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The theme is interesting, but the way it is executed leaves a lot to be desired, the chapters need editing. But more problematic than that, the MC's personality has nothing to do with Jinwoo, it seems that someone (generic) went into the body of the shadow monarch and now tries to live like him, and without intelligence too... Funny... I expected something similar to the DXD:Golden fanfic... and really if you include jinwoo it would make a very interesting finfic, I hope the author is successful in this endeavor hahaha

No, there is no Yuri, I don't know the number of women for sure, there are many but I don't know the exact number. And yes, his aunt enters the harem, which takes a hell of a long time to happen, near the end in this case. I'm not going to lie, this novel could very easily have been a sequel, but it all depends on the author, as some of the girls weren't developed until the end (sleeping with the MC) and the ending was kind of rushed.

It was an interesting journey, with ups and downs, but with an emotional and somehow perfect ending? I thought there could be more, you know, more women, more wonderful and exciting moments... But like everything in this life that has a beginning, there is also an ending, and in my opinion it was what it had to be (good).

A very interesting proposal, the grammar is very good, the development of the story so far is excellent. The mix of LOTM and HP, like other worlds, is something different here, it draws a lot of attention, it is a very well written fanfic. (Now from what I read there will be romance, but the question remains will there be a harem?)

The beginning, in this case, the volume (worm) was a bit overwhelming, because not only is I a fan or I know the worm line, but after it goes to the other world it becomes much more interesting and I say that the fanfic so far is very good. I hope you continue until the end, your fanfic is really good, I'll definitely be following the development of this story!

I stopped at chapter 1020. This fanfic does not deserve its 4+ star rating, I think 3 or 3.5 is already too much for it, because the story has many errors after the beginning chapters, continuation errors, word duplication errors, errors of repetition, I find the story at certain points exciting but all and spoiled with the secondary characters and the protagonist himself who has no physical or psychological development, I find it funny that everything that is developed in the first arc (danmachi) does not do anything difference in the next arc (nasuverse), so where is the development of the prota??, I'm tired of seeing the prota have progress as a being in general for 5 chapters later he continues to do the same shit he had done before (Unpleasant to read ), but not only that but also in a world that should be much darker it simply becomes a joke in this fanfic, there is no feeling that the protagonist is in real danger in the world and neither are the girls he has around him, the I think it's important to declare here the prota is an avowed and dependent pussy Zé addicted to the women around him and also to any other random woman who is in his favorite style line (bucetero), it's okay to have affection and empathy for others, but the business becomes problematic when it becomes dependence and addiction, as well as protects him with all his "knowledge" that he is always declared to have and available to him at any time through his system "The Path" in most cases that several problems could be avoided just by using this knowledge he doesn't use it and doesn't even use it in fact, everything is solved by everyone around him or by the women around him, and they also don't let the prota grow, making him compress himself into a bubble of false happiness imposed by nothing but women's desires in wanting him to get hurt or "broken" mentally, for never really developing in all that time that passed in the first arc he continues to do shit in the beginning of the second arc and certainly what happened in the first arc arc is being repeated and should continue for the next arcs, I can't see even an iota of experience the protagonist has accumulated in the 150+ years he apparently has in the second arc, pure bullshit, the only real advantage of this fanfic is the number of chapters compared to others on this site!. And finally, if you are in doubt whether or not you are going to read this fanfic, I recommend that you go after something else, as there are fanfic with fewer chapters and much better developed!. I can write a lot more things about why this fanfic is so bad (In the case of the first arc), but as they say the first impression is the one that counts if the danmachi arc with more than 1000+ cap wasn't that good I don't see why I would read the next arc that shouldn't even come close to the number of chapters in the first arc!