was that dream all about." He mumbled as he got up. ]
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Moncher19: Wishing You A splendid weekend dearie.....at last she is convinced of her love....am happy she finally realized how much she loves him
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Moncher19: Wishing You A splendid weekend dearie.....at last she is convinced of her love....am happy she finally realized how much she loves him
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Moncher19: Nice one Babe....I love your maturity....
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Moncher19: A******w....sorry about Your health.. Trust U are feeling better now??? Be strong dearie
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Moncher19: A******w....sorry about Your health.. Trust U are feeling better now??? Be strong dearie
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Moncher19: I love the plot... the flow....the suspense... the diction and character presentation...what more can one ask for. .can't wait for new updates....thumbs up. The Author really got it in one piece....
She Knew She Loved Him
Book_Keeper: Hello, your novel has been reviewed by Virtual Bookshelf.
A review excerpt is as follows:
Technical:
Overall, it’s good. There’re some typos that can easily fixed with proofreading. One awkward phrasing, “get the crème de la crème of him,” I’m assuming this means “get the best of him,” if so, “crème de la crème” isn’t the right phrasing to replace “best.” The former is a noun trying to replace an adjective, so this would be incorrect. “Crème de la crème” is more literally, the best person or thing, so using it in this context would awkwardly mean, “get the best of the best of him,” which has a different meaning. Also, this different use of language doesn’t fit in with the rest of how the story is mainly written.
Characters:
Introductions are short but satisfactory as long as more of their personality shines through later events.
Realistically, it seems off that she’s so preoccupied with the new neighbor to even dream of said person as a puppy. What is realistic is that even after Alex saw Zunnie several times, he didn’t go crazy love at first sight must chase down this woman.
Alex has a bit more personality, and his character is slightly more realistic than Zunnie, at least. The choice of Little Thing seems somewhat derogatory as I doubt women would want to be called that by their lover.
The other characters follow the typical tropes of *******, jealous girl or rival, kind family member, friend, etc. .........(cont.)
The full review: https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/02/12/review-she-knew-she-loved-him-pgimz/
Thank you!She Knew She Loved Him
Book_Keeper: Hello, your novel has been reviewed by Virtual Bookshelf.
A review excerpt is as follows:
Technical:
Overall, it’s good. There’re some typos that can easily fixed with proofreading. One awkward phrasing, “get the crème de la crème of him,” I’m assuming this means “get the best of him,” if so, “crème de la crème” isn’t the right phrasing to replace “best.” The former is a noun trying to replace an adjective, so this would be incorrect. “Crème de la crème” is more literally, the best person or thing, so using it in this context would awkwardly mean, “get the best of the best of him,” which has a different meaning. Also, this different use of language doesn’t fit in with the rest of how the story is mainly written.
Characters:
Introductions are short but satisfactory as long as more of their personality shines through later events.
Realistically, it seems off that she’s so preoccupied with the new neighbor to even dream of said person as a puppy. What is realistic is that even after Alex saw Zunnie several times, he didn’t go crazy love at first sight must chase down this woman.
Alex has a bit more personality, and his character is slightly more realistic than Zunnie, at least. The choice of Little Thing seems somewhat derogatory as I doubt women would want to be called that by their lover.
The other characters follow the typical tropes of *******, jealous girl or rival, kind family member, friend, etc. .........(cont.)
The full review: https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/02/12/review-she-knew-she-loved-him-pgimz/
Thank you!She Knew She Loved Him
decca1237: Hello dear author... I am enjoying your novel so far. Please keep updating. 😘
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HaydieTheQueen: Are u hv ***** syndrome???
Gahhhh tht girl dormant to please her feeling😬😒She Knew She Loved Him · C54
msdoc: Hahahaha..what a face slap!!goog goog authorsama..she shoupd be faceslapped this early..delusional ***** talia!!
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Lizabelle88: Am here with my powerstone...coz I miss Zunnie!
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HaydieTheQueen: Oh the LIGHTBULB is coming blerrrŕrr that woman where her dignity😫😕
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Chocolate_Cosmos: Loool at lightbulb, more like an annoying pest 😏
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msdoc: What a cliffhanger!!is it that delusional ex girlfriend or the perverted actress?
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manideepa7462_: Please don't pause dear author... it's going good as I said before .
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neha84: O pls don't stop author....atleast give one chapter a day...too hooked on to this novel...can't wait for more chapters
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Lizabelle88: OMG! why did you paused Author, I missed Zunnie! Love your story...please don't give up on it, no matter what!
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Book_Keeper: Hello, your novel has been assessed by Virtual Bookshelf.
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After ten additional chapters, you may request to be assessed again. Queued for review.
Thank you, and the best of luck on your writing endeavors! :)She Knew She Loved Him · C53
