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it's not me, it's the world mistake. Do you really expect romance in a cruel world. I'm too lazy to brainstorm ideas about romance in such a world-setting.

This is a world of might is right, so other than talent and appearance, it's really amount to nothing. The girls seek security and power, which could only be given by the main character, and even pure love stories are about handsome beauty CEO and a lot of misunderstanding and teasing.

Did you ever read a story about a poor bastard with an ugly face ended up with a beautiful rich CEO because he moved her heart?! maybe if he has some shady blackmail materials, but other than that I really haven't.

As for the mc nature. I'm just trying to make it more fleshed out and real. humans are ever-changing and I tried to mold his character through his experiences in the xianxia world.

He won't be a villain, but a standard modern man. do good and bad. View More

Ricardo_Miloos: Like the novel, didn't like the execution of the MC's romance. It feels like the author doesn't know the way through a woman's heart, and would only use the MC's power and handsome looks, there we're only a small number of grammer mistakes that you would not notice. Not saying the fanfics sucks balls, just saying the author could have improved the romance. And then there's this feeling of smugginess and arrogance coming from a office worker, it feels like the MC lost his kindness when he gained power. I hope not.

Martial God Asura - Fan Fiction.
1 month ago
hm, his arrogant side seems to surprise some people, but it's actually normal. He wanted to create some legend. You don't actually think he will act humbly in front of a piece of 'trashes' that doesn't even have heaven realm cultivation, and act like they are supreme genius. I intend to suppress their superiority. Seeing a 16 years old with a martial king realm is a way to break any arrogance inside them, and turning them tot he better. I want to add some karma and divinity stuff, to make the actions of the mc justifiable. After all, He is a modern man in a Xianxia world. he would need to explore it, and acting arrogant and all mighty is one of the experiences. The reason people hate Chu Feng after he went to the upper realm because he lost his edge and arrogance. He follow his 'papa' words, and look for acknowledgement, rather than revenge which while may be cliché it would have been more satisfying.

Li Qiye Per Ex, is super arrogant, but people like him, because he could back it.

Arrogance isn't really bad, but you need power to back it, and the mc obviously can. View More
Martial God Asura - Fan Fiction. · C18
1 month ago
sadly, I can't , as the work schedule is straining. chapter is above 3000 Characters which equal 3 chapters. View More

Ajden: More pls

Martial God Asura - Fan Fiction. · C18
1 month ago
well cultivation world is all about might and background. take Chu Feng per example, all his wives were attracted to his strength and talent. do you really think Zi Ling would even bother giving him a look just because he saved her from raping? I'm not really good with romance, so I fix the gap by 'handsome' label to make the story flow easily.
I'm actually trying making the mc discover the face of cultivation world. like his clan episode, or the change in Su Mei attitude, SU Hen selling his daughters, and even the azure founder trying to carry favor. View More

NulZilch: Not really. He would be abusing his power to humiliate antagonists by fucking their wives and daughters, not collecting wives or concubines.

Many authors write how evil and selfish the cultivation world is, but they don't explore it much aside from stating it being the reason MC/good guys were abused by everyone. Su rou and Su mei fell for him because he was powerful and they wanted to leech off him. So in the 2nd meeting of theirs they were happily giving away their virginty in a incestuous threesome(the time the spent together before it was barely an hour). Their father who sold them to him for power as well. I just want authors to explore this aspect more from MC perspective, because most of the time he's at the end of it in any story.

Martial God Asura - Fan Fiction. · C16
1 month ago
I'm not dropping the other novels. It's just I feel more comfortable with MGA. After all I'm writing for the sake of writing and I don't promise that I won't stop someday, but at least for now, I can still write. View More

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Martial God Asura - Fan Fiction. · C16
1 month ago
I'm at work right now. I'll be updating evening. Azure province and the tomb ark will son ended, View More
Martial God Asura - Fan Fiction. · C16
1 month ago
it's just about 3 months or so. It's only I was in daze, and copy/past the azure founder speech without paying attantion. View More

NulZilch: Really enjoyed the story and MC no nonsense attitude.

But, i wasn't able to get a sense of time and place. 1 year has passed and at best it felt like only few days. I also has trouble getting a sense of place because MC is at one place or another without explanation about it or it's position of world in general except it's name. I would suggest that mentioning time for readers sake would help. The places, and characters descriptions can just be taken from novel to reintroduce them to the reader as not everyone might remember all the details from the novel. My 2 cents.

Martial God Asura - Fan Fiction. · C15
1 month ago
I'm not planning any backstabbing, rather, building trust. so there will be no betrayal. Op and smooth journey, harem. View More

neymar: You should have given them the physique scripture at a later time especially for that scheming because he is just making his enemies powerful for no reason

Martial God Asura - Fan Fiction. · C8
1 month ago
never read MGA before? anyway...
Spirit Realm
Origin Realm
Profound Realm
Heaven Realm
Martial Lord Realm
Martial King Realm
Half-Emperor Realm
Emperor Realm
Half-Ancestor Realm
Ancestor Realm
that's enough for you. View More

selfinsert: level cultivation

Martial God Asura - Fan Fiction. · C1
1 month ago
https://***.pinterest.com/pin/563161128380520755/?nic=1

Pirate costume. View More
Fiction Worlds Journey · C7
1 month ago
Guys, help with Cool Anime characters costumes. I just can't think of any. View More
Fiction Worlds Journey · C7
1 month ago

HiikiNito: Well since it will be a multiverse, a huge harem would be the best, but this is just my opinion...^^ What matters here is your choice, do whatever you want, I will be waiting for the new chapters.!

