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I don't understand, what was the point of mentioning that the mc broke through and smelled bad if the author wasn't going to make a reference to his smell in the next scene?

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The author should take some lessons from the MC and learn to read and write English.

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Replied to rishit1

your level of english is almost the same as the authors, how quaint.

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he has no clue where he lives because he's never navigated by sight before.

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This author must be extremely dumb.

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2yr

Replied to NeftyDarkWolf_161

Correction, the Author needs a lot more experience.*

"That's...correct."

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2yr

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These people really out here thinking they're hallucinating at the sight of anything strange. Wonder how that works? Maybe there's cocaine in the air? It wouldn't surprise me, considering the kind of ridiculous things the author has written so far, he probably is a drug addict.

"Probably just a hallucination. Don't worry about it," I said to her reassuringly. She agreed and moved to turn on the lights.

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You feel that way because the Author of the novel you're in is completely unoriginal and has no talent for writing.

"How come I suddenly felt inferior when I met his eyes just now. That should be impossible, it's definitely a mistake" Jonas was alarmed in his heart. When Grey looked at him a moment ago, he felt something he only felt from his seniors in the Academy. It was a feeling of inferiority, he rarely feels this among his age group.

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