hehe~ you can be proud author-san I basically only read novels of the genre unlimited stream, like shoujo grand summoning, Illimitable Until Death, Holistic Fantasy etc... (I read the entire raws of the three of them btw) and until now I am proud to say that I have read at least hundreds of novels of this genre and your story is the first one that I am reading in this qidian international. (I had only read on the chinese website of qidian and faloo)
I didn't even knew that it already had this kind of story here, which honestly made me happy since I am already tired of reading chinese ones, with all the "Are you courting death!!" and all, not talking about the inexplicable racism that exist in some Chinese novels (both toward foreigners, which sometimes a try to ignore but still makes me somewhat offended and also towards the Japaneses protagonist)
Although it isn't that original the functions of the system of you novel as I already saw a lot of novels with some similar functions , the functions that you decided to use are between the ones that I like the most, like quest and missions, a shop where you can redemption, etc... it also earned some more points from me.
The start of the novel was also interesting I remember having read a novel with the mc also being locked by some organization and suffering from experiments and being freed (dying) and going to anime worlds, but the twist that you put with his mystery lineage was kinda of new to me and I liked it too.
And what I have to say about your choice of danmachi as the first world? well, it wasn't all a choice that much since it was a pool but... I really liked the story and the world of Dungeon Ni Deai, I not only watched the anime but before watching it I had already caught up with the English translations of the light novel so I have a lot of time invested in it, what turns my impression deeper and making me like it more so it's also a plus from me.
I am yet at the C12 currently and can't say much more about what I am yet to read but until now I am satisfied with what I am reading, continue doing a good work and the most important, Don't give up!! always remember that there is some people that like your novel, and although I can't say that it's perfect since it certainly isn't, you shouldn't care about some trolls that come to write a review without anything productive but only badmouthing your novel without any base and being rude towards your person, this kind of person you should just ignore.
bye bye author-san hehe~
Do you pretend in only one love interest in this world? I particularly prefer a harem, as long as it isn't brainless with the womans falling in love with no particular reason, the ones that I like the most in danmachi is of course hestia, the legal loli with big oppai since she is the one I have the biggest impression in the novel/anime, he being the first a join her familia I don't think it would be too hard to she liking him, not that with his personality he would make it knowing, I suppose that he would just join her familia because it's the family of the protagonist? and she being one of the gots that treats the familia really as a family. Ains as kuudere are my favorite kind of girl, to make she likes him I suppose that would be she seeing the progress of his strength? as she has an obsession for strength she would become curious about him, wanting to know why he can become strong so fast, then as she pass more time with him she would start to slowly become curious as why he desires to become strong, and curious about others things related to him, and will start to care about him, and for last my third favorite of danmachi would be Ryuu Lion, the elf cold beauty, the starting point to make her start to likes him would be an opportunity to our MC touching her and she not reacting negativity to his touch since I believe that the MC is innocent and won't cause a adverse reaction to his touch, I also think that maybe his skill Yggdrasil favor maybe will have an affect related to it, ah I just got carried away and wrote too much, but since I have already written it I won't delete it, so bear with me hehe~
he is speaking portuguese, I will translate it for you, "Why don't you make him buy some cool abilities like shunpo (high speed movement of shinigami of the anime bleach) or sonido (the equivalent of shunpo but instead of shinigami it's from arrancars) or the hollow mask of kurosaki ichigo (From all this we can see that he absolutely likes bleach kkk), he has so many points but doesn't buy it right...
Nier_Xue: What amigo? I don't understand.. Requescat in pace me...
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