Fiction Worlds Journey · C4
1 month ago
I really can't say. Robin-Empress are planned but for others it will be depending on my mood. well it's harem I guess as there are 2 girls planned. View More

HiikiNito: Will this be an harem? I'm asking it since there is a question mark...

Fiction Worlds Journey · C4
1 month ago
It's a fan fiction dude, its meant to be this way... if you don't like it, then don't read it, it's that simple. View More

NulZilch: *sigh* why did without it would not be another power wank, MC wank, coincidence over coincidence trip? It's the exact same as the last only difference is scale of OPness is lower. Can have multiple DF without any negative? Sure, suit yourself. Have another MC littered with powers. It's not like one mastered power is better than multiple unmastered one. I'm out.

Fiction Worlds Journey · C4
1 month ago
it's a waste working when you could just seduce bulma and use her money as her rightful husband... :p View More
New Timeline · C4
1 month ago
man I cringe at the part where he talk about not standing evil people and he was their ally *shiver* The scene of his hair dancing in the wind reminded me of an Indian movie hahaha View More
New Timeline · C3
1 month ago
he doesn't seem to know anything about this, which I find sad a little. anyway continue reading.. View More
New Timeline · C1
1 month ago
he is doing it for the shards. that's very clear. In another time, he may overlook them, but because everyone is in the wrong, and it's a war. He was a third party, so killing both sides is fair. View More

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Fiction Worlds Journey · C3
1 month ago
Have you seen Tang San in his asura form? you would get it if you do. View More

NulZilch: 😂 why does all your characters have to gave technicolor hair and eyes? I don't get this fascination.

Fiction Worlds Journey · C2
1 month ago

Dangeroustoxin: sorry guys, for 2 days, I will not update this. I just found a job, so I need to change the schedule to evenings rather than mornings. but don't worry, I'm not dropping this, rather I have plenty of ideas, so there will be no author block for a lot of time.
Thank you for reading this.

Douluo Dalu 2 - Fan Fiction · C22
1 month ago
sorry guys, for 2 days, I will not update this. I just found a job, so I need to change the schedule to evenings rather than mornings. but don't worry, I'm not dropping this, rather I have plenty of ideas, so there will be no author block for a lot of time.
Thank you for reading this. View More
Douluo Dalu 2 - Fan Fiction · C22
1 month ago
ahhh I'm getting annoyed seeing grayfia acting all mighty!! View More
Playing with other Supernaturals · C101
1 month ago
juzi is the girl orange who he met in that exchange? his son's mother if I recall correctly. Yep, deal :p View More

Dao_of_Balance: You better also have him get Juzi, otherwise it’s such a wasted opportunity.

Douluo Dalu 2 - Fan Fiction · C21
1 month ago
it's gotten even worse. He didn't end up with any other girl, the pitiful part is that he is now babysitting the heroines from Danmachi. Every time I read about the girl 'system', I feel repulsed. View More

Overkill: Yah I think so too... System kinda like a part of you... Marry system mean single forever!!!

A Lazy Man's Adventure · C37
1 month ago
well, I'm planning to make a time travel arc. so basically tang san should have met the mc in his timeline. but it was just foreshadowing from me for people who don't read the comments section. View More

Dao_Master211: Im confused. When did mc meet tang san

Douluo Dalu 2 - Fan Fiction · C21
1 month ago
that was actually the plan. I was even going beyond expectations and considering even her mother :p View More

Julian19871: Let Huo Yuhao get Qian Renxue from the past, that would be cool as well.

Douluo Dalu 2 - Fan Fiction · C21
1 month ago
in the future :p View More

MichaelLouis: When was the time travel?

Douluo Dalu 2 - Fan Fiction · C21
1 month ago
that's if tang san had the power to do it. and also tang san already met with the mc before. (time travel arc), that why he is shivering. View More

Blablabla45: Are sure you go for wang dong?
Because in original mc have a son with difference woman and tan san almost killed the son and mc.
And the son is baby. Tan san is really know for his kindness and he is going kill baby for that reason.

Douluo Dalu 2 - Fan Fiction · C21
1 month ago
he didn't play with her yet. View More

ordinary_people: Where the scene with xiotao, I quite like her

Douluo Dalu 2 - Fan Fiction · C20
1 month ago
that's the scientific one, the literature one is the opposite!! I read this on more than one r-18 novel. I'm just using it, as it sounds arousing. thanks for the information by the way. it means a lot ahahaha View More

Dao_of_Balance: Uhh! 🙄 Not sure how to say this, so I will just come out and say it. The stamen is the male fertilizing organ of a flower. So in other word that’s a guys penis. 😐

Douluo Dalu 2 - Fan Fiction · C20
1 month ago
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