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i've been reading normal and better mcs recently, this seems to worsen my mood, mc here acts like hes 14, character development is too slow or non existent, because he keeps taking same wrong choices again n again, trying to be someone hes not

it may sound a bit cliche, but its definitely interesting and worth reading! //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

Is this rewrite? whats the difference from your old one? will he still lose his sister? will he still going to leave his city and business? will he still try to act as his own master?