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Love the novel, saddly I'm kinda unhappy with the character development, more focused on the companions than other characters. Now, I'm not saying that they should have a love life, since that would be weird, in the end they're still summoned beings and should respond ASAP when needed, but maybe have a bit more interaction with Cain (harem ending wouldn't be strange in this type of novel, nor forced). Would like to see more reactions when Cain is close to dying too, there's 2 chapters where he almost dies and every1 is like: "Cool, should've done this thing before leaving", like wtf? ** Spoilers I'm talking about the time he was almost assasinated by a legendary assasin in a dungeon and no1 seemed to care and there was no special reaction or concern shown Second time is when he entered a dungeon with a Divine dragon lvl 3xx and the dragon summon Laura, was like should've scanned a few more forms so I can evolve before leaving... Both weird reactions to dangerous situations that I feel should've more weight in the story.

Some games introduce a PK system tho (doesn't happen in novels), the system makes it so that when a player kills another players their name changes colour and while they are with this "rebuff" they have a higher chance of dropping items on death and lose more exp, this could be implemented to this novel to get rid of the players killing each other till lvl0. Maybe mix it with a reputation system that when players are affected by the colour change they will be disliked by NPC or only implement an exp penalty if the players get killed on PVE, while doing a time out penalty for PVP + item drops (after dying in PVP players respawn with a temporary stat debuff and they have to stay in the city for 5-10m idk...). Anyway I just think there should be better ways to deal with death penalties. (PS: I also hate the troupe of killing some1 till they reset their accounts) PS: I'm writing this on my cell phone so pardon my English mistakes, commas and other errors, ty.

Hmmmm, sure ppl are killing each other in a different timeline that doesn't exist anymore :/. Btw It's not because it's slow paced, the problem is that it's very generic and I feel like the class would make it less generic normal VRMMO RPG novel... I understand that the game is evolving, but to be honest death penalty is a very basic thing in any game, anything really doesn't even have to be a game, the concept of reward and punishment is well know in anything we do, in this game while there's a reward for killing mobs and doing quests, there's 0 punishment for failure.

It's quite an interesting story, however the game is very generic. I'll admit that it you managed to hold the essence of the novel, with the jokes and other things, but some characteristics of the game just annoy me too much, Ex: No death penalty, if there's one it's close to nothing, not having a punishment for dying is hella annoying ngl, death holds 0 weight in this story unless you butcher some1 like the protagonist did a few times, but then again that's extra work for the person doing the killing... Another thing, the game has been very generic so far, wisih it would change somehow, maybe an epic quest line or something like that, idk we came here to see the class change, but the MC is just doing what every1 else is doing and that kinda sucks, sure he has more information than the others, but nothing new is happening...

Amazingly good novel, brings back that good feeling that Oracle Path used to give. Interesting story, protagonist kinda annoys me sometimes, but no1 is perfect so...

You sure did, read 200 chapters of your novel should at least give my real opinion instead of just saying that I didn't like the novel :P. Originally I separated my points with paragraphs but webnovel ate them so... Wasn't very constructive since I got heated while writting it, but then again, that happens sometimes...