Gaulix

4mth

Commented

The classics, in every variation of Naruto, are sitting somewhere in a dark corner, Danzo curses the Hokage, saying I need an MC for the root

The ninja was dismissed and disappeared instantly as soon as he received the order. Danzo, in his frustration, muttered to himself, "Damn Hiruzen, you may protect the boy from me, but he is destined to serve Konoha in the shadows as a member of Root." With these words, Danzo closed his eyes and concealed himself in the shadows of the dark environment.

Naruto: Self-Evolution

Anime & Comics · SharonMeuToba

Gaulix

1yr

Posted

I don’t understand where this fanfic gets such ratings from, the ability is interesting, the story is weak. The unknown things in the first 10 chapters completely discourage the desire to read further, because it seems that they take me for an idiot who is forced to believe what is happening there, and that everything gets away with mс

My Hero: Quirk Evolution

Anime & Comics · ZeOwl

Gaulix

1yr

Commented

Why does reading chapters make my eyes bleed? Does the brain flow out of the ears?

ch 0 5 Chapter 5-Green Magic Hoverboard

(MTL)Marvel: All the Famous Scenes Were Exposed By Me

Movies · Muiyuki_Snowfall

Gaulix

1yr

Commented

I initially did not like the Gin character, just some random old man, on a random island conveniently having everything that an MC needs, after you see such characters you say: Oh, how convenient... And now it causes only laughter, especially these ridiculous plans in the background, which if removed at all will not change anything, in my opinion, this only spoils the story.

ch 14 13. The Grand Plan

One Piece: Nemo's Golden Lottery

Anime & Comics · Zeckyll11

Gaulix

2yr

Posted

There is too much unnecessary pathos and cruelty, the author has confused the works, One piece is not about cruelty, it is about adventures and movements to a dream. And here, as usual, the main character is offended by something, I will become the strongest because the author's program is embedded in my brain, I will be friends with all the pirates, but at the same time I will kill all the non-key mobs by cutting them into two. Because of this ambivalent attitude to chapter 10, I decided that I had enough of this fan fiction.

One Piece: Kenshin's Journey

Anime & Comics · Seth08

Gaulix

2yr

Posted

From the very beginning of reading, there were vague doubts, especially at the moment of chambord islands, when I reached qiwuhai, everything fell into place, and I dropped this work in advance until blood flowed from my eyes.

One Piece : I Am Really Crocodile ?

Anime & Comics · SLIKOH

Gaulix

2yr

Commented

In general, the genetics of the MHA world itself does not allow you to stay in the body for more than 1 quirk, this can be seen on failed nomus, people who are forcibly given new quirks and they either die, or their quirks evolve and change(or they physically change). Why was it necessary to play the card of three forces, it would be more interesting to see how his choice of three led to the merger and creation of one, full-fledged force, then the author would not have to write every time that they are three, but different and weak, and not at all quirks, but super soldiers.

ch 0 7 Getting to know more and the battle for the TITLE.

MHA: Minor Quirk System ( almost having no quirk)

Anime & Comics · X_x_INFINITY_x_X

Gaulix

2yr

Commented

That is, all readers know that he has quirks given to him by the system, but the rest of the world(fan fiction) will assume that he does not have quirks? And most likely it will be served as a gratuitous kid becomes a hero, watch for free without registration and SMS.

(A/N)- How is the chapter development? Any advice and suggestion, please mention them in the comments. So I want to focus a bit more on MC. As the systems said at first, all quirks are low potential quirks. They are tough to develop and upgrade like general quirks, which are like a part of your body which Aizawa says as. MC has two legendary skills, they are high potential skills, but their advancement is the toughest. Learning them and making them a part of you is different, remember. MC won't try to get OneForAll or any other quirks and his system gives him the quirks which make him super-soldier or similar but his quirk in the school administration forum and hero license will be nill/none/(empty).