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BLACK_ASH

male LV 5

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2018-09-30 Joined India

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Good for you author. That's what everyone forgets. To leave time for oneself. To relax. Good Job.

I took advantage of this end of the year to rest a bit, and man, it was good. Took a few good days off. No university, no worries. Spent a few days in the hospital, but nothing serious. Reinstalled Minecraft after about 5 years, and damn, did that relax me. Anyway, I'm back.

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You want him to change to a ok character and at the same time keep his dark side. It's hard to let go of the past and he has changed so much due to his new life with everyone. But it feels as if you are forcing him to keep his evil part. It's good for character development, but later you will find it hard to mold the character to your expectations.

Simon knew he was not a good person, but he had those he cared about. Were there many? Yes. And none of them were in this world, but now he found himself very attached to some people in this place, making him feel for the first time the warmth of a long-lost family. But not even that would stop his plans.

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I don't think his life span is affected. What Luffy had was the devil fruit. But our MC has the same power but as a quirk. Their body is adjusted to the quirk as it manifest. Also you can train your quirk like a muscle. Izuku has side effects of the quirk because it was given to him. So technically the MC should not be affected.
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