JamesAnthony1999

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Replied to Xerotia

Since I first made this comment this was the first time ever that I managed to go over 1 month before getting another like.

Stranger 4: I dream of you every night, please impregnate me mister Universe. Please Fuc...

Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]

Book&Literature · MisterImmortal

●Emperor of Death is a Stay at Home Dad - Cultivaton Novel with an American MC. A man was accidentally sent to a World of Cultivation and dies in that world but he comes back to his original world and discovers that he has a daughter.

Star Wars: The Holy Empire

Movies · Necromancer_God

JamesAnthony1999

2mth

Replied to antonio_folino

You're right, got my math wrong. Thanks for the correction!

Instantly the gravity around him became 20 times greater meaning he was now lifting 30 tons. Not to mention that he now weighed 3,600 pounds making this even harder.

The Knight of Ruin(DxD)

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

JamesAnthony1999

2mth

Commented

Him weighing 3600 pounds under 20 times gravity... am I wrong of does that mean he only weighs 130 pounds... dude must be a stick to only weight that much at his height right? Or am I missing something?

Instantly the gravity around him became 20 times greater meaning he was now lifting 30 tons. Not to mention that he now weighed 3,600 pounds making this even harder.

The Knight of Ruin(DxD)

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

JamesAnthony1999

2mth

Commented

Part of the chapter where Jon is at the top of the wall is repeated. Only a few paragraphs but if you could,e please edit and fix them. Thanks for the chapter!

ch 47 Chapter 47 - The Most Arrogant Folk! 02.

Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic - ASOIAF/GOT

Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague

JamesAnthony1999

2mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter! I have a correction. In this chapter you forgot to translate weirwood. Could you please fix this? Other than that love the story so far!

ch 43 Chapter 43 - The Beginning of a Nation! 03

Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic - ASOIAF/GOT

Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague

JamesAnthony1999

2mth

Commented

reeling*

Observing the movement from the line, I concluded that the hook was secure and that I could start feeling in the line, so I did just that. With Fortuna cheering me on, I began to bring in the catch, and after a minute-long "struggle", I pulled the capture onto the deck. I had to admit that I was pleasantly surprised when I saw that our/my first capture of the day was actually a Luvdisc.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

JamesAnthony1999

2mth

Commented

How far beyond the wall?

A few meters beyond the Wall, 290 AC, the same moment.

Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic - ASOIAF/GOT

Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague

JamesAnthony1999

2mth

Commented

Last chapter I noticed a mistake but couldn't comment on it because of Webnovel not letting me comment on that paragraph. Back at Icehill farm and even before that it was mentioned that Caraxes was female and smothered Jon, last chapter they were called a male. Bot sure which it is supposed to be but should probably be fixed for consistency. Also so far in the novel giant wolf has been used instead of direwolf which is what they are actually called. Thanks for the great novel so far!

Author here: Did I make any mistakes in the past chapters? Yesterday, I translated 9 chapters, so it's possible. I finished exhausted yesterday.

Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic - ASOIAF/GOT

Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague

JamesAnthony1999

3mth

Commented

You need to put the "." after the first 0 otherwise that entire thing can also be read as just 0.1 or a 1 in 10 aka 10% chance...

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A Certain Pokemon Shop(Re-Write)

Anime & Comics · LazyWriterZ

JamesAnthony1999

3mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter!

ch 63 Chapter 63: The System and Awakening

Reincarnated as a Jade Beauty?!

Fantasy · DaoistDumbledore

JamesAnthony1999

3mth

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Can I just say that I hate people using swimmer physique like it's the pinnacle. It's not, it's a body suited for underwater activity and moving through water efficiently not for fighting or combat. How would being a good swimmer and having a physique best suited to swimming make you a good fighter? It doesn't. Just say a MMA fighters physique instead. Its more accurate and it is also more relevant to what they are training in. Unless the MC is aiming to be an Olympic swimmer instead of someone who can fight criminals it's the wrong description and it's used in 99% of novels when talking about how amazingly fit someone is. Sorry for the rant but it bugs me every time I see it.

"Is everything ready Cortana?" A tall and muscular Bruce asked as he laid down his lean and muscular swimmer's physique on top of a weird-looking egg-shaped machine.

DC: I am Bruce Wayne

Anime & Comics · God_Doom

JamesAnthony1999

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Lake? I think the last sentence needs am edit :p

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Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

JamesAnthony1999

4mth

Replied to Kamikaze_Eagle

Adds some realism though whether the author did or not. People forget things and makes the mc more human and not perfect.

Now that I was considering the issue, it would probably have been better for Bruce to wait as well considering his high (absurd) racial value as a Golbat. Yet, it slipped my mind at the time, and there was nothing I could do about it now, so I just made a mental note to keep that in mind for the future, before moving on to the rest of Gaara's status sheet.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

JamesAnthony1999

4mth

Commented

This could go in the volume 0/ auxiliary chapters area instead of the main story.

ch 78 Roulette results and statuses

A random pokemon journey

Video Games · loskro

JamesAnthony1999

4mth

Replied to aranu_bro

Isn't that a significant portion of most history curriculums in most countries? Like 50-80% at least depending on which country you live in probably is stuff that isn't relevant unless you want a career in a field about history. I dont remember much of my history lessons but here in the UK there was a huge focus on the world wars so I know a few random facts about them and such. I personally prefer medieval history but wasnt a lot of focus on it other than early in the curriculum. I think making a printing press would be pretty simple in theory, would take a few tries to figure out the best way to do it but it would just be lining up stamps in some sort of metal or wood holder that let's you add and remove them, then just putting it in a press and there you go. Would probably take ages to make all the individual stamps for letters or words but yeah, it should work fine once you have tried several ways out and expect the first few to fail or not work 100% at first. As long as you know how an object works theoretically then you can usually figure out how to make one with trial and error. Knowing that they exist and work means you're not going through the trouble of something new just figuring out how to make something that already exists which removes a lot of the problems you might face.